★Breaking The Crimson Eclipse™★ (PG-16 too be safe)
Okay this story is how i thought New Moon Should have gone. And i am writing with Silver Mcmahon!!
P.S: It starts in Feb. in New Moon.
Thank you so much I LOVE EDWARD! for this banner!!
Thank you so much Rachel Edwards for this wonderful banner!! :D
Chp. 1 Bella's POV
I was in the forest i knew this because i could feel it on my feet as i ran. It was Pitch black out , i saw nothing. Then i saw him..... I ran as fast as i could too reach him. But than he disappeard , just like me slipping in too a deep black hole.
"AHHHHHHH!" I screamed at the top of my lungs, as my eyes flew open. I was used too bad dreams but this was so vived! I have not completly gotten over Edward. I met Jacob Black (my new best friend.) But he doesn't fill that empty feeling i have. I was happy when i was with him but once we were apart i went back into that deep hole called depression. I didnt feel love for Jake (well not in the sense he did) but i love him as a brother..
Jacobs been ignoring me latly rejecting my phone calls , always busy, i just dont get it! And its been making me fall deeper and deeper into the darkness and i realized i only needed one thing, Edward.. So i made a decision. Edward has always told me about Carslies many friends, and since Edward left because he was a vampire and i was human thier for we were bad for eachother, so if i was a vampire he would have no need too stay away! So today im going too thier house and too hope everythings in place. And i was ready too become a vampire i was sure of it and since this dream i was for sure ready! I would have too deal with the mess after it was done , i was too sidetracked too do anything important latly.
I walked down dressed and ready for saterday. "Your up early Bells." Charlie commented while looking up from the paper. "Yeah Mike dosent need me up at the shop today so im gonna kick it up in Port Angeles , maby go for a walk," I explained while popping a Pop Tart.His eyes bugged out of his head. "Um er okay im glad your balncing things out , have fun and Bells?" "yeah?" "Be carful dont go too deep into the woods , thiers been wolf warnings." "I know dad i will." Than i grabbed my Pop Tart , kissed his forehead, and dashed out the door. "Wow," i could hear him mumbling behind me. I hopped in my truck and started the engine. I duck taped the stario it reminded me of him too much. And well i almost killed it taking it out. And now i was about too do somthing i dreaded , go too the Cullens abandond house.......
I knew i would regret going in that house but its the only way.Than i pulled up too thier house ferns drownding the path way making it look jungle like. I opened the truck door and realized, i cant do this.Tears swelling in my eyes as i reached for the door. But it wasnt open! What was i gonna do?! Wait! I searched for a rock everywhere and busted the window. But i was half blind with the tears and a shard of glass riccoched in my arm. "OW!" That hurt but i could climb threw the window now. I coverd my arms so the blood wouldnt spill and i searched for thier bathroom. I walked up stairs to find thier bathroom i searched for guze & clensed my arm with water than wrapped it up.
A Half an hour later i found my self cureld up on Edwards old couch crying my heart out. Than i saw it. The picture I took before he left. I picked it up and it had writing on the back. "My beloved Bella -> (pointing too me threw the back) i will never forgive what i did too you but i lied i do want you! all of you forever but this is for the best i can't belive i ever left a beautiful creature like her." And now i was crying tears of joy!! That letter had given me hope! And now i knew i was ready too become an immortal!
Okay guys comment & tell me if i should continue! thx!
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Chp.2 Pg. 2 (Silver)
Chp.3 Pg. 3 (Sammy)=
Chp.4 Pg .4 (Sammy)
Chp.5 Pg 4. (Sammy)
Chp.6 Pg.5 (Sammy)
Chp.7 Pg.6 (Sammy)
Chp.8 Pg.7 (Sammy)
P.S: It starts in Feb. in New Moon.
Thank you so much I LOVE EDWARD! for this banner!!
Thank you so much Rachel Edwards for this wonderful banner!! :D
Chp. 1 Bella's POV
I was in the forest i knew this because i could feel it on my feet as i ran. It was Pitch black out , i saw nothing. Then i saw him..... I ran as fast as i could too reach him. But than he disappeard , just like me slipping in too a deep black hole.
"AHHHHHHH!" I screamed at the top of my lungs, as my eyes flew open. I was used too bad dreams but this was so vived! I have not completly gotten over Edward. I met Jacob Black (my new best friend.) But he doesn't fill that empty feeling i have. I was happy when i was with him but once we were apart i went back into that deep hole called depression. I didnt feel love for Jake (well not in the sense he did) but i love him as a brother..
Jacobs been ignoring me latly rejecting my phone calls , always busy, i just dont get it! And its been making me fall deeper and deeper into the darkness and i realized i only needed one thing, Edward.. So i made a decision. Edward has always told me about Carslies many friends, and since Edward left because he was a vampire and i was human thier for we were bad for eachother, so if i was a vampire he would have no need too stay away! So today im going too thier house and too hope everythings in place. And i was ready too become a vampire i was sure of it and since this dream i was for sure ready! I would have too deal with the mess after it was done , i was too sidetracked too do anything important latly.
