Enticed, Saved, and Adored
Switching the roles of Bella and Edward was an idea i have been thinking on for a long time and i decided to finally write on it! so ENJOY.
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Chapter 1
Moving back (BPOV)
Coming back to Carlisle was as much exciting as it was dreadful. When we had grown too 'old'
to still reside in our old town, Carlisle had tried to drag me to Chicago, Illinois but i had refused i wanted to live in Europe for a while, life in the United States always reapeating had made me suffer. I had tried to convince him to come with me but it had been worthless he had still gone to Chicago, now the centre of Chaos, the Heartland of the now a very serious cough. He was, as always, following his calling, like he had when he had saved me, me but not my mom or dad. just me, mom and dad's hearts having already stopped by the time he got to us, just mine had kept going. But now it was frozen as much as his.
He hadn't known when we had separated that his job would turn into caring for this ver weird strain of cough but that didn't matter as i came to reunite with him. He was once again my 'brother', i would be his very educated sister, stuck with him after our parents had been killed in a 'robbery'. Atleast he had spared me the torture of sitting through classes by saying i had had a private tutor, he had by now set up everything for me to move back in with him. But i was certain that going back now was tempting fate as he would be very short tempered because he couldn't be at the hospital 24 hours straight trying to find out the similarities between his sick patients. That would be too bad, but atleast i would actually have him during the day, just my nights would be lonesome, and even then maybe i would go to the hospital and help him, he would be happy to have untireable help, i was sure.
I had returned not because of the war, but because i had missed him, i had left in 1915 before the States had joined the war, and now i was returning, because I missed Carlisle and the on going sameness of life back home.
The new house was just as big as the last one had been. Carlisle offered me to come with him to the hospital so i could meet all his assistants and the nurses. I had refuesed. I wouldn't go to the hospital my first day back with him, not the first day back in the states. He left for the hospital an hour before the sun set, so i decided to grab a jacket, Though i didnt need it, and go for a walk, maybe pick up some books from any store, not that Carlisle hadn't kept all my books from before i left. As i walked in the park i saw HIM. He was with a woman that appeared to be his mother, with her same hair, and a man, i guessed he must have been the father. They were a beautiful family, mother and son with bronze hair. They were having a picnic, and laughing so hard it was almost impossible for me to take my eyes of them.
In the middle of their laughter the older man started to cough, loud and hard. I didn't need to be Carlisle to know he was sick, but apparently his family did. Sad for them for if he didn't have that cough cure soon he wouldn't be around them for long. I walked on, they may have been the happiest humans i had seen in so long, but they were just that, humans, never knowing what was best for them and always making mistakes. I went home after that, sad to see happiness never lasted. i read for the rest of the night, waiting for Carlisle to come back.
"Bella?" Carlisle called softly as he came in.
"I'm over here!" I called from his study.
I looked up as he came in the door. "How was the hospital?"
"Bad, there are more people getting sick, i dont think it's just a cough anymore, i think i may be more." He had gone on talking about the Symtoms and its targets. I listened and discussed what it could be. But life went on... well time did, life, for me atleast, had stopped forty years ago.
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Chapter 34
ODD (elzPOV)
I saw from the beginning how perfect she was for him, beautiful to hold his eye, a selfless soul to hold his awe, and a quiet mind to inflame his curiosity. I knew her mind was quiet for him, because I knew what he felt, you may call it mothers intuition, but mother's intuition does not tell someone what other's feel, what others see. Ever since I was small I was able to feel people's intentions, and I have been able to hear beyond normal. But around her it was as if I had been a normal child.
I knew Edward was special, ever since he was born, specially when he was little, he has had a way to know the truth even when people lied to him, even if the person was the best liar he knew he was being lied to. I felt that ability disappear from my son when he was around her. She could have told him thousands of lies and he would have believed every single one of them. She, her quiet mind was to draw his attention, would protect him from his own gift.
And even thought I resented this time I could never resent her, and even as I felt Carlisle's bad news in the horizon as he led me away from my husband and son I knew she was for him. I had tried to concentrate on a mental picture of them as Carlisle had led me away from them knowing that he would give me worse news, and when we got to his office I may have been shaken but I was never surprised, though he did give me something to calm my nerves. I never asked him what it was.
