Sometimes love just can't be denied - no matter how untimely it hits us. Sparks fly between Edward and Bella the very first time they meet; problem is that Bella is already committed to another. See how the two of them deal with their unspoken attraction and how a tragedy could bring them closer together or push them further apart.
This story is being worked on by both myself and AnahyR whose ideas are the basis for all chapters. We hope you enjoy it and would love to hear your opinions through your comments. AnahyR will also be doing this story in Spanish so for those of you who are Spanish speaking you will also have access to this at some stage. I will put the link here once it is done.
Previous stories of mine you might be interested in:
The Heart is a Bloom: Is fame worth it? A different take on the characters of Twilight and how they met. Edward is a famous musician who has a past demon that is about to catch up with him. Unfortunately it is just as he has met the woman of his dreams.
No Choice: Edward returns to Forks to fight for a hurt and angry Bella. Not such an easy thing to do in this story. This is set after the Cullens have been away for quite a few months but before Bella makes the decision to cliff dive.
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That was a fantastic chapter. You chose every word perfectly. My favorite part was the beginning, it was beautifully written. I think Bella finally understands what she really feels for Edward, after talking to Grace. You know? I think it's kinda naive to think like that, but still, I think that Grace was the sign for Bella from Peter. Oh, one more thing, I personally think that it is really nice that Bella still comes to talk with Peter, though he is dead. This thing reminds me of how adult people tell their kids that some of their relatives are dead, you know "in the sky". I think Bella thinks like that in this story. Um... the ending of this chapter kinda seemed to be on a happy note. I wonder... how Bella will tell Edward that she loves him, just the same way he loves her. Well... that thing reminds me some Renee's words, written in the Eclipse book by Stephenie Meyer. I can't qoute exactly what she said about Bella and Edward, but I remember the thing with the satellite, I think it is the same thing in this story of yours. By the way, again, beautifully written. As always, can't wait to read more.
I did try very hard to make this chapter come across the right way because I wanted to give Bella the right kind of closure with Peter and still respect what she had with him. Thanks for enjoying the way I wrote it and for letting me know which parts you liked.
i know i'm byond LATE i had just finished my final exams and i was so so busy!!
that wasnt what i expected atll!!!
a talk between grace and bella..totally unexpected
in my opinion grace is a saint!!!
bella is so pathetic!!
just a question is it the first time for bella to visit peter's grave?!
hey havent you read my comment on the chapter before
if not plz do its all i really wt to say
love monica <3
another amazing chapter
Hi Alice. Thnaks for loving the story and always being there to read it. I hope his reaction to her telling him she loves him is everything you are hoping for. Next update up as soon as I answer these comments.
Hiya Robyn, I don't think youre selfish at all - it makes me happy that you are enjoying the story enough to want it to come quickly. The next chapter is up in a moment so I am making these replies brief - sorry about that. Thanks for always reading and supporting.
Thnaks for loving it. I am sad about it ending too but all things must come to an end :)
No sequel but I promise that the epilogue will let you know what has happened for all of them
WOW!!! That was great! I thought it was Edward at first when she turned around and the person said:
"You asked for a sign Bella? It seems that you and I need to talk.”
I loved that it was Grace of all people who helped her realize she is allowed to live and love again without Peter and he would never want her to pass up on love or living because of him. I think it was because Grace said it to her so Bella FINALLY let it sink in that she can move on even if it seems to early to her.
I am SO looking forward to seeing what happens next and hope that she gets to Edward soon so we can see his reaction. Awesome work and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :)
I was wondering if people would think it was going to be Edward there but I really thought that Grace would be the one to help Bella move on with her feelings. I hope you enjoy the next chapter and that I have done it justice. Thanks for reading and always commenting