The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


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Well ideas:

Well that fianlly bella goes to Angelas and they hear about a renunion of class mate (sorry forgot wEdward that, she keeps training then before the class renunion ( I rembeered now !! yay!!!) she tries to get her sweet revenge or will Eddie boy stop her buajajjaja more ASAP
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Previously in Revenge Is Sweet.

Getting my phone to call Angela and me being me not paying attenchion i accidently pushed answer and now Edward was on the other line. "Shoot!" I raised the phone to me ear. Not saying anything for a min.

"Hello?" Edward said on the other end.

"Hey! I thought i told you i needed some time to think." I said

"You say don't come there, Never did you say don't call you." He said probably smiling. At that i had to smile.

"Your right, I miss you."

"I miss you too"....

I talked to Edward for about 10 more mins just about random stuff. By Edward calling me it just made me feel even wrost and made me miss him even more. Putting that thought away i called Anglea. "Hey Bella, You made it!! You never called!" Anglea said right as she answered.

"I'm sorry it was raining when i got here and i took and a shower and then i talked to my dad, I'm sorry." I said getting up grabbing my suitcase to find some clothes.

"It's fine, What do you want to do today?" She asked.

"Umm, We should go to the shooting range." I suggested. I needed to learn how to shoot a gun quick!

"Oh my god! That sounds so much fun! Let's do it, Wanna meet and like 1 and half?" She asked.

"Perfect!! I'll see you there!"



Yes I can have fun with my friend and learn how to shoot a gun. I picked my clothes out and got in the shower and was ready in no time.

"Mom, Dad I'm leaving." I called.

"Where are you going?" My dad came around the corner.

"To the shoot range with Angela."

"Ok, Have fun, Try not to shoot yourself." He joked.

"Don't forget Bella, Were going to dinner together i'm gonna text you the details" My mom reminded me.

"I know." I answered.

"Ok then have fun." She smiled.

My car was in the same spot as it was last time i saw it. And it still had that new car smell since i had got it after i rolled my car into the river. I was at the shoot range in no time.

"OMG!! Bella is that you?" I heard a voice say behind me. I turned around and saw Angela. The same old Angela expected she didn't have glasses, She had contacts.

"Oh my gosh! Angela!" I said and gave her hug. "I missed you so much! You look so different!"

"I look different? Bella you don't even look like Bella." She said pulling away. "You look like a super model!"

"I don't think so but thanks." I said.

After the guy told us how to shoot a gun correctly and everything he left and left us along.

"So Bella How's your life going? You finished school so what are you planing on doing now? She asked shooting at a target.

"I don't know, I haven't decided yet." I said doing the same.

"Well do you have a boyfriend or something thats holding you back?" She asked.

"Umm. No, his not holding me back. I just met him just recently." I replied. Edward wasn't holding me back.

"I knew it! What's his name?"

"Edward." I answered shyly.

'Ooo, He sounds hot." She said looking at. I laughed.

"Omg He is!" I said. She laughed. I was so happy to see my friend again.

"That was fun!! That was the best idea ever!." Angela said.

"I just always wanted to do that."

"Well it was fun!, Have anymore ideal's?" She asked. I thought for a min.

"Lets go get a tattoo!" I said.

"A tattoo?"

"Yeah, you don't have to get one I just want another one." I said.

"Wait you have a tattoo!?" She was suprise.

"Yeah i got it after graduation." I showed her the tattoo.

"Gosh Bella you don't tell me anything."

"I'm sorry i was mad that day and just got one."

"It's fine, What are you gonna get?"

"Um. Glow in the dark stars on the other side." I answered just saying the thing that popped in my head.

"Ok i'll follow you where's your car?" She asked looking around probably for my old truck.

"Right there." I pointed the red ferrari.

"Oh my god Bella are you trying to give me an heartattck?" She said getting into her car. People have to know i'm not the same old Bella anymore; I changed.

As i got my tattoo Angela stood there with a look of pain on her face.

"Angela whats wrong?" I asked already knowing the answer.

"How can you stand that? Dosen't it hurt?"

"No, not really." I replied.

"Bella I must say, you were always strong and brave even if you don't think so."

"Thanks." I said before my phone started to vibrate.

Bella, I found the prefect place to have dinner.!! Meet me at Edge in 30 mins. Its next to the mall you'll see it. See you there love mom.

"That's my mom were going to dinner she wants me to meet her in 30 mins at the Edge." I told Angela.

"Well were all done here, Wanna take a look?" The guys asked.

"It looks great!! Thanks a ton!!" I said admiring the tattoo. I paid and left.

"I had fun today Angela we toatally have to hang out again before i leave and go back!" I said.

"I know. You better go the Edge is 20 mins away." She said.

"Yeah, you know how my mom is, Bye!"

"Bye Bella, Call me soon." She called.

Its been a while since I drove to the mall. I almost forgot how to get there. My mom was waitting for me by the door.

"Your here! And on time!" She greeted me and hugged me. Me and my mom never been close, But maybe this was the start of something new.

Hey, Guys sorry for the long wait!!! I finally Updated!! Hoped you like please comment!!
The tattoo is below!!

Only the stars.


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