The Twilight Saga

When I see your face,

Theres not a thing that I would Change

Cause You're Amazing

Just the way you are



This is my Nessie story to go along with my Seth and Embry imprint Story.




                I felt swelled with power as I watched their silent advance. I used to think they were no danger to us. But now they came to collect and kill.

                Now we stood hopeless and alone against their menacing power.

                My mom, my dad, my Jacob and my new reason to live. They were all at stake. I had to protect my family.  


(Here's the link to the imprint story this was inspired by-

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Why the forks would she say "no" to my (or hers, already) Jacob? If she won't marry Jacob, then I will!



By the way, this was an awesome chapter. Forgive me if I haven't comment on your previous posts...


Please post more! I really do love it. Please keep up your wonderful work!


And take your time.


Every chapter is a climax!


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Y did she say No...


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what she did not say no?!? did she????
She did o_o
why would she say no?!?!?! That's crazy she but she is but....agghhh update plz
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He slid down to one knee, taking my hand. My breath caught in my throat. “Renesmee Carlie Cullen, I love you more than anything in this world. You are my best friend, my love, my imprint and you’re carrying our child. I want to spend the rest of eternity with you. Will you marry me?” He pulled a small velvet covered box out of his pocket and flipped it open to reveal a diamond ring nestled deep into the velvet cushion.

                My mouth dropped open. I didn’t know what to say or do. Should I kiss him? I blinked and barely heard myself  as the word “no” slid out of my mouth…)


Chapter 9


                “No,” I whispered.

                His expression blanked, “No?”


                I think his jaw hit the floor after that. He was probably trying to figure out my no and the only answer that would come up with would be that I didn’t love him. But that wasn’t true. I loved him very much; I just questioned the motive behind his proposal.

                “Why?” He asked in a husky voice, standing up from where he was.

                I cleared my throat and looked down at my fingers as I started explaining. “I don’t want a shot gun wedding. Or even for people to think that’s the only reason that you asked me to marry you. People have strong opinions about, well, everything involving children and marriage.” I paused. “I just think you’re asking me for the wrong reasons.”

                He looked… stricken. So sad and a little angry. I could only imagine what he was thinking. Probably something along the lines of “The woman I love doesn’t want to marry me because she thinks I don’t love her.”

                In fact, I was sure that was exactly what he had been thinking.

                He slumped back in his chair and crossed his arms over his chest. He sat like that for a minute before standing up abruptly and leaving without a word. I waited until he was gone to burst into tears.

                The waitress came back with two enormous plates of spaghetti. She glanced at the empty seat, then me. I pulled a random bill out of my purse.

                “I’ll give you this if you go away.”

                She gasped and the bill disappeared from my grasp. I looked at the spaghetti. It looked really good. Very good. I picked up my fork and stabbed it, dragging the plate toward me. Yes, the spaghetti was awesome.

                Jacob came back and sat down with a heavy sigh. “Are you ready to go?”

                I had cleared my plate and a small portion of Jacob’s as well. I was staring at my five month belly. I was getting pretty big but I loved it. Being pregnant was amazing. “Are you mad at me?”

                He chuckled lightly. “Kind of. I don’t know how to react. You said no. Damn, I hope I can return this ring.”

                “Don’t return it.”

                “Well, there’s no point in keeping it if you don’t want to marry me.”

                “Jakey, I said no because people will think you only proposed because I’m knocked up.”

                He sighed, “I guess people would think that.”

                “Yeah, but if you would’ve asked at any other time I would’ve said yes.”

                He grinned, “So am I early or late?”

                “Eh, late. But seriously, yes. I will marry you. I just won’t wear the ring at school.”

                “Wait what?”

                “YES,” I laughed. “Can I make it any more clear?”

                He chuckled and stood, taking me into his arms and pressing his lips to mine. There was a lot of passion behind the kiss. I liked it, a lot.

                “I love you, Jacob Black.”

                “I love you, Renesmee Cullen.”


                I kissed Jake as I walked out of the house that morning. “Good morning, Mr. Black.”

                “Good morning, soon to be Mrs. Black.”

                I heard dad growl inside. I laughed, “Let us go!” I looped my arm through his and skipped off toward the big house. It was Saturday and Maya and Mia were meeting us at the big house. Maya had just broken up with Seth and she was depressed as hell. Mia was still… freaking out about the wolves and vampires issues. She flinched every time one of us touched her. Maya had seemed distant the past few days though. She’d done a lot of blank staring at walls and just plain staying silent.

                When we go there, Maya and Mia were sitting on the couch talking in hushed whispers that even I couldn’t hear. But it was clear they were arguing. Mia was tense and I could see Maya’s scowl.

