The Twilight Saga

umm i wrote this story just for fun ! :D

it is set after breaking dawn ..



renesme`s point of view


oh my god ,  i cant believe it , after 3 months ill turn immortal , this is unbelievable !!

i was sitting on my bed admiring myself {somthing i learned from my untie} , in this stage i look like a 15 year old girl , i didnt have alot of time to admir myself , my parents interrupted me by nocking on the door..

"oh honey , you look gorgous"momma said.. actually even if i wore garbage , my mom will think im gorgous,  dad chuckled at that though ...

"come on lets go to the big house " i said , i cant wait to see my jacob

"but first lets get you something to eat " dad said

"cant we hunt on our way??'i asked

"no honey , we`ll be late like that "dad replied

"ok" i said and followed them downstairs , but i went to the living room instead pf the kitchen , i wanted to gather some nice movies for us to watch at the big house , after i finished gathering some movies , i went to the kitchen , dad was cooking some eggs , mom was giggling while she was getting a small bottle containing blood from the refrigiator, i sat on the chair while dad gave me my plate and mom pured some blood into a meduim sized cup.

after i finished my breakfast , mom said, "ok then lets go "

"ok"both dad and i said at the same time , i giggled , he just smiled

dad took mom`s hand and both of them led the way . when we were half way to the big house , i smelled an old smell that i used to love soo much, mom grined at dad and dad smiled at her , oh my god , i just recognized the smell , really ? i asked my dad in my mind  , i looked at him and he nodded , "zafrina" i shouted and went running to her , i hugged her , she hugged me back . " i miss you "i murmurd under her hair. "i miss you too "she replied ..

"ok kids lets get inside"grandma said , but when i was approching inside i noticed something that really made me disappointed , i mean he always wait for me , is he late ? or he`s just lurking somewhere ?

i started spinning my head left and right ," he`s not here "uncle jasper said

"yet' i said , becuase i new that jacob cannot stand a day without seeing me ..

"ok lets wait for him inside then " he said

"come renesme , there is alot of things i want to tell you "zafrina told me

i spend the whole pretending to hear zafrina ,while i was actually worried about jacob.. the more minutes passed, the more worry started to show on my face , at 4 pm , still no show , so i went to my parents , they  were sitting on the porch

i slammmed the door open and before i could speak, dad said "sweetie , jacob didnt arrive yet , sweetie i dont think he`ll come today "

"but why?"

"honey , you can ask him if he comes tomorrow "mom said

"if he comes tommorrw?"i shouted at her face

"RENESME CARLIE CULLEN  you dont shout at elders espically your mom , do you understand?" dad shouted at me ..

dad NEVER shouted at me.....

i backed away and started running back to the house to the only person that can sooth me , untie rosalie, i went running into her room and hugged her , when she saw me like that, she jumped out of her place and started babbling about what happend and who did this to me but the only i could do was cry ...

then she made me sit on her lap and she started rubbing my back ,

"now who made my grandchild cry?" grandpa said while coming into the room , he stoped at the door frame, then dad came in and stood beside grandpa without saying anything ..once untie rosalie realized that dad came she exploded in his face.."edward how dare you shout at your only daughter"?

"edward your in a big plight"uncle emmett said from behind while coming to the room followed by uncle jasper "nessie if you want revenge , were here for you "

this time it was untie alice who spoke "orr , we can dress up your father and take pictures of him , and make fun of him , you just choose"

"no seriosly my  dad has the right to shout at me , because i shouted at my mom , sorry daddy "

"im not the one who your supposed to apologize for "

i new what did he meant by that , so i went to where mom was, she was in grandpa`s office sitting alone giving me her back..

"mom"i said

she spun around and i saw something that i didnt expect , her face was filled with torment

as soon as i saw her face i went running to her and hugged her , " im sooo sorry mom , i really didnt mean to shout at you , momma please forgive me , please , i promise i wont shout at you again"

"its ok sugar , its gonna be fine"

"momy please forgive me "

"honey i forive you" after all the hugging , dad came in and hugged us both , then all three of us went downstairs , then dad said to me  "ok renesme go wish everyone goodnight "

when i saw my watch it was passed my bedtime so i understood and went kissed and hugged and wished everyone goodbeye..

we went to our small cottage , i went to my room  and mom and dad went to their room , i really sometimes wish i can  be a kid again , i started to remmber when daddy used to sing me my lullaby until i sleep and mom stay by my side either rubbing my back or kissing my head or sometimes they would both tell me stories  , i wished he could sing for me today and she would sit and rubb my back , after  i wore my pjm`s and got out of the bathroom , i saw mom and dad sitting both on my bed smiling ..

"so lullaby or story?"dad said , i giggled , and went to sit on my momma`s lap while daddy sang my lullaby until i slept dreamlessly....



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love it <333
keep me updated!!!
love shauny
Great Chapter :)
Write More Soon
Loved it <3
It was a great long chapter!! Keep going!! :)
The plot line is really interesting.
Please update soon!!
I CAN'T wait!! *smiles*

Kay ppl so , am gonna continue my story !! since all of you asked me to !!! hehehe

Chapter 22
Nessie`s point of view

Jacob and I played with adam while Emily made for us some food . after couple of seconds sam joined us , adam was such a cute boy .. he always smile !!
Jacob kept on tickling him ; adam tried to run away from him - while laughing hard – and tried to reach sam but Jacob wouldn’t let him ! everyone was laughing .. it was nice to laugh like this . then Emily came and took adam from jacob ! and then she told us “ the food is ready “ we were about to stand up ( me , sam and Jacob) but then from nowhere all the wolfes joined!!
“ yess , am hungry “ embry said
“ hhh your always hungry “ I said while giggling
Seth rubbed his hand together ( showing that he was hungry too ) I giggled again
“ come ness , grabb something because after exactly one second the food will be gone “ Jacob said .. I smiled and then went and sat on his lap ( there was no enough chairs ) ..
Emily grabbed a plate and put in it a lot of food and then she nudged my shoulders and then said while heading to the couch
“ come ness , let the boys fight over the food while we girls sit here peacefully and enjoy our meal “
“ kayy “ I jumped from Jacobs lap and went to sit beside her
Jacob let out a huge sigh , I looked at him and smiled , I went back to him , then he grinned but I kissed him on the cheeks and then went back to emily
“ oh come on “ he said
“ ok guys so one ..” paul said ..everyone hovered over the food “ two three” jared continued , and then all of them started picking the food and stuffing it into their mouths ! even adam !! god they ruined the boy .. Emily sat beside me and laughed with me .. then we ate !!
After we finished Jacob and I sayed our goodbyes and went .
“ so ness , what do you wanna do ?” jake asked
“ hmmm dunno”
“ umm lets race to our place “ he suggested , I agreed and then we started running ..
After running for 2 miles maybe , Jacob started slowing down , I thought that maybe he wanted to trick me so I kept on running but then he stopped and froze . I turned my head and saw him starring at me , this is serious !! I thought , so i walked back to him …..

Hehe sry for the small chapter !!! i`ll write soon asap !
hihi they really have ruined the boy!!!
but whats up with jake ???
keep me updated!!
love shauny
Awesome! Write more sooon XD
I loved it :)
WRITE MORE SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sure sure !!
write more u cant just leve it like that i nee more
who is it??? is it Aro??? is it kristie???? STOP THE DARN CLIFFES plz.... nice chappy
I loved it.
Post more soon.
I don't like cliffy's but I'll live ;)
Can't wait to see what happens next!
hey you gotta post more that was a major cliffhanger and i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......please post more!


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