The Twilight Saga


**STORY NOW ON INDEFINITE HIATUS** This is the story of Edward's life after transformation/pre Bella, from his POV. I sort of wrote it for myself at first, as an exercise, but then I decided to share it. It may be a little boring. There isn't really much action yet, it's mostly Carlisle explaining things to him and helping him with his new life. I hope you enjoy it! Please let me know what you think! **all characters property of the wonderful Stephenie Meyer**

Posts are on pages 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 7, 9, 10, 11, 14, 15, 17, 19 and 20 with pages 2 and 3 containing 2 posts. (Thanks, Lestat for reminding me to add this little guide!)

Thud… thud… thud. Silence.

The relief I felt once the fire had finally ceased didn’t last. I opened my eyes, and the world was not as I remembered.

I could see, hear and feel everything around me… It was frightening, but I couldn’t help but feel fascinated. I looked around the room. I could see each brushstroke in the painting across from me… I could hear the sound of burrowing outside… termites, I assumed, as I could also smell the woody scent of sawdust… and I could feel every stitch of fabric in the sheet that I lay on. I didn’t recognize my surroundings, and before I could think about what I was doing, I leapt out of my bed and across the room at a speed that didn’t seem possible. I spun around and was automatically in a crouch. What was happening?

There was a man sitting next to the bed I had been lying in less than a second ago. I recognized him. This had been my doctor at the hospital, I was sure of it. I watched him carefully. I could hear him saying “I’m sorry, I’m so, so sorry. I cannot believe I did this.” But he wasn’t moving his lips…

And then all of a sudden the doctor was gone and I was looking at a younger man, standing across the room from me. He had very pale skin… and bronze hair… He looked like me, but different, too. I flinched when I saw his bright red eyes. His features were more chiseled and defined than mine were, and he looked more muscular…

“What is happening? What did you do to me?” I said in a whisper. Upon hearing my own voice, I cocked my head in confusion. It did not sound like my own.

“Edward, I know that this is very confusing, but please, you must listen,” he said aloud. And then, without moving his lips, he added, I need to get him outside… he must be in a terrible thirst.

Then it happened again, something took over my body and it acted without my mind telling it to. My throat burst into wild flames and I threw myself out the door and directly toward the moist, beating sound I could hear nearby. I could sense the man following me, but I wasn’t able to turn away. I ran toward the sound faster than lightening. I needed something, anything, to quench this fire in my throat. I took hold of the first thing I reached. Not even realizing what it was, or what I was doing, I buried my teeth into its neck and bled it dry. I threw it aside and did it again and again, until I felt like my body couldn’t hold anything more. The taste in my mouth was terrible, but at least my throat had quieted.

All the while, the man stood back, watching me. Once I had finished, I realized that there were dead animals all around me. I was too shocked to speak. I looked at the man pleadingly for some kind of explanation. Never in my wildest dreams was I prepared for what he said next.

“Edward, my name is Dr. Carlisle Cullen, and I need to explain what has happened to you. Do you remember being in the hospital?” He asked in a slow, wavering voice.

I nodded, unable to speak.

“Both you and your parents had been brought to the hospital to die. Pardon me for being so blunt, but it is true. You were all infected with the Influenza, and there was nothing that could medically be done to help any of you. You already knew that your father had passed away, and soon after, your mother died as well. I check-”

“My mother is dead?” I interrupted, horrified. I gasped, even more horrified when I saw my mother’s pale, drawn face in my mind. Had I seen her before she died, and didn’t remember? Where did this image come from?

Carlisle looked confused by my actions. “I am afraid so, Edward. The Influenza is a horrible illness. Very few have been able to survive it. I checked on the two of you as often as I could, and the last time I saw your mother alive, she looked at me as if she knew what I was, that I was something… else, and begged me to save you. I knew it was most likely the fever speaking, but she looked at me with such clarity in that moment, that I could not believe her to be delusional. I told her that I would do whatever I could. She had used up all of her strength, and she dropped into unconsciousness and passed quickly,” he said, looking at me with pity in his eyes.

