Book SIX of the Twilight Saga

Hey everyone! I finally wrote the first chapter of the new book after Eternal Sun, I hope you enjoy. Please read and comment.

BUT FIRST

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Book Six of the Twilight Saga

Chapter 1- This is the Life.. or afterlife (RENESMEE POV)

When we finally arrived in Rio de Janeiro, we got on a boat to go to the island. When we got to the island I was surprised at what i saw. I have been to the island just once, we went about three years ago. It has changed so much since then. Grandpa bought the the whole space around the first island. Now there is four different islands, with four huge houses.

“There is a house for everyone, so we do not have to share. We own all the land around us, so we don’t have to worried about being seen. The cleaning lady comes on Wednesday, so we need to be careful then.” Grandpa explained.

“We can hunt in the forest around us, no one goes in their because of the wild animals.” Grandpa continued.

Everyone looked so happy. Emmett was smiling, but I could tell he was upset. I was thinking maybe Jake and I could stay with him for the night, just he is not alone. Jake went to change, he wanted to know if the pack was going to join is on Isle Esme.

“The pack is going to stay in Port Angles for right now, just to protect everyone from La Push, they said they will call if the war moves into Port Angels. They think the war is going to be done soon, there has been a lot of fires coming from Forks forest.” Jake said, quite happily.

The was a vampire war just a few days ago. The Volturi coven broke up and started a war in our home. I had to run away with Jake because some of them wanted to kill me. Something happened, but I don't know what, made my family leave and decide to not fight in the war. Now we are all together again, well without Rose, and on vacation. I walked towards Emmett, I didn’t want him to be alone.

“Hey Emmett, maybe we can hang out tonight, I didn’t get my own house, so someone needs to share.” I said smiling.

“Well of course Nessie Bear, we can watch movies, or hunt, or do what you want.” he answered, sounding happy that I offered.

“Okay, just me and you. Or do you want to invite Jake.”

“Invite Jake, we could all have fun. You guys will probably have more fun at my place anyway, your mom and dad are a little protective.”

“A little? Your funny Emmett, and we should go hunting, I don’t remember the last time I hunted.

“Sounds great, its going to be a fun night. I need to talk to you about Rose anyway.” Emmett explained.

I really was anxious to hear about what happened to her. They said she was okay, so I know she is not dead. But then where is she?

“When do you think we could talk. I think it should just be me, you and Jake. I can feel whatever happened is bad, things don’t usually upset. I can see it in your eyes Em, your upset.

“Lets go talk Nessie, I will drive you and Jake to my house. Go say goodnight to your parents first though.” Emmett said.

I grabbed Jake’s hand and ran to my parents.

“Mom, dad do you mind if I spent the night with uncle Emmett? I think he needs to be around people, considering all the couples got a house” I asked.

“No problem Renesmee, just made sure Emmett knows you and Jake are there. And for you Jake, I think you should sleep on the couch.” Dad said. Mom and dad gave me a hug and then laughed when Jake hugged them.

Jake and I walked off to meet Emmett on the boat, I was nervous to hear the upcoming news.

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Permalink Reply by mrs.black on June 28, 2010 at 5:24pm

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah r u insane ?? srsly ?? u cant stop like that !! look young lady u hv to choices
1st , u better write asap
2nd, u better write asap !!
u hv to choose!!! hehehe (6) anyways i swear i cant w8 so to rescure me !! plz write asap !! and keep me updated !
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Permalink Reply by Shelby on June 29, 2010 at 11:40pm

Hey everyone, okay so please dont hate me! The new chapter is up, please read and comment! Thanks <3 :)

Chapter Five- Someone will Pay (Edwards POV) I could hear some thoughts in a distance, but did not tune in to listen to them. Seconds later, shots were fired. Everyone stood there in shock, not really scared though. When your a vampire bullets cant hurt you. If Jake was shot he would heal quickly enough that it would not be dangerous. Even when it comes to Renesmee, a normal bullet would not go through her skin.
Apparently, this was not a normal bullet. She was hit, and a second later she was unconscious on the ground.
“Renesmee!” Bella screamed.
I ran up to my daughter and lifted her shirt. Sticking out under her shirt was what looked like a normal bullet. When you looked closer however, you could see it was made of something strange, and was coated with something, but I could not tell what.
Carlisle ran up to me and reached for Renesmee. He took one look at her stomach, and picked her up and ran to my house.
“Esme, please go get my doctor bag!”
I chased after him, and so did Bella. Jake was vibrating he was so angry.
“Jake, find the people who shot her!” I screamed so he would have a reason to change.
Jake changed and Emmett, Rosalie and Andrew went in the direction of where the bullets came from. Esme came in about 10 seconds later with Carlisle's bag. He checked her over first, and then began to go for the bullet. It took more then it should to get the bullet out, but Carlisle did.
“Edward, try and figure out what this is.” Carlisle said.
I sniffed the bullet, and could smell some sort of poison. It was strange though, because it was a mixture of different poisons. The bullet was made of steal and lead. I looked over at Bella, who was jumping from nerves and looking like she as about to cry. I passed her the bullet so she could see what hurt our daughter.
Who would shoot at us, why would anyone care? I was so confused, and murderously angry.
“Carlisle is she going to be okay?” Bella asked.
Our daughters heartbeat was off. I didn’t know what to think about that. Carlisle never answered Bella's question. We both just watched him work. Until finally, over and hour later, he stopped.
“I got the bullet out, and all the little fragments. I had to use a lot of antibiotics and other pills to get rid of the poison. She should wake up soon.”
I stood there, still not moving, staring at my beautiful daughter. When Carlisle went to clean up some of his equipment I went to hold my baby's hand. Bella did the same thing, but on the other side.
“Edward... who would shoot at us? Who would shoot at a child?”
“I don’t know Bella, I hope our family will catch the ones who did it. I would like to meet them and teach them some manners.”
After a few minutes, Renesmee thoughts became more coherent. She woke up about a half hour later, but did not say a word. Jake ran in, holding back tears, and asked me to come outside.
“Just say it here Jake, I don’t want to leave her.”
“Whoever shot Renesmee only had to run a mile and drove off in a van. We couldn’t pick up their scents anywhere else.”
Nessie started to send me pictures, and they were not happy thoughts. She was in a lot of pain, and was scared. I didn’t know what to do. Bella, Jake and I all looked at each other.
We all decided, without even speaking the words, that we will kill the people who hurt our Nessie.

