The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


I hope you guys liked the summary and the preface and will read the story, Please read and comment and tell me what you think of this idea!


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love it HAPPY NEW YEAR!!


more ASAP

new reader and i love this story and also dont let her kill them that would be so wrong let edward stop her even if she comes close to thinking about killing them
Wow nice job and plz plz write more =]
love it! cant wait for another update! :)
This morning my dad had made breakfast. I felt so good to be home again after 4 years. We got all got caught up. Mom told me about her job offer and how fab it was for thoses days she was there. Dad had got an job offer. And the worse; they were think about adopting a child because they were loney without me. Their like old!!.
 "Serioulsy? You guys are like old and mom you have a job... IN PARIS!" I said making sure they were aware.
"Bella you can have a little baby sister or brother! You know how you love kids." My mom said.
"I dont want a little brother or sister and if i wanted a baby to take care of i could have had my own kids by now." They just looked at me. Then the door bell rang. Saved by the bell!! My dad got up, "I'll get it."
It was just me and my mom. She ate some of her eggs and chewed for a couple seconds followed by a swallow.
 "Bella since your done with college now what do you plan to do? Are you staying in New York or coming back?" What was i gonna do?
"Uh, I'm gonna stay in New York but as for jobs i dont know yet." I finally said after think for a while.
I could hear my dad talking to someone at the door loudly. Probably one of his friends. The door shutted and footsteps began to walk towards the kitchen. My dad appeared in the hallway. "Bella you have company."
Had i invited Angela over? I wasn't even decent. Edward appeared in the door way.
"Edward what are you doing here?" I stood up and walked over to him to give him a hug.
"I couldn't wait any longer, I just had to see you." He whispered in my ear.
"Mom, Dad this is Edward Cullen. He's my......" I stopped and looked at Edward. What was he?
"Friend." He filled in.
"It's nice to meet you Edward, I'm Renee, Bella's mother. She didn't tell me you were coming over."
"Oh i'm sorry i just dropped by to suprise Bella."
"Yup, Come on Edward lets go upstairs bye." I grab Edwards hand and ran upstairs before my parents started asking questions. 
Once we were safely in my room i started to yell at Edward.
"I told you to give me some time to think about this; this relationship. I don't think i'm ready for all this spotlight Edward, I'm just not, i'm sorry." My vision was starting to blur from my forming tears. Edward wrapped his hands around me.
"Bella i'm not asking you to be ready i just want to see you, they don't have to know about us we don't have to go out in public togather. I just want to be with you."
"I like that idea." I kissed him. "When are you going back?"
"I was hoping back with you." He said.
"I'm going back in like 2 days, Gonna spend a day with dad probably gonna out to eat tonight. Your coming right?"
"Only if you want me to then i'll come." He started to give me a kiss when i bent over and ran to the bathroom to vomit.
"Are you ok." Edward ran over to me.
"I'm fine, I tried sushi for the first time yesterday and i think i have food poisoning iv been throwing up and having diarrhea and having stomach cramps." I said while Edward helped me up.
 "Are you sure you don't wanna stay home and rest?" He asked worried. "No i'm fine, i'm gonna get ready now since you know i'm already in here." I reassured him.
"You can look around or something get on the computer or if your brave enough go down and talk to my parents." I suggested.
"Ok i'm sure i'll fine something to do you just get ready." He laughed.
Ok i hope you enjoyed the little sneak peek. It was origanlly gonna be a whole chapter but then i said what the hey! I'll just give them a sorta/ long sneak peek with a super long chapter!. And for those people who are wondering when her revenge will start it's gonna start in this chapter! But when the whole chapter is posted! Ahh i can't wait! but leave your comments and i'll post!
i absolutky love it. i have other theroys other then food poisoning lol
Post more soon or I will bite you and turn you into a PIXIE!!! Grrrr..... Love ya!

shes pregnat.. LOL more ASAP. When is she going to kill someone?!??!/!?!?1?1/


yeah might of sound siko but hey thats they point of all of this story

I am not kidding, this is really good. Hope you would update soon! ^_^

Wow! this is freaking awesome!! please, please keep me updated!
Nice job =)
Awesome!! Can't wait for the rest of the chapter!!


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