Our Little Secret ~ Jacob and Bella's brother-sister story (Repost)
What if Jacob was Bella's brother, her family? She had wanted this. Billy died when Jake was 6 so Charlie adopted him and he became Bella's adopted brother.
Will Jake be able to heal Bella? Will it be possible for him to get her out of this depression? Her true love is lost, her prince is gone, her future of being a vampire is a distant past dream, and her good vampires aren't going to return. She knows this, but what happens when one of her family, Jacob leaves Bella to protect his secret and Bella? Will he reveal his secret? Who will heal Bella? Jacob or someone else?
A true Blackwater story, Jacob is in love with Leah, probably she loves him too but what happens when he turns into a wolf? Will everything change? Will Jacob loose his family, love and happiness by turning into a wolf?
A tale of change, love, happiness, pain, sorrow, relations…Our Little Secret.
All this takes place in New Moon when Edward leaves Bella hurt and broken. Jake lives with them. And Bella and Jake share a brother sister relationship (sorry for emphasizing here but this idea is new to every one so I m being specific as we have always know Bella and Jake love each other in a different way).
For now Jake is human and he stays in Forks. But Jake is friends with the la push gang and he is real close to them.
Charlie's house is of two floors (ground and first floor), the ground floor consists of living room, kitchen cum dining room and the first floor consists of Jacob's, Charlie's and Bella's room. PS: Jacob is a super cool mechanic, he has his own car (Rabbit), and Bella has her truck and Charlie of course the cruiser.
PS: Please do not copy this plot; I have worked real hard on this.
Okay..!! I know few of you have read this, and know the story. I had to delete the original post for some reasons. But here I have posted again, hopefully i will get new readers and the old ones wait. :) I will post sooner and I may bring changes in the story! (I kinda thought the story had taken a boring turn, but I promise I will make it better.)
Everything was perfectly clear.
This is what I had to do.
This is what I was going to do.
Then why m I hesitating?
Chapter 1: Dream=Future? I don't know.
I was having flashes, my dream changed from one thing to another. The first part of my dream was with dad and mom and next all the kids at reservation including my dear sister Bella, Quil, Embry, Leah, etc and my parents in my house at La Push on my 6th birthday party, the last birthday with my parents. Next came their funeral, I stood there with Charlie, my left hand was firmly held by him and in my right hand was a white flower, tears rolled down my eyes. This memory passed away quickly, and then I stood in a familiar place confused and sad, I was in Charlie's house my luggage with me. And then Bella and I playing, this was during the holidays when she had come to Forks from Phoenix.
Until now the dream felt like I was having a short summary of my life but now it all suddenly changed. I could see trees and smell the ocean brine, after a little more concentration I realized this was La Push forest, I looked around. I could see a guy there and man he was huge! He had bulging muscles, his chest was well defined and his skin was tanned just like mine and hair cropped short. I realized this guy was me, he was over 6.5 feet. No way! I wasn't alone here; with me were the La Push guys all huge like me but no one except Sam was taller than me. And then all of a sudden I could hear howling.
I turned and fell from my bed and hit the hard marble floor.
"Ow." I muttered and shut the clock. The 'howling' in my dream was actually my alarm clock. I sat there confused; I was never the one who got dreams. I laughed at myself.
I got up and sat on the bed sleepily, I yawned and then suddenly the plan that me and the La Push gang had decided ran through my mind. Today was the day! The rest of the gang and I were leaving for hiking for about a week and it was today, September 2nd that we were leaving. Crap! I hadn't yet packed my bag. I groaned and rushed to the bathroom to first refresh myself and then start packing. I quickly brushed my teeth and had a quick clean shower keeping in my mind that a hike and camping would kinda mean no proper bath.
I got ready and went down to have some food and found Charlie eating his food.
"Good morning Charlie," I said as soon as he came into my view.
