Brown Eyes Tears

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Permalink Reply by Lexi Volturi on August 8, 2010 at 2:57pm

:) Interesting...

Permalink Reply by Victoria Love on August 16, 2010 at 11:42am

gr8 chapter!!!!
plz update soon!

Permalink Reply by LilMiss Werewolf.! ~Jacob/Seth~ on August 25, 2010 at 4:05am

Please update soon ii love it.! (new reader)

Permalink Reply by Sofia Michelle Clearwater on September 1, 2010 at 11:43pm

OKAY EVERYONE I KNOW ITS BEEN ALMOST 2 MOTHS NOW BUT IM SORRY.. OKAY. LIFE IS RUFF. :) I HAVE BEENN DELEAING WITH A FEW PROBLEMS AND NOW IS WHEN I CAN FINALLY UPDATE AND IT'S LIKE 11:12 PM I HOPE U LIKE IT IF NOT WELL JUST LEAVE IT AT COMMENT.. NOT CARING RIGHT NOW :) JUST TIRED AND WANT TO WRITE AND BE ON MY TWILIGHT WORLD I HAVE BEEN TEASED AGAIN BECAUSE I LOVE TWILIGHT.. ANYWAYS I HOPE U LIKE THE NEXT CHAPTER.. OH AND I'M LOOKING FOR MY OTHER STORY DAYDREAMS A BEAUTIFUL REALITY.. CAN SOMEONE SEND ME A LINK??!?!??!! IT WILL HELP ME SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH

THNAK LPT, Sofia

Chapter 7

Sofia POV

I woke up, early, the sun was rising. ?It was beautiful. I felt my stomach groweld and 2 seconds later Alec was in my bed room. I just looked at him. Confused and embarras. How should ?I feel? A beautiful boy like him seeing me.. A human, pale to his beauty in her PJs. But then I saw his red eyes. And I could only imagen what he did , what he does to people. I sighed and moved so I sat in my bed looking at him.

"Goodmorning" I said

"Goodmorning... Gianna will take you to breakfast in 30 minutes."

"Thank you for telling me" This was awkard. He nodded and left. I found my bathroom...

Speachless. I dressed confortable but cute.. to me

Gianna was at my door waiting for me and also was Alec.She drove us to a cafe and while I waited for the fod Alec just started at me.. weird.

"Why are you staring at me like that?.. it's weird" I said annoyed.Something about us from Puerto Rico is that we are very... free of when we speak. We don't caere of what we say until it's too late. But this time It didn't count

"Sorry.. your different-" I interrupted him

"Hey- i snapped at him- I'm very far away from home, okay? and I'm not going to be isulted and bulied by a italian vampire that stares at me like a freak or just wants to eat me. Aro wants me and somw how needs me.. so I may be human but I am smart. " I said angry at him. This was only brouth amusement but then schok. What did I say soemthing caught his attention

"Bullied?" Amdnd now I regret it

" It's nothing " I said in a small voice looking away toward a group of girls looking at Alec and me. Jelousy clear in their eyes and hate for me.

"Sofia.." He looked at where I stared. The giggled and waved at him, he looked at me again.

"Girls picked on me because.. well I just don't know. That is the reason why I'm hear. On a party they made fun of me adn I ran putside and a car hitted me. I wanted to go on vacation and choose Italy... bad choice I guees but not one I regret" I was having my own reveerie

"Why?" he was still human enough to ask

"I don't know."

After Gianna and i ate we went back to the catle. I ahyd a bad feeling about this. Gianna was at her desk and Aro asked me to come in. The sme room I had seld my soul to them. veryone was at their post. Marucs looked bored. Caius and a wicked smile on and Aro had a strage friendly sile.. that I wa safraid off.

"Wise one! Welcome back I hope yoy are enjoying your stay" He aske delighted. I didn't even comment mentally...

"Wise one?" Arp chuckeld

"Sofia mean wise in italian.. I thought you knwo child"

"umm.. yeah. Is that I never gave it to much ..impotance" [A/N THAT IS A LIE BECAUSE SINCE I FOUND WHAT SOFIA MENT ALL MY STORIES HAVE A SOFIA AND/ OR A DANIEL. IF I HAVE KIDS THAT WILL B THEIR NAMES :) ]

"Oh" He looked at me curiously he touched my cheek and smiled again. I shivered.

"Child, today we are going to ashow you the guards gifts"

"Their powers?"

"Yes"

They showed me and explained with no detail about their powers. Then Jane stepped foward.

"Sofia.. this will be ...different" Aro stepped away from me. I noticed everyone was in a circle. only Jane and I in the middle. Alec was behind me, but far away form his twin sister.

"Different?" I gulped. She smiled at me. I had the urge to run away. I did. Everyone looked at me with confusion but Jane smiled wider. I Then I felt it. The pain.. it stapped me first into my head then my heart.. it went threw my body. I screamed. I felt like I was in flemes. Like I was in hell but strangely I knew Hell will be less painfull.

"Stop" I begged. She just smiled wider. I got mad.

