Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
This story is being worked on by both myself and AnahyR whose ideas are the basis for all chapters. We hope you enjoy it and would love to hear your opinions through your comments. AnahyR will also be doing this story in Spanish so for those of you who are Spanish speaking you will also have access to this at some stage. I will put the link here once it is done.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
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And thanks to Manda for this one too!! Love it.
Don't hate Rick - losing a child would be the worst possible thing in the world to deal with and he has coped the least out of everyone. His words were borne out of anger and grief and he will regret them as soon as he realises what he has done.
Edward and Bella will work through this I am sure and you will get the ending that you are hoping for.
Thanks for reading Cierra. I will post more soon.
so said but love it
keep me update
i cant believe that rick would do that to bella.. bella had come so far with the help of edward and the reat of them and in no time at all he tore her to bits.. now she wont even listen to what edward has to say..rick had no right to say the things he did to them.. james need to stay away from bella and edward.. if he runs into edward he is going to get the crap beat out of him.. dont even get me started on what emmett will do to him if emmett see him.. poor bella and edward they are both hurting so bad right now that they cant see straight..
as always love the story
It does seem like a really vindictive thing to do but ARick is coming from and place as well and we all do things we wouldn'tnecessarily do. Yeah I believe if Edward and James came across one another again then there would be hell to pay and Emmett would definitely be there to help. lol
Edward and Bella have now got to get through this silence they have put up with one another. Rick has done some damage and it will take a small miracle to make Bella see that she hasn't done anything wrong.
Thanks for reading and so glad to see you back :)
I really hate James, I can't stand him. He is so ridden on ruining Bella's life and that's exactly what he did. I really want to know why he does this to her, I mean, does he do it because of some sick sense of love or does he just love to see people in pain because of him? I'll probably never know.
Bella and Edward were moving on and she was starting to feel, to let herself feel but Rick had to go and ruin things. I know what grief feels like but stil,l he had no right to do what he did to them. He set them all back a hundred paces, I know he will feel the pain of what he did later on. I'm glad Grace could be the bigger person and find it in her heart to feel, to care even when she's lost someone so dear to her.
What Edward said to Bella is so heartbreaking, he's going to be hurting because Bella can't understand that he's there because he loves her; actually loves her. I really hope she sees that when she heals...if she heals. And I truly hope that they can get together later on because they are meant for each other.
I really started crying when Rick showed up and said those things. I was so, so, so angry and sad. I wanted to punch Rick. But in the end I just started crying because you make me feel what the characters feel. You are that good of an author and it was a well written chapter, even if it was a sad one. xD I can't wait for the next chapter and too see what's next for them.
Yes James is the ultimate bad guy in this story. He is vindictive and when he can't get what he wants he sets out to hurt in sneaky ways. Edward got in the way of him getting to Bella so now he is going to make them both pay.
Rick had absolutely no right to say what he said but he is grieving so he did a huge wrong. Sometimes as humans we aren't perfect and we don't react in the way that is expected of us. Rick is going to have to do some serious work to make anything right again with some members of this group.
Bella really hasn't accepted that Edward truly loves her - he hasn't let her know that because he would be thinking that it would scare her away when she is actually strating to tyake steps forward with him. She needs to come to terms with her own feelings as well because she knows she feels something special for him but hasn't wanted to accept that it is love and probably a love that is more powerful than what she felt for Peter - that would hurt her a great deal.
Sorry it was a sad one but I really am happy that you still think it's worth reading.
ARE YOU TRUELY SERIOUS???!!
i mean i have to admit this chapter is one of the best things i've ever read it can't be descibed for me
but come on!! you got me crying!! that was just too sad you got us believing that it was close everything was fine ..then you do this??!!
anyway i cant say i could have read a better chapter ,,,you were brilliant as usual..
just to know your fan fiction has become like a drug to me two weaks ago my computer broke down and the first thing that came to my mind was OHHH MY GOD LOSS TO LOVE!! and i kept shouting what if michelle posted another chapeter?? and my sister thought i had gone crazy!!!
your madest reader addicted ever
That is a very high compliment to say that teh chapter was that good - thank you. It had me crying while I was doing it too I have to admit because I feel so soryy for the predicament they both find themselves in. Edward has been so patient and caring and Bella was accepting that happiness could be hers.
Sorry that your computer was broken - that is so annoying when all you want to do is get on and read or do certain things. I am truly gald that you think my story is worth that kind of reaction.