The Twilight Saga

A/N This story takes place in new moon and Bella is on the edge of the cliff and she’s about to jump...



I closed my eyes.


“Bella.”


it was him. his voice was beautiful but wrong.


“Bella, don’t do this.” It said.


 This time I listened to it more carefully. It was as if it was the voice of an angel but still, it sounded wrong. Different. I was confused. It was Edward’s voice, but it didn’t make a difference to me. I didn’t care if I was hearing his voice. In that instant,the hole in my chest was gone.
Erased. What was going on? I asked
myself, completely shocked. I waited for the hole to come back but it didn’t.


“Bella!” a voice, a different huskier voice interrupted my train of thought. It was the voice I wanted to hear. The voice I craved.


I looked behind me and huge tanned figure ran to me. Jacob. Seeing his face made me smile.


“What the hell do you think you’re doing!?” he asked, catching his breath.


I looked down and I realized I was still at the edge of the cliff. The waves were crashing furiously at the rocks below. I took an involuntary step back.


“C-cliff d-diving..?” my teeth chattered. It was freezing cold out here! I couldn’t imagine how cold the water must be.


He walked towards me and gave me one of his big bear hugs. He was so warm. I hugged him tighter but it still didn’t feel tight enough. He probably thought I was cold so he hugged me tighter too. I liked how his shoulders were wide and strong. How his hair was styled messily and how he had
the most prefect smile. I never noticed Jacob like this.


“Come on Bells. I’ll bring you home.” His voice made my heart skip a beat. What was happening to me?


“I-iii don’t wanna go home yet. “ I was beginning to feel warmer in his arms.


He sighed and turned so that I was pinned to his side and his arm was on my shoulder. I had butterflies in my stomach.


It’s only Jacob. He puts his arm around me all the time. He’s my friend. I thought to myself as we walked to my truck.  My mind debated if being his friend was enough.


We reached my truck and he opened the passenger door for me. I stepped in as he walked to the driver’s side. I was beginning to feel cold again as we drove to his house. Jacob seemed to notice.


“It’s a hundred and eight degrees over here,” he said, as he patted his seat. I scooted to his side.  I let out a sigh. It felt nice.


There was a few minutes of silence until I asked him how he knew I was on the cliff.


“I was running in the forest near the trail and I heard your truck. Sam told us that the redhead’s trail was gone so I followed you. What were you thinking bella! Didn’t you see that it was turning into a tornado out there?”


I shrugged.


He stopped the engine and got out. I opened my door and stepped onto the dirt trail to his house. We walked together.


Billy was nowhere in sight when we got inside the house. The phone rang and Jacob hurried to the kitchen to get it.


“Hello? Yea she’s here,” I guess whoever jake was talking to knew about what I almost did.


“Is he ok?”


“oh.” His voice sounded suddenly glum. This worried me. Who was he?


Jacob hung up and walked back to me. His face looked sad. I looked up at him and gave him a hug.


“what was that about?” I asked, sympathy and curiosity in my voice.


“It’s harry. Harry Clearwater. He had a heart attack.”


This took me by surprise. Harry was charlie’s best friend.


“Is he ok?” I asked, remembering Jacob’s conversation on the phone.


He gave me this look and I knew that it wasn’t looking so great for harry. I felt truly sorry for seth, leah and sue.


“Are you ok?” Jacob examined me. His voice different.


“Of course.” Other than the shock I felt when edward’s voice erased the hole in my chest, I felt great. I was with Jacob and it surprised me how happy I was to be with him. The shock in my voice didn’t assure Jacob.


“you tired?” he asked.


I shook my head. just confused I thought.


ok so i know it isn't so great but please tell me what you think. thanks :]

Tags: bella, fanfic, jacob, love

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omg im so so so sorry guys!! been slumped with hmwrk!!! i'll try posting ASAP. thanks for all the support!
Can't wait til the nxt part. I really love it. U r 2 good
Hey I just wrote my own alternate ending. Let me know what you think.
love it!!!!!!!!!! keep writing!!!!!!!!!
I think your doing a wonderful job. Keep up the good work. I love the new new moon. As I was reading I was wondering how that would work out with the rest of the books..... Im really curious to see how far your imagination will run. I say "Let it run and be free!"
ummmmm i think it was really good. you should write more stories
MoOoOoOreeeeee
THIS IS AMAZING. HOW COME STEPHENIE MEYER DIDN'T END IT LIKE THIS. I have an alternate ending of my own. But it's when Jake and Bella are about to kiss. But I like this better.

p.s How do I enter my alternate ending up here?
uhmm on the discussions page, there's a button that says "start a discussion" and u click that and then it helps u make a discussion. just copy ur story and paste it into the box. cant wait to read it :]
that was great you NEED to write more PLEASE WRITE MORE
i guarantee u all an update sometime today.i appreciate everything u guys have said. :]
ok im team Edward but to tell you the truth its really good. you have talent and its a really good alternate ending.
keep writing because i want to read more.

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