False Impressions
A misconception kept them apart. A once in a lifetime experience might be enough to bring them together. Bella and Edward are about to learn some home truths about themselves and each other as they take a journey to Australia and find that things aren't always what they seem.
I know I said I wasn't sure if I would write another one but I couldn't help it. This was planned before I decided to help AnahyR bring her story ideas to life and I put it on hold. It keeps going around and around in my mind so I have chosen to just go with it and see how it pans out. I hope you enjoy.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/forum/topics/the-heart-is-a-bloom-now?gr...
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/no-choice-...
Loss to Love: Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
Loss to Love was written on the basis of AnayhR's ideas.
http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/loss-to-lo...
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Permalink Reply by Ashley Jordan on -
So happy you updated... Love the chapter... Can't wait for more!!!
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on -
Thanks Ashley. Happy that you liked it and hope to have more up soon.
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Hi Paula,
I will definitely allow them to have more moments like that because Bella needs to thaw out and give Edward a chance. James and Victoria do have a definite plan but it won't be so easy with Edward aware that something is up. Thnaks for enjoying
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Peace*Love*Twilight on -
Michelle,
Again, amazing job! I always love opening up my mailbox and seeing I have a message from you saying you updated. Not only do I get to read this great story, I get to read a nice long chapter too.
The boys picking on Edward even though 2 of them didn't know him that well was great. I escpecially loved when Sam commented on asking Bella out and the reaction from Edward. Also, loved the comment about how Edward didn't like "gossiping like school girls". That was great. Edward and Bella getting to "share a moment" on the bridge....so sweet. And even though it really wasn't gentlemen like I LOVED how Edward put Victoria "in her place". Glad to see that Edward and Bella seem to be getting a long better now. I hope while they are camping they can maybe work though a couple of things to become even better friends. I am worried about Bella now that Edward figured out that James and Victoria are up to something. Not that it is really that shocking as to how they have been acting towards Edward and Bella, but makes me nervous nonetheless. I am glad that Edward figured it out though and that he is going to get Emmett to watch her and help her if need be. I just hope Edward helps her as well if need be. Maybe Emmett and Edward can get Jasper, Tyler and Sam's help too. Seems like they would be happy to help her as well. Anyway, AWESOME work. I will be eagerly awaiting the next time you update. :) -
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Hiya Peace*Love*Twilight,
Thanks for outlining all the things you loved about this chapter. We are moving slowly towards Bella and Edward having a different view of one another. I am so happy that you enjoyed so many of the interactions coming from different characters. Thanks for reading and commenting. I always appreciate it.
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Wendy D {#1 Stalker Fan} on -
Wow Michelle!! First, how are you dear?! I so understand your pain and hope all is better for you now!
I really enjoyed this chapter...really....It was nice to see that Bella and Edward are still drawn to each other and allowed themselves a special moment on the bridge. I am dying to find out what idiotic idea Bella has in her head from some stupid and insane person...could James and Victoria have been planning something as far back as that??
Hmmm......anyhoo...James and Victoria are definitely up to something but I have no fear that the Scooby Gang won't let anything happen to Bella or Edward. They may not be able to keep them from trying now and then, and being in the Bush, in tents...not liking this idea at all...but I have faith that Bella will be protected!
Sadly, I have a sinking feeling that Victoria and James are going to concoct something involving Victoria trying to hookup with Edward and being caught by Bella, which then pushes her into James open arms...Yuck!!
Poor Ali, she's having trouble with the altitude and temp changes...but have no fear, Jaz is here!!
Love Sam and Tyler....keeping it real! it is obvious to everybody around them that they like each other! Time to get it all out in the open, but I do know you Michelle, you got a lot of "situations" for them to get into and more "lightbulb" moments before we get our HEA!
I am willing to wait!! Always worth the wait!!! Woo Hoo!!!
Earl and Kaia…happy dancing together…*sighs—love is in the air*
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Permalink Reply by Jazmett Luver on -
This chapter was total awesomeness.
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Permalink Reply by Izzy_Ness_Black on -
little by little they will be closer lol, Update me when you can
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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They sure will Izzy Ness Black. It's the waiting that is not so much fun right??
Thanks for reading
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by Michelle on
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Hi Wendy,
Let me tell you first of all that all I have been able to think about whilst my back was hurting was that you have been dealing with this for months and in so much more of a negative way than me. My heart goes out to you putting up with this day in and day out. Know that I am always thinking of you and sending good thoughts your way in the hopes that you get the improvement you so desperately need. Thankfully my back has been improving with treatment and although not a hundred percent it is definitely better.
Thanks for all your thoughts on the chapter. You are right on with some of them and others not so much. Of course I tend to drag these things out.....oops....can't help myself.
Keep yourself well. Have just posted the next chapter so hope you enjoy the interactions in that one!!!
Cheers
Michelle
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Permalink Reply by MischiefManaged~ on -
:O I so knew that James and Victoria were planning something, that's just in their nature, haha. I wish I could go hiking in the bush in Australia, that would be so cool! Victoria is a baby and needs to learn to carry her own things without complaining, also she needs to stop assuming things. As the saying goes, to assume makes an a** out of you and me. xD I'm glad Bella is being civil, it just makes for a nicer Bella, haha. Oh , and I left a comment about the other chapter, it's just that it was hidden among the other comments you replied to. Just thought I'd let you know, I don't want you thinking I'm slacking off on my commenting duty. xD Haha, well anyways another great chapter and I am eager for more! I wanna see what happens on the camping trip, I wonder if it will change some things dramatically.... Well bye Michelle! :D
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