On A Lonely Night

Most likely, the rating would be PG-13..

ive never written anything other than a fanfiction before... but i think its time to start. =) please tell me if i should continue. this is loosely based off of a roleplay i was doing. the rp is finished because i closed it, but these two characters were far from being finished. i give credit to Nicholle Lynn Wale for her characters Skye and Kyle, Lee-Anne credit for Alex and Skyla(Harleah-name changed sue to confusion for readers, and in memory of Lee-Anne, Harleah was her favorite name =). Jaini and Camden are all me. =) not all characters are being used, because not all characters were active in the rp...

The title will most likely change but for now its staying. =)

The title is from the song On A Lonely Night by A Rocket To The Moon

Characers:

(still working on the other character banners...)

Prologue:

“Jaini?” I hid under to the sink in the bathroom, hoping he wouldn’t have the nerve to walk in here. “Jaini, please, I just want to talk. I know you’re in there.” I could hear the tears in his voice. Why was I doing this to him? I didn’t know. I turned on all of the sinks so he would hear me lock the door. I sat back down under them, tears rolling down my face, causing thick black trails of make-up to follow.

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Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on December 22, 2010 at 11:19am

i dont know why the font is so small.... im sorry, if you have trouble seeing it please let me know.

but anyways, the title is taken from the song Letdown by This Providence.

(i love naming chapters after songs now haha ive never done that before.)

what did you think?

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on December 22, 2010 at 11:47am

=D thank you! i will!

Permalink Reply by ℓσst&'Insecuяe . Ɯ on December 22, 2010 at 1:29pm

I absolutely lov it...keep writing!

Permalink Reply by Firestar Becky on December 22, 2010 at 12:44pm

yea this is great !!!!!!!!!

uh why did she run away ?????????

wanna no !!!!

so plz continue and keep up the gud work :)

Permalink Reply by Lauren A(: on December 22, 2010 at 1:28pm

I loveeeee it

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on December 22, 2010 at 1:30pm

Permalink Reply by I♥Edward Cullen♥ on December 22, 2010 at 6:57pm

this is so good!!!

cant wait for another update :<)

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on December 22, 2010 at 9:33pm

=D i really like doing it. =p but what i do wonder... is if anyone knows the songs. XD they arent the most popular bands in the world. LOL i LOVE A Rocket To The Moon. (On A Lonely Night & If Only They Knew) i got to see them in concert last weekend. =) they opened up for Paramore and it was AMAZING! haha im SO in love with Nick Santino's (lead singer) voice. XDD could you send me a link to your story please? i want to read it. =D

Permalink Reply by Gigi Cullen Rodriguez on December 22, 2010 at 9:30pm