Permalink Reply by I ♥ Washington on June 30, 2010 at 4:58am

omg write more asap

Permalink Reply by Constanza Bustos on July 1, 2010 at 1:21pm

:O who are they?

Permalink Reply by Rachel Hope on June 29, 2010 at 11:51pm

OMG! I can't believe someone did that! Atleast she will be ok! I hope they are able to catch whoever hurt Nessie!

Permalink Reply by denver black♥ on June 30, 2010 at 3:30pm

omg! write more asap!

Permalink Reply by tammy perez on June 30, 2010 at 7:34pm

writ more soon omg so good

Permalink Reply by DeLaney Coats on July 2, 2010 at 3:51pm

oh no poor reneesme they must find the hunters soon. write more soon:)

Permalink Reply by ღツ☮Alex☮♥ѼCullen☮ツღ on July 2, 2010 at 10:27pm

look i read this story and book five in one day and i am in no mood to wait for u to post more so your only option is to post more now! so as to keep me sane lol u are an awesome writer!

Permalink Reply by Shelby on July 3, 2010 at 1:45am

Hey guys enjoy the chapter! Please read and comment, thanks! <3 :)

Chapter 6- Humans are not What they Seem(JAKES POV)
After the hunters shot Renesmee, I wanted to go look for them. We made a group and followed their scent. We tracked the scent, but it led us to a dead end. Which means that they must have gotten in a car. I ran back to the island where Renesmee was, and waited for them to let me see her.
Being away from her for only a few minutes made me feel like a left something, like a part of myself, behind. It took every fibre of my being to not run in the house and sit at her bed side. When I think about it however, I couldn’t watch Carlisle work on her, my anger would only grow.
Edward finally gave me the look saying I could come in. She was just starting to wake up, and I fought my hardest not to cry. The look on her face made me want to kill the people who did this to her. I had to explain what happened during our hunt though. I explained quickly and Edward and Bella just nodded.
We were different in so many ways, but our love for Renesmee made us think the very same thoughts. Any person who would hurt our Renesmee deserved to die.
“Nessie baby, can I do anything for you?” I asked, hoping to some how make her feel better.
“I’m okay Jake. Can you guys just stay with me though, I don’t want to be alone.” Renesmee said weakly.
Bella, Edward and I sat down with Renesmee. We were not really talking, we all wanted Nessie to sleep. When she finally did, we began to plan.
“We need to know the scent, we have to figure out who this was.”
“Edward, who ever is was, they were not a vampire. I think they were human. I don’t understand though, how would they know who we were.”
“I don’t get it anyway. We don’t harm humans, so why would humans want to kill us. I don’t care if they were human, they will pay for hurting my daughter.” Bella said.
“Jake do you mind getting the rest of the family, I want to start making plans.” Edward asked.
I nodded and went outside. They were all standing completely still waiting to hear something from us. I told them about Renesmee and asked them to come inside. They all followed, including Rosalie and Andrew, and formed a circle around Renesmee's bed.
“I think we all agree we need to find the person who shot at us. Their bullets will not go through our skin, but is strong enough to puncture Renesmee's. I am nervous if they keep working on this bullet, that they might be able to form a bullet to hurt us.” Edward began.
“So, before they can work on it anymore, I think we need to find them. Alice, do you think you might be able to look in the future with Jake around?”
“Yes, my visions are becoming much more clearer with the werewolves around. I know all the scents of the men who were here. I should be able to see them.”Alice explained.
“That's good, but how many men where there?” Bella said, started to look anxious.
“There were three scents running, but there might have been more in the car. We are not sure, they were already gone when we reached the end of the scent.” Emmett said.
We were making plans to find these creeps when three things happened at once.
First, Renesmee woke up, looking worse then before.
Second, Alice has a vision which made Jasper, Edward and Alice look extremely worried.
And Thirdly, we could hear footsteps at the edge of the island.
Edward and Bella grabbed Renesmee and ran into another room. I changed and blocked the entrance to the door they were in. Emmett, Rosalie, Andrew, Carlisle and Esme ran to where we heard the footsteps. Alice was not moving, and Jasper was trying with all his power to settle her down.
I heard some shots, and sent a very loud message to the pack telling them what was happening, and that I needed them. I heard some fighting, and then shooting.
“Alice! What did you see! Are these the same men who came before? Do not leave this house. You and Jasper should stay in here, the teams should be even. We have no idea what we are up against.” Bella said, poking her head threw the door. I growled in agreement.
“I know what we are up against. We need to leave this Island. Now.” Alice said.
We all looked at each other in confusion, and the fighting got louder outside. These were not you ordinary humans. Some thing is terribly off, and was about to hurt my friends.