I walked down dressed and ready for saterday. "Your up early Bells." Charlie commented while looking up from the paper. "Yeah Mike dosent need me up at the shop today so im gonna kick it up in Port Angeles , maby go for a walk," I explained while popping a Pop Tart.His eyes bugged out of his head. "Um er okay im glad your balncing things out , have fun and Bells?" "yeah?" "Be carful dont go too deep into the woods , thiers been wolf warnings." "I know dad i will." Than i grabbed my Pop Tart , kissed his forehead, and dashed out the door. "Wow," i could hear him mumbling behind me. I hopped in my truck and started the engine. I duck taped the stario it reminded me of him too much. And well i almost killed it taking it out. And now i was about too do somthing i dreaded , go too the Cullens abandond house.......
I knew i would regret going in that house but its the only way.Than i pulled up too thier house ferns drownding the path way making it look jungle like. I opened the truck door and realized, i cant do this.Tears swelling in my eyes as i reached for the door. But it wasnt open! What was i gonna do?! Wait! I searched for a rock everywhere and busted the window. But i was half blind with the tears and a shard of glass riccoched in my arm. "OW!" That hurt but i could climb threw the window now. I coverd my arms so the blood wouldnt spill and i searched for thier bathroom. I walked up stairs to find thier bathroom i searched for guze & clensed my arm with water than wrapped it up.
A Half an hour later i found my self cureld up on Edwards old couch crying my heart out. Than i saw it. The picture I took before he left. I picked it up and it had writing on the back. "My beloved Bella -> (pointing too me threw the back) i will never forgive what i did too you but i lied i do want you! all of you forever but this is for the best i can't belive i ever left a beautiful creature like her." And now i was crying tears of joy!! That letter had given me hope! And now i knew i was ready too become an immortal!
Okay guys comment & tell me if i should continue! thx!
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Chp.2 Pg. 2 (Silver)
Chp.3 Pg. 3 (Sammy)=
Chp.4 Pg .4 (Sammy)
Chp.5 Pg 4. (Sammy)
Chp.6 Pg.5 (Sammy)
Chp.7 Pg.6 (Sammy)
Chp.8 Pg.7 (Sammy)
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Go go Bells!!
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AWSOMEE!!!!
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yay! i want more!
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thx so much guys!!! :) and i will :)
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Dont fdorget too vote for me 2 days left!!!
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plz keep me updated :)
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heres your banner:
yes/no/edit?
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Permalink Reply by ™★♪Russian She Devil♪★™ on
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Yes!!!!!! i abousolutly love love love my banner!!!!!! thank you so much! :)
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Permalink Reply by ™★♪Russian She Devil♪★™ on
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Sryy i havent updated in forever!!!!!! Hope u like this update :)
Chp.10 BPOV
Today i had practice with Dameon. Edward tagged along because i guess he dosnt trust him whatever (even though im immoral) maby hes afriad we'll be getting it on insted of controlling my powers but i could never do that too Edward. (Even though he says he deserves it i dont think so)."Well hello Bella it's always a plesure too see you," he kissed my hand. "And this must be your boy toy." "Edward," they shook hands. "Very nice too meet you, im Dameon im sure your lovely Bella told you," "Indeed." Edward nodded his head im so glad thier acting so friendly so far i hope they can become friends. "Well , come in come in don't stand in the cold , like it matters." He usherd us in. "You rember Stefan Bella and this his Doll Elana." "Hey Bells" (me and stefan made good friends after the transformation.) "Hi Bella im Elana." "Hello nice too meet you," i smiled a warm smile , and she returned the favor. "I here you have extrodinary powers may Stefan and i watch?" "Of corse!"
We all went around back and so far everyone was getting along so far and i loved it because it made things so much easyier. "Good luck my love." Edward wishperd in my ear and kissed my hair. "Alright Bella lets get started with useing multipul powers at a time." "So what your gonna try too do is cut off my senses and block Elana as Stefan trys to shock her your gonna make sure she dosent feel it." "Alright lets do this." I made a fighting stance while smiling. "Okay cut my Senses off." I closed my eyes and exahaled and concentraded on cutting Dameons senses off. "Nice job Bella!" Said Stefan. (Since we'll Dameon could reply.) "Okay protect Elana." And then i concentrated on her and her saftey and i could see the smoke of protection wrap around Elana. "Good job Bella it just felt like a tickle!" I relesed Dameon & Elana. "Great job Bella your getting thier now the ultimate test" "Edward may i use you?" He getured his and. "Sure," Edward got up and stood near Dameon. "Okay Bella i want u too cut off Edwards Senses and shield him at the same time." "I-i-i can't do that," i whisperd. "Bella," Edward looked at me straight in my eyes with so much love and faith. "I want you too do it." And with that i did it. "Okay," i breathed. Then i concentrated on protecting Edward and the smoke wrapped around him, then i tried too cut his senses off. "Edward?" "Yes?" He smiled my favorite smile. "Oh my god it worked!!" Edward and Dameon hugged me everyone else congradulated me. "Great job Bella i can see your Shiled is stronge next time we'll work on your Elements." "Thank you Dameon," and i hugged him as we reached the front door. "Oh and Bella?" Edward linked arms with me. "Yes Dameon?" "Would you and Edward like too come too dinner tommaro night?" "For sure," i smiled.
"What did he mean 'dinner'?" I laughed. "Well Dameon eats dead human blood like i told you and he serves it in vases, bottles etc but dont worry he has animal too. But mostly were going too be sociable you dont mind right?" "No of corse not." "I love you" and i spinned around and kissed him. Right now life was at its all time hight.
kay guys im sorry i couldnt update longer but its all i had time for thx guys :) -
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very good Roza..keep me updated..
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Permalink Reply by yuval sadde on
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A very good chappi!! Write more please!!
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