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Renesmee’s POV

Waiting in our meadow was harder than I had expected. I had a mix of many different feelings rushing through me causing an overwhelming burst of nervousness. Jacob said to meet him in our secret meadow that we discovered at six o’clock. It was only five minutes past six but I was still impatient. Sometimes he calls and says to meet here but this time he sounded kind of weird. Just then my Jacob appeared 20 feet away from me. I jumped up from my rock I was sitting on.
“Hey Jake ” I squealed as I ran over and gave him a huge hug.
“Hi, Nessie.” What’s wrong with him? He just stood there looking at the ground.
“Ness, come sit down over here with me.” We sat down on the moist, squishy grass.
“Are you okay, Jacob? You look mad. Did I do something wrong?”
“Nessie, we need to talk. There is something I need to tell you...”

Chapter 1
I just wanted to stay asleep but obviously my family wasn’t going to have it. Aunt Alice was rummaging through my new wardrobe trying to find something “acceptable” for my first day of high school, well, my first day of school ever. My mom was trying to convince me to get out of bed. Why was Alice even at the cottage?
“Come on, honey. You know everything is going to be fine, you are going to make it ” They’re never going to give up
“Guys, I don’t want to go ” I felt like screaming. Why can’t they just let me stay home?
“Renesmee Carlie Cullen,” my mother said. She’s using her voice that she uses when I’m not going to get my way. “Why are you all of a sudden so scared? Last night you couldn’t wait to go and now look at you You are going to make plenty of friends, everyone will like you, and you will do fine ”
She just didn’t understand Nobody will like me because I’m a freak Who wants to be friends with a half vampire, half human girl? Sure, this was my first year of school, which is another reason that nobody will talk to me See, I’m not a regular girl who is having pre- high school anxieties. I’m not like everyone else. Right when I was about to start balling, my dad walked in giving me “the” look.
“Renesmee, stop being so negative of yourself ” Dang it. I forgot my dad could read minds. Wow. How many people can say that? “ Nobody will know about your real past, nobody will know about your family. Everything will be fine.”
They only see the optimistic side Technically I’m only seven years old but I look 16. It takes a lot of explaining but I’ll give it a try... My mom and dad met as Juniors in high school. My mom was human, my dad was a vampire. My dad wasn’t sure if he would be able to handle being so close to a human that smelled so good. Wow, that sounded odd. Anyway, long story short, they ended up getting married then I came along. I am half human, half vampire. And that is exactly why nobody is going to like me.
“Nessie ” Good old Auntie Alice, “Seriously, go take a shower while I pick out your outfit You need to look presentable for school ”
“Mom, please...” They can hardly resist giving me everything I want, maybe this can work.
“It’s not going to work this time Renesmee. Go get ready for school NOW.” Gotta love my father.
“Fine. Leave me alone for a few minutes to take a shower.” I said scowling at my whole family who were trying to reassure me. What the heck was everyone doing here? They have a house of there own
“You’ll be fine sweetie.” Grandpa Carlisle walked in and said, while hugging me. Oh my gosh, why were they here?
“They just wanted to be here when you woke up for school.” Dad said, obviously reading my mind.
I took a longer than necessary shower but I just wanted a few more minutes to myself before it was time to endure whatever was coming. When I stepped out of my bathroom, my outfit that Alice had picked out laying on my bed with a note on top.
You will do great Nessie, we will be there with you if you need anything at all. Love you, Aunt Rosalie.
I smiled to myself while throwing on the outfit without paying any attention to what it was. My Aunt Rosalie had always been there for me in a protective sort of way and I wasn’t really sure why. Her and my mom kind of had some kind of connection but I didn’t understand that either. Suddenly interrupting my thoughts was my phone that had started to ring.
“Hello?” I said into the receiver.
“Nessie What are you up to?” It was my Jacob. My Jake.
“I’m getting ready for school. We haven’t talked in forever What’s new?”
“It has only been three days I know, it seems like forever though. We should hang out this weekend.”
“But, Jake, its only Monday ” I complained.
“Sure, sure. How about tomorrow night? We can go down to First Beach.”
“Okay I’ll call you after school. Bye Jake.”
“Bye, Nessie.” Yay I’m surprised that its been so long since we’ve seen each other, and yes, three days is a lot for us.
Jacob has been my best friend ever since the day I was born. We usually see each other every day but Billy has been sick for the last few days and Jake wanted to keep an eye on him. I can’t wait to see him.
I walked back into my bathroom to brush my hair. As I ran the brush through my golden curls I heard my dad enter my room.
“Hey Nessie You look beautiful. Are you ready for breakfast? Your mom made you some eggs over at the house.” Yum, my favorite.
“Sure, lets go.” I said smiling at my dad.
Human speed just wasn’t fast enough for him as we ran as fast as we could. It only took about 7 seconds to get there.
“MORNING NESSIE ” Everyone screamed. I rolled my eyes but couldn’t help but to smile.
“Come on, eat so we can go, human.” Lovely Uncle Emmett.
I ate quick just so they would shut up.
“Everyone load up ” Auntie Alice called as she skipped off to her yellow Porsche. I climbed in the back seat with mom and dad with Alice and Jasper were in the front.
I’m off to my first day of school at Forks High School. Yipee.

