The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


I hope you guys liked the summary and the preface and will read the story, Please read and comment and tell me what you think of this idea!


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Ch.8 sneek peek!












CH.13 sneek peek!










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Love it. I hope edward comes and tells her everything. Please update soon. : )
why did she go ???
please let edward come to jacksonville
love shauny
love it
come on lets see another chapter plz i loved this one i want more plz update
write more soon udate me

Ch.13 Sneak Peek!!! (Rest coming tomorrow!!) Spelling Errors!!!

"Aww she looks so different."

"I know she's beautiful."

"Should i wake her up? She looks so peaceful."

I hated when people talked about me when they though i wasn't listening or looking. It pi$$ed me off!!

"No need to, I'm already up." I said raising up throwing the covers off me walking over to my mom giving her a hug.

"Mom what are you doing here? I thought you weren't coming till next week."

"I was but when your dad called and told me you came a week early i just had to get over here quick as i could." My mom said.

I looked at my dad. He gave me a smile and walked out of the room.

"We have so much catching up to do!! What do you wanna do?" My mom asked.

"Well i was gonna hang out with Anglea today, I was suppose to call her last night but forgot." I answered.

"Oh well can we do something later?" She asked.

"Of course we can do dinner if you want and go shopping." I suggested.

"That's perfect! I'll text you the details." She said backing up towards the door.

"You text now?" I smiled. She smiled

"I wanna be a hip mom too." She said. I laughed. That's why i loved my mom.

Getting my phone to call Angela and me being me not paying attenchion i accidently pushed answer and now Edward was on the other line. "Shoot!" I raised the phone to me ear. Not saying anything for a min.

"Hello?" Edward said on the other end.

"Hey! I thought i told you i needed some time to think." I said

"You say don't come there, Never did you say don't call you." He said probably smiling. At that i had to smile.

"Your right, I miss you."

"I miss you too"............ TO BE CONTINUED!!!

Please leave a comment!! Tell me what you think.
love it
cant wait to read the rest of this chapter
ahhh!!! MUST. HAVE. MORE. or else...*thinks evil plans*
OME!! Post more soon!
WOW. Edward and Bella on the phone is soo cute!!! hehe.. post more
I Know!! It's Cute!!
love it can't wait for the rest : )


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