"Morning Jake," He replied not caring to shift his gaze from the newspaper. I looked at the clock. It was 5 am . I got some flakes and looked out, it was drizzling. As there was no Bella down here I guessed she was still asleep. Thinking about Bella reminded me about her birthday and I would have to buy her gift as soon as I get back from hike, I marked a mental reminder. And I also had to plan a huge birthday as it was her first birthday here.
"So are you going fishing today?" I asked Charlie as I could his fishing rod and a basket by his side. I sat down on my usual chair and poured some milk in the bowl.
"Yeah. That's the plan. Harry, Mark and I are leaving and I will be back by evening." He looked up and smiled. He might have forgotten that I too was leaving today.
"Okay…hey Charlie, I m going for a hike today and wont be back for a week. You remember right?" I wondered munching the cereal.
"Oh! Yes I do," Charlie stopped and then added, "now." He started laughing and I joined him.
"What's the joke?" I heard a sleepy voice say. It was Bellsie, my sister.
"It's about you." I teased her as she entered.
"Yeah right!" She punched my arm in a friendly way.
"So when are you leaving? For the hike," she questioned.
"Today," I answered…it was so obvious infact I had been talking to her only about it last night.
"I know that idiot." She smirked, I raised my eye brows.
"What I want to know is the time?" She amended in a dragging.
"Hmm…by 8." I replied.
"Okay." She said. There was sudden change in her voice. I smiled comfortingly.
I knew she would miss me. I would miss her too. Bella was the best younger sister in the world, she didn't pry in my business, and she didn't need to as we shared everything. But she had a bit of secrecy when her boyfriend Edward or his family came into the picture she didn't say much about them. Sometimes she spoke about Alice, Edward's fun sister. I didn't mind her not being open about her relationship firstly, because she was my sister and it was kind of awkward speaking about the serious boy stuff, come-on I m a guy! And secondly and mostly because I didn't really like Edward much, there was something about him that turned me kinda hostile toward him.
"But don't you worry I will be back before your birthday." I said dramatically. She groaned and Charlie laughed. Bella had some kind of aversion toward her birthday. She was the first girl of her age who didn't like her birthday or presents. She made us promise that we wouldn't get her any gift! Like anyone is going to listen to her!
"Okay kids I gotta go now," Charlie got up and went picked up his fishing equipment.
"And Jake, have fun." He smiled.
"Sure sure." I smiled and gave him a hug. Charlie in most ways was like my dad though I didn't remember him
much and I did see him (Charlie) like that.
"Bye bells, bye Jake." He said and slammed the door shut.
"Bye." Both Bella and I said together.
"So what are your plans for the day?" I asked though I knew it, Edward obviously.
"Hmm…I will be spending some time with Ed-" she started.
"Edward and then later I will go to his place and have fun with Alice and Jasper." I mimicked her.
She stared at me open mouthed. I started laughing. Now she was trying hard to glare at me.
"Oooh...I'm scared." I said still laughing.
"You know you are irritating and annoying just like all the brothers." She stated with an emphasis on irritating and
"I m sorry…Bells," I said trying hard not to laugh.
She didn't say anything.
"Hey Bella," I said hopefully pouting. I didn't like it when my sister was angry at me, not that she was pro at being angry.
"Oh! Okay." She said and smiled. She could never hold grudges for long.
"That's like my sister." I laughed getting up and gave her a side hug.
"Jake…I m eating." She said as the milk got spilt on the table.
"Okay! I gotta go and pack now." I said and headed for my room smiling to myself after dumping my bowl in the
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hey, it's really nice yaar......but u know, even dat 1 was going pretty gud.........i was waiting eagerly for the continuation after embry phased
But anyways...............dis chapter was really a rocking one!.........a grrr8 start!!
I had to delete it cause of my finals...and i hadnt updated since last year! :/ and also i wasnt pretty much happy with the plot toward the end. So i will be mostly changing that..! :)
I will post the chapters lot sooner! :)
In no time we will reach there! :))
Chapter 2: A Sweet Memoir.
