Loss To Love - NOW COMPLETE

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Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 13, 2011 at 7:53pm

Hi Morgan,

 

You have read enough of my stories to know that I never let them just be happy straight away huh? lol. I feel bad for Edward too and also for Bella because she hasn't realised just how much he cares. James is a pain for all of us and Rick has a huge apology to make. I am half way through next chapter and it's still from Edward so you will see how this is panning out.

 

Thanks for reading

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by MC,Cullen<3 on March 13, 2011 at 7:57pm

Haha i have read alot of your stories havent i? but guess what?! i love them all:) lol thanks a bunch

Permalink Reply by Blacklight1798 on March 10, 2011 at 12:35am

that was so sad i cant believe rick he just had to ruin everything didnt he her happpiness her relationship with edward and her state of mind not to mention what he did to jasper edward and alice hes his own worst nemisis..........

anyway hope you post more soon

loved it

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 13, 2011 at 7:55pm

Hi Honeste,

 

It was a sad chapter but it had to be done to make them realise how much they mean to one another ( if that makes sense). Rick really did put a spanner in the works and there will now be some work to be done to get it back to good times for our two. Wonder who will do the most fighting for it????

Thanks for reading and commenting

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Wendy D {#1 Stalker Fan} on March 10, 2011 at 12:58am

Oh for the love of God! I knew it would be Rick, or James...and damn if it wasn't essentially both! I cannot imagine how hard it would be for Rick and seeing his would be daughter-in-law with someone else because his son was dead...but really! Like Alice said...he KNEW Bella....and she would never do that....she never truly betrayed Peter....

I am seething mad at how Rick treated all of them....especially Edward and poor Jasper....how could he say those things but only in his own pain...that old saying..Hurting people hurt people...

so true....

I have to admit...I am honestly proud of Edward...He had to let her go...she needs to grieve what she has lost, and not just Peter, but a Bella who will never be again...She is a new Bella...she is a stronger Bella and she just needs to let her be that person now...but she can't until she realizes it for herself.

I am in so much pain for Bella, Edward, Jasper and Alice....words hurt...they make holes in the heart that take a lot to fill and heal....much more than the slap to the face...the sting of that subsides quickly...but the words repeat over and over in your head and unfortunately, sometimes, you start to believe them!

I pray that Bella finds the strength in her we all know she has to not believe the words that are haunting her and to know that Peter would want her to be happy...whether with Edward or someone else, even though we all know that she will only be truly herself and happy with Edward....

My heart broke when Bella said "we were gonna have sex" cuz I was thinking..you stupid girl...it would have been so much more!

Then when Edward said that before he left....tears ran down my cheeks cuz that is exactly what I was thinking and feeling too...

Poor Grace...she has a big mess to clean up and Rick will have a hard time forgiving himself when he comes to his senses and realizes what damage he truly did...cuz he will....

And James...evil, despicable James...I hope Grace has a baseball bat and uses his head for T-Ball practice...just saying...

Great chapter...cannot wait for the next one to bring some light as to how they are going to survive this ordeal...again....

hugs and love my wonderful friend! Your Stalker Fan loves you dearly!!!

Wendy D

~#1 Stalker Fan {#1Beta}~

TwiMom {BDB Addict, True!}

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 5:16pm

Hi Wendy,

 

Your comments truly make my day because they show me how much you understand what I try to convey in the words I write. You seem to get that I want Bella to come out stringer and you get that Edward realises that he needs to let her go, etc. This chapter was hard to wrote because there were lots of horrible things said and misunderstandings to drive wedges between people. I would rather that Bella was string straight away and stuck up for herself and for Edward but I kind of feel that that would not necessarily be the way it would go in real life if the situation arose.

 

I hope you are getting yourself better my friend. I hate it when you get sick and just can't get over it for ages and ages.

 

About to go and finish the next chapter so I will be off.

You know I am saying a huge thank you to you for your support....right?

Love ya

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by little-dino on March 10, 2011 at 2:06am

Oh my gosh . . . the writing was so, so, just too real. Like we can almost feel what they are feeling. Thank you so much for your writting, we all apreciate it.

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 14, 2011 at 4:48pm

Hi Bella Cullen,

 

It makes it really worthwhile hearing that you think the writing feels real - that is a huge compliment.

 

Thanks you so much.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by little-dino on March 15, 2011 at 8:06pm

Dear Michelle

 

Your welcome, I hope you write soon. Take your time, a great writer needs it.

 

Hugs

Your fan Bella Cullen

Permalink Reply by Michelle on March 15, 2011 at 5:18pm

Hi Mrs Cullen/pattinson,

 

I feel very sorry for Edward too and thew next chapter will show how sad it is for him as well. At some point Bella does need to be told about what Peter said but I am not sure how she would react to that. What do you think?

 

Thnaks for liking the chapters, even through your almost tears.

 

Cheers

Michelle

Permalink Reply by Peace*Love*Twilight on March 10, 2011 at 3:14pm

Wow....................  

So at first I thought it would was either her dad or Peter's dad but I NEVER thought it really could be because of the first reaction.  I can't believe Rick would say the things he did.  I thought Alice saying what she said to Rick was great.  It was a good thing to point out James was the one being "kick" out of the wedding so to say and has been doing nothing but trying to hurt Bella since.......who knows for how long.  I am glad Grace showed up though and was trying to "fix" a few things before she left.  I just hope she can fix more when she calls Bella later.  I am so sad that Edward left.  I hope Alice and maybe even Grace can prove to Bella she is allowed to be happy and can move on with Edward, that Peter would have wanted her too.  Maybe now would be a good time to have Jasper tell Bella what Peter said to Edward when he was passing on.  And explain to her Edward didn't want to tell her to protect her, like he has with so many other things, I bet that would help Bella.  Kind of push on everyone of them what they already know, Peter would never want Bella to just keep hurting and would want her to be happy even if it was with someone else.  Great chapter but so sad.  I hope Bella and Edward can work things out soon.  I hate to see them both suffering.......and that is exactly what they are going to be doing now.  :(    Can't wait for more though.  I really love this story, even when it makes me sad.  LOL.    :)

Permalink Reply by Sarah Beth on March 10, 2011 at 3:23pm

OH MIchelle,

I am not sure what to say or how to say it?? That chapter was so heart wrenchingly real. I could feel and understand the hurt and the pain in Rick's reaction to James' lies and half truths but Grace was so wise and wonderful with her words of wisdom. Even in her grief and pan she still wanted Bella to be happy. I hope Rick will come to terms with his grief and talk to Bella so that she can move on with a clear conscience. As fas as Edward he tried so hard to reach Bella but she is too far buried in her own grief and feeling of betrayal for the ones she loves. I know she loves Edward and that he loves her and in the end that is all that matters and I know that in your way you will bring them back together. If I could talk to Bella I would tell her that sometimes in life we have to lose everything and reach the absolutely bottom to realize what we had all along.  So in the end she will see that Edward was there for her all along. 

I will be waiting for the next update and hope that things take a turn for the better. I wonder if Edward might leave for Paris as a way to avoid any awkward meetings or as a way to make things easier for Bella. I hope she comes to her senses soon. Thank you so much for such a heartfelf and emotionally filled update.

Hugs

Sarah

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