Carlisle forcing us on him was the best choice and when we had gone to my house to pick up whatever we would need I had purposefully left them alone, but I had never stopped listening to them and though they were a soft almost inaudible murmur I still tried to decipher what they said.
The same happened when we got to their house. I forced each to the other's company, knowing in the end they would end together. But as the medicine wore off I began to worry about Edward, My Edward, in the hospital all alone. I had dreamt with him, and woke up with only him and the come back of Carlisle in my mind.
When I woke up I Listened intently to the noises of the house hoping Carlisle hadn't come back and fallen asleep already. But he wasn't I heard small noises downstairs barely noticeable. I dressed quickly and almost ran down the stairs, feeling my nervousness right before I walked in the door. Bella hurriedly put plates in the sink before turning to see me.
I had greeted them cautiously as I walked slowly into the room, afraid of what I would hear. I was glad no changes greeted me, though I would have rather heard that he had recovered but I knew that it was only a matter of days now. I tried to distract my mind though, trying to leave thoughts of the inevitable for later. Though sad thoughts had come but Bella had made them go with a few soft words that also mad me full of curiosity.
Carlisle had made me sit at the table and offered breakfast but not to eat with me and that made me remember the plates Bella had hastily stowed in the sink. I had ti wake Edward but I also suspected Bella would volunteer for that job so while she was upstairs I checked out the sink. I felt very intrusive doing so but I couldn’t help the urge. When Bella had walked out of the room I had gone to look at the dishes, two plates and two cups but nothing more, wouldn't they have needed spoons or forks to eat? There was also something very weird about the design the honey made on the plates, perfect circles one both, that wasn't possible was it?. I moved curiously to the trash after that. There was only enough trash for the breakfast that was served for me and Edward, but not the one Bella and Carlisle claimed to say they had had. I quickly moved through the cabinets now. Everything looked just bought, like, I felt myself become paranoid, as if everything had been bought for use to be here. I hurried to the table and scraped a batter knife on a plate, making the movements and the noise both to distract myself and to see if anything would make the same patter the honey had been made with. It didn't. Bella walked down not long after that.
What I found in the Cullen House no one will ever know, and even as I sit here writing, with my poor son bed ridden, I will not write it.
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Note from Abbie: *Does a cha cha dance!* Chapters chapters chapters!!
Note from Ang: I was half sleep when i wrote this soooo!!! if its unintelligible please excuse me!! -
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Do do do do do cant wait to get a brain full!!!
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The Chapter song! lol!
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Chapter 35
Last Wish (elzPOV)
Then the pain came. We went to the hospital. He was bound to the bed, without moving but in the best humor imaginable. I hated that about him, My husband, always happy, always so involved in his sixth sense of happiness, though it had had a big part in me falling for him. This so big a happiness made me envious of him, he would be peaceful even at his death bead, because I now realize it had been just that. And though now I saw that all he was waiting to die was us, to see us. I felt maybe a pinch of love, my time was coming closer, and I began to think of my son. To think of Bella, think of his happiness as I lay here now dying but happy to see her back and to know she would save him. Though I had to admit it had hurt to see her running and him go after her. My baby Edward, my only remaining Edward now that my love has left the Earth though I know I will be leaving soon too. But I will not leave until she hears me.
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Carlisle had ran to the room not a minute to soon to find Eliza besides Edward's bed, her breathing spiked, her heart beating to fast. He had quickly picked her up, ignoring the pen and diary near her and yelled for nurses to come while he tried to help her breathing. When they finally came the nurses were not needed, and though Elizabeth Masen was blue, to Dr. Cullen's sight cyanosis again, but this time her heart had settled to a too slow beat. He knew this was the end of her and he yelled for a nurse to get his sister, and the rest to get back to other patients.
"Eliza?" Dr. Cullen called frantically, though he knew it could be a lost cause.
By a miracle she did open her eyes weakly. "Carlisle." She her voice horse. "Save him!" Elizabeth Masen said with so much meaning there was no way to confuse who she asked the doctor to save. Dr. Cullen heard then the steps, coming faster as they hear the rough, hoarse voice.
"She's coming." He had said to no one.
Isabella closed the door behind her then.