"Stop" I told her. And for one second.. she did Her eyes wide with schok but then the pain was again in it's place,

"Jane" Aro said. I let ut a gust of air. My hands were at my head.protecting myself for the unknown fire. Mybody against the amrble wall that was cold.. confortable. I breathed in and out tears streaming out of my face. I hated her. Jane was evil. But i felt sorry for her. What happen when she was human to have this cruel power?

After what seemed hours I could finally call down. But my arms were around my legs and My head against the wall.

"Child?" Aro asked I flinched. He touched my head and nodded. He helped me up. I almost fell 2 times. I was in the middle again.

"Alec" Aro commanded. I didn;t know what todo. The pain.. I don;'t want it again.

"I'm the opposite has my sister" he said and with that Everything went black. Ic ouldn't hear, see.. feel anything. I was thankful. I was not in pain.I let uncossusness taske me over....

Yay chapter 7!! whujuuuuuuuu okay can someone send me the link to my other story DAYDREAMS A BEAUTIFUL REALITY??!??! THANKS!!

Permalink Reply by Aqsa Lautner on September 2, 2010 at 5:10am

AWESOME!,,,,,post more SOON,,,,i love it :D

Permalink Reply by Janie z. on September 2, 2010 at 9:52pm

I love this jeep writing! *new reader btw*

Permalink Reply by ♥Monica Hale♥™ on September 4, 2010 at 3:29pm

omg this is amazing!!! can she lyk turn off people's powers or sumthing?

Permalink Reply by Sofia Michelle Clearwater on September 4, 2010 at 3:31pm

almost u guys have to wait for the sequel to understand :) sorry :)

Permalink Reply by Lexi Volturi on September 3, 2010 at 4:16pm

UGGG!!! Were is my character?? I'm super anxious for the next chapter

~Lexi

Permalink Reply by ashmeena sulaman on September 16, 2010 at 11:40am

hey sofia....wise one!...cool name!...anywyas...that was great...wonderful as always my friend!

keep me updated and when u write the sequel do update me!....love yah and keeep me updated cauas i have not read in a while but now thta i caught up back with this fan fic...i feel gret,.....u r a very good writer....keep it up and hope to see more soon....very anxious....is this goonna actually be the whole full moon series in her point of view though....?....caus that would be very cool!!!

anywas....talk soon....lpt..Ashmeena...friend forever!

Permalink Reply by Sofia Michelle Clearwater on September 21, 2010 at 11:24am

Chapter 8

Alec POV

Sofia looked relieved in seconds. After I pulled her out she fainted. Aro touched her and he just smiled. She was something else. I carried her to her room, Gianna said she will be ok,then she left. I didn't underdstand why Aro made me stay and look after her , but I gladly did it. The image of her and her mother huggin was clear on my mind, when she told me she was beeing bullied at her home, the way her eyes were pained and sad when she said those words. But I nthink the one that made me feel guilty was when s\this morning she looked into my eyes, I think she remebered what we did, the pain and anger... it made me feel guilty for the first time in my excistance to feed of humans. Jane came.

"What are you thinking about brother?" We were vampires there is no other way.

"Nothing... just the human" then Carlisle Cullens face and golden eyes. I shook it off.

"Are you sure?" Jane aas only concern about me. The way I was concern about her.

"Do you still remeber, when we were human?"I asked only the 2 of us could hear. She looked at Sofia and pursed her lips.

"What does that have to do with these human?" her voice dead.

"I still remember... she reminds me of you" I said quietly. Jane's eyes were Angry and mocking

"Me?! this worthless human reminds you of me?!" She turned around

"Jane don't" I said softly. Her little fist closed

"How?" she still looked at her

"She's been mocked, and hurted by her own family and people she knows and maybe even care about. She almost died. That is the resaon she came here. To Italy... Like we did" Jane turned around for one moment I say her eyes , not the color btu the feeling, I had for a few seconds but sister back, but faster than ever they turned dead,

"We are immortals... thats history and it will never happen again... - she turned to the door- I'm sorry Alec, life is different from what it is now. " She had her back to me.

"I know sister, I know" she walked away. And I looked back and Sofia I only hoped that she could at leats enjoy her human life and if she was turned... she could forgive.


Sofia POV

I finally woke up to a staring Alec. Gianna brought me lunch and left again. Alec just stared at me,His eyes lost in thought. I ate slowly feeling... alive again Alec's and Jane's power where the ones... that starngely made me want to know them better and be so far away from the. Jane, I felt like I was in flames, like a pain that never excisted but I felt it, but in that second I wanteed her to stop, she did. I didn't know if it was from the shock of how I reacted or what I feared most. Aro was curious of me, and from what I saw, he is very curiuos and loves to collect, the arts and paintings I have seen until now are just beautiful but I think is colection are not the art but the powers. And for what he wanted me, I was sure he wanted powers.. but for what? he couldn't have them. But they looked like royalty.

I had much to learn from the vampire world...


HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT 10 COMMENTS AND I WILL UPDATE,OH AND LEXI !! NEXT CHAPTER U R IN!!! :)

Permalink Reply by Janie z. on September 21, 2010 at 12:32pm

A) I have the first comment:)
B) Update:)
C) Why haven't you updated yet?
D) In other words I LOVE IT!

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