A misconception kept them apart. A once in a lifetime experience might be enough to bring them together. Bella and Edward are about to learn some home truths about themselves and each other as they take a journey to Australia and find that things aren't always what they seem.
I know I said I wasn't sure if I would write another one but I couldn't help it. This was planned before I decided to help AnahyR bring her story ideas to life and I put it on hold. It keeps going around and around in my mind so I have chosen to just go with it and see how it pans out. I hope you enjoy.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
Loss to Love: Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
Loss to Love was written on the basis of AnayhR's ideas.
I'm guessing James? I could be terribly wrong but he's the only villain-y guy in the story so I'd like to dump all the blame on him. *smiles sheepishly*
You have me even more excited about what's to happen! It's been some time since you posted a new chapter though. I hope you're doing well.
I will always read your stories Michelle and someday would love to see you as a published author. You will have to send me a signed copy when you finally write one, okay?
First off, hopefully you see my comment sooner rather than later, haha. and now to my commenting of the story. Rose is freaking amazing!! I love her to death, I absolutely love how you've portrayed her in your story and I was wondering if we'll get to see some Em/Rose pairing? I am so glad she talked Deborah all the way into what she should do and finding out about Rose's past was shocking. As for Edward, he's jealous of Jake, poor guy, if only he knew the thoughts that go through Bella's head...oh wait, he does, in a different story, hahaha. Hm, Bella, poor girl, I can't help but feel bad for her. This emotional turmoil is taking a physical toll on her and it is not good. I really hope the private investigator finds the truth and she can finally see Edward is the good guy and Jessica is a b****. Pardon my language there, got a bit angry, as you can tell I don't like her, haha. So glad you showed us the flashback of why Bella doesn't trust Edward and all I can say is Jessica is a conving mean person who doesn't deserve Bella's trust. Well I do hope Bella contacts the private investigator soon because I really want them to start a relationship!! Haha, well anyways, here's my usual ending, great chapter and I can't wait for more! (:
I am looking out for them now since it doesn't register on my page like everyone elses does :)
Thnaks for loving Rosalie so much - I see her as a strong character but wanted to make her a little more likeable than usual. She can be no nonsense and still have a heart I believe.
Edward is definitely jealous of Jacob and it remains to be seen if he has anything truly to worry about there. Jacob will be making his feelings known once he gets to know Bella more - that's all I am saying.
The private investigator will not be used for a little while but I can tell you this - Jessica is not deliberately being a b..... she did not realise what impact she had on Bella by telling her who the baby's father was. Another miscommunication that has led to lots of heart ache for Bella and Edward.
Hope you continue to enjoy and thank you for always giving me such positive feedback and thoughts.
Yay! And that's weird, TTS doesn't like me, rude, haha. Darn, miscommunications suck, especially when they keep you from something you wanted, I would know, ha. You are most welcome for my feedback and thoughts. So glad you like them. (:
Oh Michelle!!! You are so brilliant you always keep me on the edge of my seat and dying for more! I love that Deb is going through with it all. I am so happy that she has Rose. I love that Rose and Jacob are joking and friendly towards each other. I am so happy that Rose is there to help out as much as she is! I also love that Jacob is being Jacob. lol He is going to stir things up and I love it! I hope that Bella calls Jason and gets ahold of Jess! I have a feeling she is closer then Bella would think. Very curious about that. I also hope that Bella Edward and Jess ahve a group discussion! I want Jess to tell the truth and that the truth is that she was wrong and whoever Edward was fighting with when Jess said it was Edward is the real father and its a miscommunication. Oh please please please post more very soon!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!! You did so freaking good with this chapter! More proof of why I love everything you write and how amazingly talented you are!!!
Thankyou for the kind words. It sincerely makes me happy to know that people are enjoying the story and like the way I am conveying teh characters.
Jacob will definitely stir things up but maybe that is what Bella and Edward need to get it together.
You might be right about Jessica being closer than she thinks. A group discussion between the three of them would be very interesting indeed - I think I would like to be a fly on the wall for that one.
I like the way you think about how there could have been a miscommunication.
Thanks again for the support.
Loved the chapter!
Rosalie is so great in this story, and she also has some similarities with the Rosalie in the original story. She is a very good friend to Bella and she was a great help with Deborah. Jake definitely likes Bella in this story too, and he could force Edward to work harder to win Bella's heart. I also think the person on the other side of the argument (probably James) was the culprit, and Jessica was too chicken to tell Bella when she mistakenly identified Edward. She did not have the courage to correct her because she might have preferred it that Bella didn't know who the real culprit was. I really hope Jason Jenks the private investigator can find her so that Bella can confront her. It is unfair to her and Edward that they both have to suffer because of her dishonesty and fear. They could help her of she would just trust them. I wonder what her reaction would be if she saw James again ... if he is the culprit as I suspect! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Hiya Seugnet du Toit
Seriously happy that you enjoyed this chapter - I have to admit I was worried about how everyone would take the backstory and how many would be giving me a hard time.
You are correct about Jake - he will try his hand at getting Bella to succumb to his charms - will it work?
You have some interesting theories in your comment and some of it might just be correct ;)
Jason won't be needed for a while - that's all I am saying on that one.
Edward's reaction to finding out what she has believed will be interesting to say the least.
The next few chapters will have our boy doing his darndest to get Bella to admit her attraction to him and will hopefully have some fun times ( amidst teh drama).
Thanks for your theories and input.
Your story (like the first part of Twilight) reminds me a little of Pride and Prejudice with all the misunderstandings!
Amzing as always!!
Keep Me posted!
Love it! you are a great writer. I can't wait to read your next update and to find out what she finds out about Jessica!