The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


I hope you guys liked the summary and the preface and will read the story, Please read and comment and tell me what you think of this idea!


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LOL, Ok so im finally updating!! Here's the new chapter!! Oh yeah Sherry Wlliams won the contest, I'm 13. I guess i must write like one lol ok so on to the chapter.

Ch.11 Spelling errors!

I woke up in my bed early the next morning. Last night Edward had took me back to Everyday's to get my car and followed me home telling me that we would see each other in 2 weeks. I got out the bed and walked over opening the blinds let some light in. I had been so isolated from the news the last couple of days i had no idea what was going on. After grabbing some breakfast and then hopping in the shower i head to starbucks to grab some coffee and read the paper. I had got my coffee, had my new's paper under my arm and walked over to a table in the corner. I took a long sip of my coffee and sat it down grabbing the paper new. The first thing that caugh my eye was the headline on the front page. Mr.Cullen has a new girl! And below was a picture of me and Edward sitting on a bench at central park kissing.
"Oh my god!" I whispered. I read on.

Yesterday we recived a picture from a kind person showing Edward and what seem to be his new lover!! Will this be a repeat of his past 2 relationships? Those of you who haven't heard, Edward Cullen the son of Carlise and Esme Cullen had 2 pervious relationships that well.... lets say went down hill. First Edward's bank account was wiped clean! Not a single penny! She left and fled the country leaving Edward with a broken heart. Although the money thing was nothing. The Cullen family did suffer when his next girlfriend returned with a child after leaving him shortly after dating saying it was Edward's child and threaten to take him to court to pay child support if they didn't give her the amount she demanded. Edward being the smart young man he is, demanded a paternity test on the child. It turned out that he wasn't the father of the child and he was free. So its very hard to decided if his new girlfriend has the same plan's. So you let us know what you think. Twitter us, Facebook us, or even email us! And tell us what you think!

I couldn't believe it. Edward never even mention this once in our conversations. I couldn't believe my eye's, i just had to call him. I didn't care that he had a big meeting in a few mins. I scrambled in my purse or my phone and dailed Edward's number.

"Hello?" His beautiful voice answered on the other end.

"Edward i just read the paper you have some explaining to do."

"What?" He said confused.

"About you ex-girlfriends, One wiped out our bank acccount and the other claiming you to be the father of her child!"

"Oh that." He said. "I didn't think it mattered. It was in the past."

"Edward i does matter considering your you! And they think im like them and trying to play you for your money!" I yelled.

"I'm sorry Bella, I really am. Tell me where your at and i'll come get you. Your probably gonna have new's people all over you." He said.

"No Edward its fine i don't want you to miss your meeting." I said sighing. "I'll take to you later." I hung up.

I didn't even want coffee anymore. I got up and threw it away. I had walked here wanting to enjoy the fresh air but finding this out ruined everything. That's why the new paper guy at the stand was looking at me weird. 5 mins on my walk back home it had started.

"Hey your that girl thats dating that Edward dude right?" A guy asked. I nodded. Next thing camera's were popping out flashing at me.

"So do you plan on being with Mr.Cullen for a while?" Some shouted. Ahhh!! I had to get out of here. I hurried an flagged a cab down and got in. I told the guy hoping he wasn't one of them too. He nodded and stated to drive. Thank-goodness. I reached home in one piece. I wasn't ready for this. Going with the only option i bought 1 ticket to jacksonville for 5pm today. I knew Edward would be disppointed but he would get over it. I started packing telling myself this was the right think to do. I was going next week anyway. I would tell Edward when i arrived in jacksonville.

Did Bella do the right thing? Let me know. Oh and don't forget to wish Bella a happy birthday!!! Today!
nooooo bella dont do this
i hope edward get to her before she leaves
love it
cant wait for the next chapter
new reader.!!!!!!
OMG.!!!!!! i. LOVE. IT.!!
you have to update soon.!!!!!
write more soon
AWESOME!! Please post more soon.
please please please please post more soon :)
great story
hey plz anyone read my fanfic my new life on
DONT LEAVE BELLA!! I cant wait for more
I'm SOOOOO in love with this story!!
please post more!!!! need to :)
Happy b-day Belly Boo...and no she did not do the right thing she needs to talk to Eddie


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