The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


I hope you guys liked the summary and the preface and will read the story, Please read and comment and tell me what you think of this idea!


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Yes, I'll be updating very soon. Like as soon as today. Maybe. I'm sorry for the superrr long wait. Look for an update soon. :) = Twibarbie

lolz it ok i <3 ur story btw =D

New reader love it!!!

new reader!!! luvd this!!!!


though i never imagined bella gettin a tatoo......... :D

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this is just too amazing.

i love your style of writing and the storyline-- SO creative XD

im like, addicted to this! thank you for sharing and please update me!

xoxo--Dancing Vampire

Wow!!! I finally caught up on the chapters that i missed and this story is AWESOME!!!! Please keep me updated! Cant wait for the next chapter! :)
Dinner with my mom didn't go so bad. Actually it went great! It was like we been best friends forever! Till she drank a little to much and i got sick. See my mom had begged me to try this sushi and it was actually very delicious till my stomach started hurt very bad at the end of dinner and i had to excuse myself to the bathroom to vomit. After get cleaned up i went back to our table to find my mom standing on the table singing. Waiters trying to calmed down and off the table. Embarrassed i payed the bill and left soon as possible dragging my mother out the door behind me.
"Charile you won't believe it! I got Bella to try some sushi!" My mom slured walking over to my dad who was sittting on the couch on the computer.
"Yeah and i got sick, Don't forget that!"
"You could have at lease brought her back sober." My dad joked.
"What? There's nothing wrong with me." My mom laughed struggling to get up off the couch.
"I got her." My dad said helping her after seeing me on my way over there to help her. "Go call that boyfriend of yours. I know you got one." I smiled. "He's not my boyfriend. Yet"
I went to my room and closed the door. I wasn't going to call Edward just yet, I had came here to think about things. Things like my revenge! Now that i met Edward and i had already started to show feelings for him so soon i didn't want him standing in my way. I need to start now and soon! I know thats going to be hard considering i don't know where everybody lives and how i'm going to get by clean. But i know if i want to get to it i would have start seaching for them.
I would get my revenge in this order
  • Guy at shooting range
  • Mike Newton
  • Jessica Stanley
  • Cheerleading team
  • Football team
  • Tyler Crowley

  • Gianna Blake

  • Amber Rose

  • Jacob Black
 Why do i keep doing that?! Jacob black I crossed off. Everytime i write this list i write his name. He didn't even talk about me or call me any names.
Moving on i got to searching. Maybe if i was successful i could be done by the end of tomorrow.
Everything was going great till i got to the football ball and cheerleading team. Everyone else had Facebooks
 or another sort of social network. And by the looks of it none of them became that successful, at lease not yet.
Amber Rose had a 3 years old little daughter. She was so adorble. Taking her mother away from her would be horrible. And it would make me feel like a terrible person. I wouldn't hurt Amber because of her daughter.
After finding about a few people from the football team i called it a night. Or should i say morning?
Yeah, Finally i know. But this is my New Years present to you.....
I know it's short but there'll be more soon!! Trust me this time. It's one of my goals for the new year!!
But comment and let know your thoughts and PLEASE DO LEAVE ANY IDEA'S YOU GUYS HAVE! I WOULD LOVE TO USE THEM!! :) Oh and Happy Holidays and check out Forced new update if you haven't already!!

Finally, an update!!! It was an awesome chapter. Please post more soon!

finally indeed lol .... i missed this story ohh sooo muchhhh, great chapter ! cnt w8 for more

OMG!!! You know, I am SO mad at you!!! You haven't updated in YEARS!! Do you hear me? YEARS!!! Anyways, I love the update and post more soon, PLEASE!!!


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