                “You need to tell him!” Mia whispered louder.

                “I can’t,” Maya cried.

                “Maya,” She groaned.

                “Hey girls,” Jake greeted loudly.

                They jumped and turned to us with guilty smiles. I smiled and waved, one hand cradling my tummy. What I wouldn’t  give to have dad next to me to tell me what Maya was thinking. “So, what were you two talking about?” I asked.

                “Maya refuses to tell Seth something important.”

                “What is it?”

                “Are you being nosey, Nessie?”

                “Yes, it’s a motherly instinct.”

                Maya laughed, “I’ll tell you later. When Jake isn’t here because he’ll just tell everybody.” She raised her brows at him.

                He ran a hand through his hair. “Well, since I can’t exactly disagree with that, so I guess I’ll just be going.”

                “Bye, Jacob.” I got on my toes and pressed my lips to his.

                “Bye Nessie, he whispered, kissing the tip of my nose. “I love you.”

                “I love you too.” I watched him walk out and turned back to Maya and Mia. They were both watching with envy.

                Maya sighed dramatically. “Your relationship with Jacob is so pure and simple.”

                I laughed, “He proposed to me last night.”

                “Ah! Ness! I’m so happy for you!” Maya hugged me, smiling. “I wish things with Seth had turned out like that.” She sighed.

                “So what were you two talking about?”

                “Uh, is Carlisle here?”

                “I think so, why?”

                “Well, I uh, I’m pregnant.” She mumbled.

                I stared at her. “You too?”

                “Yeah, because there aren’t enough pregnant imprints.”

                “Hey, Emily gave birth two weeks ago!” I giggled.

                “That was what, her third child?” She laughed, but I could tell that it was forced.

                “Yeah,” She tapped her fingers together. “But, I never thought I’d be a pregnant teen. I didn’t exactly plan for it…”

                “None of us planned for it, Hun. And let me tell you right now, it’s amazing. I love being pregnant.”

                “But I was only with Seth for a few weeks! And I only slept with him a few times! This shouldn’t have happened.” She patted her still flat belly. “I can’t believe there’s actually something growing in there.” She stared at it like she was trying to see through her own flesh.

                Speaking of flesh, I needed to hunt. I hadn’t done it many times since I found out I was pregnant but I could feel the light nagging burn at the back of my throat. It was nothing near as bad as a full vampire’s burn but it was irritating. I hated when I got so thirsty it seemed almost itchy. I just wanted to reach in and scratch it.

                “Can I see Carlisle?” She asked nervously, snapping me out of my thoughts. It occurred to me that I had been listening to their pulsing hearts more than their actual words.

                “Sure, follow me!” I got up and started up the stairs to Carlisle’s study. I knocked tentatively on the door and waited for him to answer.

                “Come in!” He called after a moment.

                I opened the door and found Carlisle sitting there with a large book in front of him and Esme was in a chair across the room with a much smaller book in her hands. “Yes, Renesmee,” He glanced behind me. “Hello Maya and Mia.” He offered them a grin. Maya returned it easily and Mia kind of hung back.

                “Maya needs to talk to you for a minute. I need to go do something real quick. I’ll be back in ten minutes. Take your time.” I sent him a look hoping he knew he had to stall so I could hunt.

                “I’ll come with you, Nessie.” Esme put a book mark in her book and stood up to follow me. I could see her eyes were a little darker than usual.

                “Okay!” I walked out of the room at a human pace so I didn’t scare Mia. Once I got to the stairs, I took off. Esme was keeping up with me easily. I took down two deer, draining them in no time. I turned to find Esme done with her deer as well.

                “You full?”

                I shook a little. “Uh, yeah, I am.”

                She chuckled. “Let’s go back then,” She ran off without me.

                I followed more slowly. Soon, I heard the leaves rustle and sighed as Jacob came up beside me in wolf form. He walked beside me at the same pace. I ran my fingers through his fur. My wolf was so beautiful. My heart was swelling with so much love. For Jacob, for my baby, for my family. I loved them all so much.

                I smiled at him. “Hello wolf. Lovely day, isn’t it?”

                He gave me a wolfy grin. Then ran off to change back to my Jacob. He came back, slipping his arm around my waist and kissing my neck. “Hello soon to be Mrs. Black.” He got in front of me and kneeled in front of me, kissing my belly, “Other Miss Black.”

                I giggled. “Mr. Black, get up off your knees and escort me back to the house.”

                He winked, “Sounds kinky.”

                “You’re nasty,” I smacked his chest.

                He took my hand in his and brought it to his face, kissing my knuckles gently. “I love you.”