I went upstairs and started searching for my travelers’ bag. Ugh. Where is it?
“Bella did you see my travelers’ bag?” I shouted.
“No,” She yelled back.
“Okay.” I muttered.
I opened all the cupboards and raided them, I still didn’t find it. Sam was going to kill me or probably they will leave me. I had almost given up searching for my bag and had decided to stay here but at that moment I saw my bag in the deepest pit of the last top cupboard. I pulled it out triumphantly.
“Ha!” I exclaimed.
I went to the closet to grab a couple of clothes. I decided to keep my military cargos and blue baggy three fourths. With that I kept a couple of sleeveless t-shirts and shirts. I took my tenting stuff from underneath the bed, this had belonged to dad. I sighed as I took. I decided to get ready before keeping money so I put on some loose jeans and a t-shirt. Next I raided my drawers for money. I got a small bundle of notes and I kept in my empty wallet. Just then an old picture of Bella and I covered in mud when we were 6-7 years caught my eye. I started smiling at that memory. Bella had come to Forks during her vacation and we were in the park when this incident had happened.
Bella and I were getting ready to the Forks Park. All the kids would meet there around this time of the day. And as it wasn’t and didn’t look like it would rain Charlie allowed us to join them. Bella took her Barbie’s to play with her friend Angela. I laughed at her. She glared back. She snorted when she saw I had taken a rugby ball.
“Dirty boys,” she snorted and Charlie had laughed.
We reached the park and Bella ran over to the place where Angela was sitting. There was a pile of mud right next to her but she didn’t move from there probably because the guys would keep throwing balls or running on the other side. She beamed when Bella came and then both of them started discussing. I ran over to the opposite end of the field but kept Bella in my sight because Charlie had asked me to take care of her. I felt good just like a big boy.
After sometime I heard Bella scream, I looked at her she was covered in mud. Mike Newton was standing and laughing at her. I felt angry. How dare this boy hurt my sister?
I went over there and bent down, Bella was still crying. This was unlike Bella; she never cried in front of people she must be hurt badly.
“Bellsie? What happened?” I panicked. She didn’t stop crying, I could still hear Mike Newton laughing and the playground was quiet as if people had stopped playing and gathered around us.
“Mike Newton pushed her.” Angela explained earnestly with wide eyes.
“Why?” I asked angrily.
“He came down running and stamped Bella’s Barbie when she asked him to apologize he said he wont do that to silly girls so Bella stood up and started telling him he was a bad boy and just then he pushed her into the mud.” She said with the same earnestness.
“How dare you?” I said angrily as I looked at Mike Newton. He just laughed.
“You push my sister I push you.” I said as I pushed him in the mud.
His face was covered with mud and his hair too. He spit the mud. All the children started laughing, Bella also laughed. But just then Mike pulled me also in the mud and the fight began. We rolled over the mud splattering it all over, I punched his and he did the same.
Our fight was going on when two huge hands pulled me away from him. Someone had pulled Mike and me away. I struggled.
“Stop it Jacob.” A strict voice said.
I looked at that person it was the park security guard, he wasn’t there before but now he was back. He let go as he saw I wouldn’t do anything stupid. The other person who was holding Mike was scolding him and after Angela explained to that person she started scolding him. It was his Mom! I laughed.
“Jacob you are not supposed to push children in mud. Do you want me to talk you Charlie about this?” Mrs. Newton said strictly.
“Sorry ma’am.” I said looking down.
“Yes. That’s the way good boy should behave.” She said in a tone which wasn’t angry anymore.
“Now Mike should I have to teach you manners.” She spoke.
“Sorry Jacob, sorry Bella.” Mike said stiffly.
That was the end of it after that Bella with her mud covered Barbie’s and I with my dirty ball headed home.
Charlie looked at us horrified, he asked us to stand outside and then he thought we were looking cute so he snapped a picture of us and then later we had to under go the water splash by Charlie with the garden hose. That was actually fun, we ran around and at last even Charlie was wet.
