Brown Eyes Tears

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Permalink Reply by Sofia Michelle Clearwater on June 19, 2010 at 12:27pm

OK EVERYONE TWILIGHT RELATED WON BUT I WAS THINKING..AND YOU ALL KNOW THAT I HAVE A FAN FIC IS CALLED FULL MOON SERIES AND IS FROM SETH POV, SO I THOUGHT TO MAKE THIS STORY SOFIAS OR MITCHY'S POV BEFORE SHE CAME TO FORKS AND MET SETH.
SUMMARRY:
SOFIA AND HER FAMILY GO TO ITALY ON VACATION SHE WAS NEVER HAPPY BUT SHE LOVED THEM. THIS WAS A PRESENT GIFT, BUT THEN THEY ARE CHOOSEN TO BE"DINNER" FOR THE VOLTURI. SHE SAVES HER FAMILY BUT..WHAT IS HER DESTINY. DEPRESS ABOUT HER LIFE, SHE MEETS ALEC MAYBE HER SOULD MATE BUT WHEN SHE GOES TO HER MISSION TO DESTROY THE CULLENS SHE FINDS SETH....

WHAT DO YUO THINK??? VOTE YES OR NO ... I'M WAITING JUST FOR 5 COMMENTS AND THEN I WILL UPDATE IF THE MAYORITY IS YES.. :)

Permalink Reply by Amanda Clearwater :) on June 19, 2010 at 12:31pm

Yus :)

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Permalink Reply by Sofia Michelle Clearwater on June 19, 2010 at 12:56pm

HAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHHHA LOL wow sorry this only counts 2 votes... but i'll make it count 3.... 2 more and I will updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Sabrina:) on June 19, 2010 at 1:10pm

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UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Sofia Michelle Clearwater on June 19, 2010 at 1:38pm

Chapter 1

Sofia's POV

I was born on February 12, 1996. They said the world would end in 2000, but it never happen. Now they are saying the world would end in 2012. Waiting to see what happens. I'm scared but hey... it's life. When it happens, it will happen.. i took a deep breath and got ready for school. I live in Puerto rico, a small Islan in the Carribean. It's the most beautiful place in the world but I didn't belong here, I knew this wasn't were I could be happy, and less with school.. But thankfully school was ending soon. I hated school, everyone , well not bullied but laughed, ignored and boys only flirted with me when they wanted me to help or give them the answer to test or homework... at first I would have done anything to be with them but now they jsut tried to copy them from someone else because I will always refused. I got to school, finifhed my final exams and thanksfully went home. I took a long shower and went to bed to read my books of mythical creatures, I was in the Vapire chapter. This wasn't what I expected, I felt it was wrong but....strage.

I wish to feel, I wan to feel loved, to be wanted, to be..happy. I am grateful for my life, I have a house. I can't call it home, it doensn't feel like one. I have food, education, ... all I needed to live. But right now I didn't have a life to live. This will happen jsut in a few minutes. I was alsways so distant in the books I wanted to be a part of I ignored the real world.

"Sofia!!!!" dad yelled and slammed the door at me

"Yeah ?"I asked gently still looking into the book.

"Don't use that tone with me!" he fumed. Wow, everyday, everything, all the same but just a different excuse.

""Who's the glass of fruit punch that is one the floor?" he still yelled. Really a glass of fruit punch ? I hated that juice.

"Dad- I said gently- I don't like fruit punch. I'm the only one in this house that doesn't like that juice, I only like grape and orange juice but is strange of me to drink that" I looked back at my dad, he was wearing a strange look on his face. My father thinks that girls or women are supposed to work but also work and clean and do EVERYTHING in the house. He only cooks sometimes and it is only for himself. i'm smarter than him, in everything that is why I'm always calm because I'm always out smart him. I noticed that when I got to the 5th grade, mom didn't say anyhthing because she loved to cook, clean. she was like cinderella but loved it. She was always helping the helpless, woth activies and things, and i felt good but I felt jelous somethimes because, even if those families don't have anything, they have each other and theirs loves. I didn't have that I had my mother that cared more for others than her daughter and sons, a father that thinks he is still in the 70's, and two annoying brothers.


I went downstairs for dinner, steak and fries. It was delicious but I never said anything just ate, and went upstairs.
Upsatirs to my room and just sat in my bed. My room was norlmal size. only one wall was painted purple and the rest was painted beich. With a lot of posters of twilight, actors, singers, etc. I had a desk, a little plasma TV with a DVD , that my grandparents gave to me. I daydreamed about what will I do and how free I will be when I was 18. Going to collage, being free, having my own life AWAY from here. That is what I dreamed. I saw myself in the mirrow and saw my eyes, just brown but it had a strange mixture, but hey, just eyes... I fell asleep still dreaming of my future life, that is when I saw him... really He was a dream? Or was it? He looked so real, I wanted to touch him, I could feel his warmth next to me. What is going on?

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Dream:

I was i the middle of the forest, in a beautiful meadow but I was alone . I enjoyed the beauty. I knew I wasn't in my Island, It was colder, much to colder. Then out of no where a beautiful guys is near me. THE pale boy in the gray suit was beautiful. His hair was dark and his lips were not full but...lovely. His eyes were black coal, but I felt secure in them. but not... 100% confortable, like there weren't what I needed, what I wanted. He looke dstrangely at me. and I knew he wasn't human but could he be... more? He smiled at me kissed me neck lightly..


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I woke up with a gasp but I wasn't afraid I thouched me neck where he kissed me it felt cold but no, blood, no mark, just..a dream I looked my self in the mirror and I almost cried. I was pale, maybe I was afraid but I shook it off and fell asleep. Tomorrow will be the last day of school well until January. We are going to get our Holiday vacation after tomorrow. Tomoorow is like a goodbye party. I wish I could have a friend hat loves to drees up everyone. i would let her dress me up if she makes me look pretty. I went to bed and closed my eyes, wishing I could have that dream again and ask the boy... What are you?... and wait for his answer...

hope you like this chapter!!!! need more than 5 comments to update again!!!! :)




Hey guys hope you like the chapter and here is links to my others stories:

full moon series: the original story, Brown eyes tears is a second version

http://www.thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/full-m...

My two shinning sun:

http://www.thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/my-two...

Permalink Reply by Amanda Clearwater :) on June 19, 2010 at 2:04pm

LOVE IT! Can't wait for more :)

-Amanda

Permalink Reply by ignorantKYLEE on June 19, 2010 at 4:56pm

Post more soon!! Love it!

Permalink Reply by Kairi on June 20, 2010 at 11:30pm

AWESOME!!!!!!
YES!!

Permalink Reply by Kairi on June 28, 2010 at 12:03am

Twilight!!Twilight!!Twilight!!Twilight!!Twilight!!
Here u go with 5 comments, dear haha

Permalink Reply by Michie Cullen on June 19, 2010 at 5:21pm

Post more soon!
And i l-o-v-e It!

Permalink Reply by Victoria Love on June 20, 2010 at 7:14am

lllllloooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeedddddddddd it!!!!!!

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