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lol Thanks! The story is almost over though. I haven't decided how many chapters are left, but not many. I'm really not even sure what's going to happen next. lol Thanks for reading =]
write more plz i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks, I'll try!
Hey guys! This is it! I'm sad. Please enjoy and read the note at the bottom! :)

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The next ten years passed quickly and without much notice. For once we went that long without anything bad happening. Actually, everything was absolutely perfect. I couldn’t have asked for a more caring, loving, or beautiful family.
“Nessie, are you ready? It’s almost time!” Jake called, appearing in the doorway, obviously anxious to get the day started. Honestly I wasn’t ready. The time had gone by way too fast. Hadn’t Carlie and EJ just been born yesterday?
With a sigh I pushed away my fears and stood up. I looked in the mirror. Alice had done a great job. Again. “It’ll be fine sweetie. We can do this.”
I nodded even though I wasn’t completely convinced. My babies had grown up so quickly How could I give them away already? I took a deep breath and followed Jake into the hallway. The place felt familiar, but I stayed close to Jake (who looked stunning) just in case. “Breathe, Nessie. It’s going to be great. You know Alice enough to realize that. Today is a big day for all of us.”
He had me there. Today our kids are getting married and each of us couples are renewing our vows. Carlie had been imprinted on by a new addition to the wolf pack, Shane. I knew the look on his face when he imprinted, I could just tell. She was about two years old and looking about five; they’ve been best friends since then, and eventually became more. The whole pack moved here—to New Hampshire—when we came about eight years ago, not long after the imprint.
EJ met a girl at his school, when they eventually started into high school, named Brooke. They dated for a while, then we had to tell her about our family’s secret, and she was okay with it. We changed her a few weeks before the wedding so they could be together forever.
It was hard, but Charlie and Sue stayed back in Forks. They were very close friends and I was glad they had each other. We also had to tell Renee, my grandma, about us being vampires. I never even thought of the idea of having another grandma other than Esme. I guess I hadn’t thought of it.
“I know, I’m just nervous. It seems like it was us getting married only a few weeks ago.”
Jake laughed, “I was thinking the same thing, but we’ll never lose each other. That’s the only way we can make it through.”
I nodded. I was about to say more, right up until Alice bounded up to us. Was that even possible for a tiny pixie like her? “We need to get in our places It’s time ” I reached up for a quick kiss, then I let auntie Alice drag me away from my husband.
Before I knew it I was watching Jacob lead Carlie down the aisle. She looked amazing. I couldn’t believe that such a beautiful person, or now a vampire, could come from me. The ceremony continued on and not long later both of my kids were married. Then it was time for each of the couples to renew their vows. We decided that the newest couples should go first, so that was Jake and I. After us was mom and dad, Alice and Jasper, Rosalie and Emmett, then last was Esme and Carlisle.
After that we all went into the other room for the reception. The wolves were the only ones that could eat, and they sure had a lot to choose from. I guess that’s what happens when a bunch of wolves that are always starving pick out what foods are served.
While they ate, the rest of us danced, taking turns with each other. A while later mom announced that it was time to open presents. We all had something for everyone. I got a lot of gift cards, for the most part all from Alice.