I started laughing at that. Charlie did scold us a bit but now I could see that he had tried hard to keep his face straight. That was the last time Bella had behaved like a actual kid. Well, I know this sounded stupid and funny, but after that Bella was much more mature…she had changed a lot. She didn’t like dolls any more and didn’t like Forks anymore. The vacation after that was the last one here, and then she hardly came. Charlie took us to California for holidaying.
Sighing, I kept this picture in my wallet. I would show this to Quil and Embry, my two best friends.
I headed down with my bag slung over my shoulder and saw Bella and Edward down there kissing passionately in the kitchen. I didn’t know what to do. This was my first encounter with my sister in this kind of situation.
“Err--.” I started and then cleared my throat. They broke apart and Bella looked at me sheepishly and then at Edward as if he should have known. I looked at Edward sternly and he acted as if this kind of thing was usual for him. Probably it was, I thought with spite. I was surprised at this thought. I grabbed few soda cans from the fridge and put it in my bag; I would drink it on the way. I heard a honk outside and saw that Quil and Embry had arrived. Just in time.
“I’m leaving Bells. Goodbye.” I said sadly heading out.
“Awe…I m going to miss you.” She replied in the same sad voice as mine. She hugged me then.
“Me too,” I said and patted her head.
“Bye Jake. Have fun.” She said smiling as she let go.
“Sure sure.” I replied.
“Bye Jacob. Enjoy.” Edward said smiling.
“Yeah sure,” I said smiling a bit. Bella would kill me for being so rude and it wouldn’t look good if he smiles and I glare.
I headed out and sat in the back, dumping my bag next to me.
“Hey dude!” Quil said smiling.
“Hi.” I replied.
“So what’s up?” he said.
“The trip idiot!” said Embry.
“I know that doofus!” Quil teased back.
“Aw, is Jakey-honey home sick?” Quil teased me in a girly voice as I hadn’t joined their talk idiotic talk.
“Yeah, I just can’t hold back these tears,” I pretended to sniff and wipe away the overflowing tears.
“I can totally understand, go ahead,” Embry contributed in a phony understanding tone.
“Ok now shut up!” I ordered laughing.
“Okay,” both of them said together.
“How’s Bella Jake?” Quil asked trying to sound nonchalant. Embry rolled his eyes.
I saw through him, Quil kinda had a thing for Bella though he had never admitted but I knew. As Bella had Edward for a boyfriend he had given up. Anyways it would have sucked to have my best friend going out with my sister. Just then the thought of Edward and Bella kissing in the kitchen ran through my mind.
“Ew…” I made a disgusted sound.
“Bella is ‘ew’? Wow, I m sure she would love to know this,” Embry laughed.
“What?” I looked at them confused.
“We asked how Bella is and you said ‘ew’,” he chuckled.
“She is fine,” I rolled my eyes.
“Ohkay?” he raised his eye brows.
“Fine! I saw Edward sucking her face in the kitchen! How m I supposed to feel?!” I admitted.
“Must have been great…” Embry hooted.
“Shut up Emb!” I smacked his head.
Quil muttered something I couldn’t hear and both of them started laughing crazily.
I simply rolled my eyes…arguing with Quil and Embry was the last thing I wanted to do! Not only because they were my best friends, but also because they would tag team me and come up with yuckier stuff and it would be impossible for me to hear all that about Bella.
“You should invite Bella more often to hang out with us,” Embry suggested then.
“And why is that?” I smirked.
“Quil here was pestering me to tell you that!” he laughed.
“Shut up idiot!” Quil punched him.
“Go ahead enjoy thinking, neither of you is going to get a chance until Edward is here,” I snorted.
Ignoring their chatter I just imagined how it would be without Edward…maybe Mike would have been her boy friend then? Or maybe either Embry or Quil? Gosh! I couldn’t imagine, Mike was pathetic and Embry and Quil were my best friends…for once I was glad that Edward was with Bella, and not anyone else.
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