i don't find it excellent at all, i felt she worote it just because... there was a huge lack of emotion there, i thought that ian's feelings and reactions would be stronger as if you could feel his emotions but everything was very plain, no extreme feelings, no tears running down your cheeks while you're reading, etc.... in my opinion it was good, but not excelent...
yeah, i was so excited to read it, and when i did, i was like.: ...oh... its' really no enoguh....... i thoiught she was going to continue till Wanda wakes up,
and what aboiut JaMIE??? I MEAN we did not see his reaction to his sis. and in the Host, Ian told wanda that he held her in his hands and i really reallt really... wnated to see that, or rather read it but you know what i mean
yeah there was so many things missing in the chapter.... i wanted to read a little about the mel jared and jamie's raid to find a new body, about ian holding wanda on his hands, staying next to her new body till she woke up.... i was dissapointed