                “I love you too,” I kissed his cheek and pulled him toward the big house. I heard arguing and hurried faster. It wasn’t Maya and Mia, it was Maya and Seth. They were in the front room, facing each other. Maya had her hands of her hips, her eyes stormy. Seth had his arms crossed over his chest.

                They didn’t even notice our entrance. “When did you plan on telling me?” Seth asked, the venom clear in his voice.

                “When I was ready. I’m still adjusting to this! It’s not that easy to think about!” She sighed and ran her hand through her hair. “I haven’t even told my parents yet.”

                “Well I have a right to know first if I’m the father.”

                I looked at Jacob. What? Father of what?

                He shook his head. He had no idea either.

                “I think telling my parents is a little more important since I live under their roof!”

                “I have rights to it!”

                “I know you do! But you’ve been avoiding me like the plague! How the hell was I going to tell you if you won’t talk to me?”

                “I don’t know! Drop me a note of something?”

                “That’s a pathetic way to tell you I’m pregnant! What are you doing here anyway?”

                PREGNANT?!?! The thought was sent forcefully to Jake. I was shocked. Really, really shocked. Maya, pregnant? But she never seemed like the type… Heck, I didn’t either. It was always the good girls.

                “I was here to raid the fridge. Instead I heard your conversation with Carlisle. Pregnant,” He scoffed.  

                “Uh, sorry to interrupt.” They both jumped and turned to face us. Maya’s face reddened slightly, realizing we’d just heard that. I continued, “Maya you’re pregnant?”

                Her cheeks got darker. “Uh, yeah.”

                “And Seth isn’t being very supportive.” Jake turned his glare on the pup, having said that part. “It’s your responsibility, man.”

                Seth laughed humorlessly. “Damn, they always turn on the guy who got her pregnant.” He swatted something off the table, cursed and left quickly.

                Maya looked ready to burst into tears. Before she could, she ran off to the powder room. I ran after her. No girl should be alone in this! I found her crying and leaned over the toilet, retching. She sat back against the vanity and sobs started to shake her body. She cried and cried while I tried to soothe her. Jake wasn’t with me, so I assumed her ran after Seth.

                Mia eventually came looking for us. “Maya?” She called.

                “We’re in here!” I replied.

                She walked in to find Maya still crying and me trying to calm her down. If only Uncle Jasper was there. “Oh god, are you okay? What did he say?” She huddled up to Maya’s other side, laying her head and Maya’s shoulder.

                “H-he was so angry that I didn’t tell him!” Maya sobbed. She leaned into her sister’s shirt helplessly. “I don’t know what to do. If he doesn’t help me I’m screwed.”

                I wanted a twin. The soothing affect Mia had on Maya was almost as good as Jasper. Just her presence had Maya calming down. Sadly, I didn’t think Mom would be up for giving me a twin.

                I heard the door open and slam shut. Maya’s whimpers had died down. When Seth’s familiar voice rang out from the kitchen, her breathing halted. Mia’s expression morphed into one of anger and she pushed up off the floor and stomped into the kitchen.

                “Seth Clearwater! Who do you think you are?”

                Maya looked helpless again and a little green. I turned away when she started retching again.

                “What do you mean?”

                “My sister is in there crying because of you! What gives you the right to yell at her for you ignoring her?!”

                She had a good point. “I-I don’t—”

                “No, I don’t want any freaking excuses! You have no right, Seth Clearwater! No right!” She stomped her foot comically. “She’s freaking out enough because she can’t get used to the idea of being a mother and now you just waltz in and start telling her it was wrong to keep it from you?! If you had just given her five minutes of your time, instead of ease dropping on a private  conversation, we wouldn’t be standing here right now and I wouldn’t be getting ready to whoop your *bleep*.”

                I giggled and looked at Maya, who was smiling faintly. “You have an awesome sister.”

                She swallowed, “I know. And I’ve never loved her more.”

                Mia came stomping back in, apparently done with her rant. Her eye was twitching in agitation. “Self centered son of a—”

                “Mia, don’t finish that sentence.” Maya reprimanded.

                “Sorry,” She mumbled.

                “Thank you so much,” Maya told her, “For defending me. You didn’t have to.”

                “Of course I did. It’s what siblings are for.”

                A tear escaped my eye. I wanted a sibling so badly. But I knew I wasn’t getting one. I hoped my baby would have many siblings. She deserved it. And more.


(A/N: I gave you a nice long chapter. Here you will get to see most of Maya's pregnancy! So stay for the ride! Thanks for reading!!)

wow!! amazing !! i loved this chapter :) i can't believe Seth !!! and mia is awesome really awesome !! i want a sister like that :) 

amazing chapter , can't wait for the next update :)


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