“We’re going to go on a shopping spree, just us girls!” Alice explained. Then I remembered that I still hadn’t used the gift cards from my birthday.
“Cool! When are we going?”
“After EJ, Brooke, Carlie, and Shane get back from their honeymoons. That way it will be all of the girls.”
“Perfect!” Then I decided that it was time for Jake to open his gift from me.
He looked excited and confused for a minute. “Where are we going?” he asked holding up the plane tickets.
“Well, I thought that we could get away for a while, just the two of us. These tickets are for us to go to Forks to stay at our house, then we’ll use the money from my birthday for more plane tickets so we can go somewhere else.”
“I wanted to let you decide. I’m open for anything,” I said.
“When are we going to go?”
“Tonight when the kids leave. It’s sort of a second honeymoon. I want time alone with you, and there won’t be much going on around here.”
He leaned over to kiss me. “That sounds perfect.”
We finished with the rest of the presents and then we went back to dancing. I could’ve stayed there in Jake’s arms forever, but eventually Alice said that it was time to end the party, since the wolves were there and getting tired. I realized that I really did have forever to stay in Jake’s arms. With that thought I allowed my aunts do drag me away and force me into a different dress. Carlie and Brooke were inside too and I helped them change. They were excited to find out where they were going because they had both been kept in the dark, though the rest of us knew. Carlie and Shane were going to Spain, and EJ was taking Brooke to Paris. They’re going to have an amazing time.
“You girls look beautiful like always. Have a great time,” I said.
We led them outside to where everyone was waiting to watch them drive off. They got in the separate cars and left. I stood in the moonlight with my family with Jake’s arms wound around me.
“I’m going to miss them so much.” I felt as if I was going to cry even though it isn’t possible.
“They’ll be back soon enough, there isn’t anything to worry about.” His smile was even more amazing in the moonlight.
“I know. I’m just glad they both found someone to be with.” I turned around and reached up to kiss him.
The night was so calm. The cool gentle breeze, the warm arms around me, the whispers of my family speaking... I felt content. Everything seemed to be in place. And I was comfortable with where each piece of my life had fallen to. Everyone around me, and including me, got their happily ever after.

That's Renesmee and her story...


Author's Note: I can't believe it! It's over! I have a TON of people to thank for helping me out through the whole story. I have to thank all my Twisane friends for helping me with the names, Pierre for helping me come up with ideas when I was completely stuck, and all my readers. I would have quit writing this long ago if I didn't have all of you. (This sounds like a funeral.) But thanks for sticking with me and my story. Love you guys. <3
Thank you for reading Alexandrea! Me too. It was sad to see it end. =]
OMG OMG OMG!!!! i cant believe its over!!!!! thx for writing it!!! i will definitely miss it!!!!
Haha, thanks Laura! Thanks for reading it! :)
aww i feel sad that it ended!! why end it now and not later???
make a sequel plz?
its ok if u dont want :)
Love this story alot!
Sorry! I couldn't come up with any more ideas, and I liked how it ended. I'm thinking about it... don't get your hopes up though. Thanks for reading! :)
Aww thanks so much. I'll miss writing it. lol :)
This story was soo good! Look at us this seems like a funeral! Maybe you can make a series! About how nessies children have children and sooo one!


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