Elizabeth's emerald eyes focused on both Bella and Dr. Cullen now, becoming as hard as the gyms they resembled. "Save him." she said again, her strength waning. "Do what ever you have to do, everything in you power." She looked at Carlisle then and outstretched her fingers in which he placed his hand. "What others can't do you must do for him, for my Edward." She squeezed his finger with all her flailing strength. "Save him, make him happy." She looked at Bella. "Above all make him happy." then her emerald eyes were no longer focused on this earth. "You waited." she smiled but the smile had too much pain to be called completely peaceful. Her heart which was so slow already stopped with her last breath. He demands had shaken Bella, she had gone as far as assume he was already saved to ask for her to make him happy. Carlisle on the other hand felt the great wrenching pain of loosing a friend. He felt as if he had lost a family member, feeling her loss more than he had felt when he had been taken away from his father. But he didn't loose time, Carlisle took Elizabeth to the morgue then he took Edward, while Bella stood around looking hopeless. She had still been trying to work out how Elizabeth could have guess they could save him. Why did she have to wait so long? Why would she have wanted her son to be like them? When Dr. Cullen had come back from leaving Edward with his mother he told Bella to go help the nurses but meet him at the house in half an hour, and she went, to shaken up to do anything but move without a mind, working mechanically.
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Abbie: *Shakes head* Uh huh, uh huh, uh huh uh huh uh huh!!! Check it out now!! :D Loll sorry Im in a veryyy hyper mooood!!! I was boucin all around the volleyball court!!! Whoooo -
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Permalink Reply by Angylle on
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Ohhhhhh no!!
OHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOO!!!
*Runs in circles!!* Oh no oh no oh nooooooo!! ITS COMING!!!!!!! AHHH THE END IS COMING!!!
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Epilogue : Fulfilled
Bella was coming back to her mind when she reached the house. She suspected what would happen and wondered if it were what was best. But once she saw his face, pale, in pain she knew she wanted it to happen. When Carlisle had looked at her his face showed nothing but confusion, a fight. That made her mind up. "DO it!!" She screamed these words so loud that they woke Edward. He wasn't completely conscious but he almost yelled in pain as his breathing became louder than anything else. Bella was at his side before his eyes opened.
"Calm. I'm here. And I will be here forever. Breathe."
Slowly his breathing slowed but his heart sped. "Bella?" his voice was barely a croak. She smooth his forehead. "Do you mean it?" he asked. Bella knew what he was asking.
"If you want it I will be by your side forever." Carlisle got closer to the couple knowing if he was going to do anything it had to be now.
"Yes." As soon as the word was out of his mouth he felt the sting of his skin being cut on his neck, then an increasing fire. Carlisle bent over Edward just was the screaming started.
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*Dabs eyes dramatically* Oh wasnt that.. that *Blows nose* AMAZING?!?! *Applause* ENCORE ENCORE!!
Ang: (Ps this is Abbie Jus playing the part) Oh Stop it *waves off complements* You're too kind!
Abbie + Fans: HOW CAN U JUST LEAVE US THERE?!?! I MEAN EDWARD AND BELLA AND OOOOOooooooOOOOOOOOOOoooooooo EVIL!!
Ang: *Giggles* You shall see *Screen zeros in on her eyes* You shall all see *Laughs Evily*
Ok OK Waddya think?? Dont u think I should be like a director or something? Huh? Huh??? :D Hahaha Jkkkk Cant wait for more tho can ya?? I no I cant!! :D -
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Permalink Reply by Alexandra Paola☪ ♱(Bloodsucker)☠ on -
OH JESUSCHRIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE, I"M BEGGING YOU, POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS UNBELIVEBLE!!!!!!!!! XD
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Permalink Reply by Angylle on
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Hahahahahahhahahaha Thats Why Im here!!! To post for her!!! We r still deciding on weather to wait... Or post more :D
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Permalink Reply by Alexandra Paola☪ ♱(Bloodsucker)☠ on
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PLEASE, I DON'T WAN'T TO WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU WAN'T ME TO KILL SOMEONE, I'LL DO IT, BUT PLEASE POST NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Permalink Reply by EquiVamp on -
the chapters were excellent,
but i have to admit i'm a little disapointed we didnt get to see edward first newborn moments
i'm surprised to becaus i was sure it would be bella to bite him, not carlisle
overall though this was a great story, congradulations on finishing it. -
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