He walked slowly toward me with his hands up. I let him approach, unable to move. He placed his hand on my shoulder before speaking.

“I am so very sorry for your loss, Edward. Please try to take comfort in the fact that she did pass quickly. She loved you very, very much. I could see it in her eyes,” he said, before continuing his story.

“I looked at you in the bed next to her. You were so close to death, Edward. In a mere hour or two, it would have been too late. I took care of your mother, and then I covered you with a sheet and wheeled you to the back entrance. The hospital was in utter chaos with so many patients, so I knew that your absence would not be noticed. I carried you here, to my home and tried to make you as comfortable as possible, before beginning the process.”

“The… process?” I choked out. This was utterly ludicrous! If I had been so close to death, how was I not dead, as my parents were?

“Yes. I know this is going to be hard to hear, and I apologize again, but I believe that it is very important that you understand. The process began when I administered venom into your body. Over the course of three days, the venom took over your system in a very painful transformation. I know that it was torturous. I am very sorry for that, but as of yet I have heard of no way to lessen the pain. At the end of the third day, your human heart stopped beating and the transformation was complete.”

I winced sharply when he reminded me of my transformation, as he called it. That was something I never wanted to remember, but doubted I would ever forget. His entire explanation was insane, but one phrase stood out to me. “Human heart?” I asked.

“Yes, Edward. This will be very shocking, so please, brace yourself. It was the only way that I could fulfill my promise to your mother and save you.” He waited until I nodded again. This entire story sounded like the plot of a horror novel. What was going to come out of his mouth next?

“You are now a vampire.”

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wow. as usual its very good.

Very good with the story of how Esme didn't stop herself from drinking blood. I know that she had drank human blood because of what Rosalie said in Eclipse, that she was the only one "clean" asides from Carlisle. =p this is very good.

I can't help but feel sorrow and pain when reading Edward's thoughts and sentiments about his new life. Wow. Now I understand why Edward didn't believe in heaven or hell or the after life. I love this. I hope you continue till the very end! I mean when he meets Bella. hahaha =p lol

but its up to you =p and I would love to read about how Edward left Carlisle and Esme. The things he experienced, what he was thinking at the moment and what made him come back. =p

It was worth the wait Vanquish. =p I can't wait to read more. =p you are very talented. and I would not want you to end this. hahaha =p

keep on writing! =p and I will keep on reading =p
WOW, Vanquish!!!

Edward REALLY despises himself!!!!! Him thinking at the end . . . "and still had the possibility of going to heaven. Unlike myself."

WOW!!!!!

This was FANTASTIC!!!
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WOW!!!!
i did not expect that to happen! even though i knew esme had killed someone (by something rosalie said in one of the books..) i was still completely shocked when i read it! that was FANTASTIC!!!
my goodness my eyes are still wide open. i still cant get over how fantastic you are :)
OME ! Vanquish, WOW ! WOW! WOW!
I hardly know what to say about how this chapter effected me ! I can still feel
Edward's feeling deep inside my very being ! You have certainly captured Edward's
very nature and soul. I feel as tho I have actually just lived thourgh the entire
episode you just wrote. So real...so totally real ! I am still stunned with feelings
you evoked in me. My heart is pounding as if I just experienced all Edwards feelings, and everything he just experienced.
FANTISTIC ! Waiting for more........ please.
Holy moly! Thanks so much, Faye, wow! I'd say I'm sorry to have made your heart go crazy, but I'm glad I was able to do it, haha!! More to come soon!
THANK YOU! What a wonderful compliment, I really appreciate that!
Great job, Vanquish! You did a superb job of letting us feel Edward's anguish, frustration and bloodlust.
I love it !
Beautifully written review, Lestat!
You're an amazing writer, I still can't get over that fact I really can't.
I've literally been speachless the whole time, it's amazing!
Please please please write more.
x
more please?
Marvelous. Amazing. Perfect. I love this story. It is beautiful and you write so well. Again, I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment, hoping that you continue up until the fateful day that Edward meets Bella. ^.^

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