Revenge Is Sweet

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Permalink Reply by M!R@ND@ on August 1, 2010 at 8:08am

Now the fun starts lol...love it

Permalink Reply by sherry williams on August 24, 2010 at 8:37am

i have no idea
love it

Permalink Reply by Kelly Kay on July 31, 2010 at 8:56pm

cool

Permalink Reply by Kelly Kay on July 31, 2010 at 9:22pm

more plz
i think sh eis at the place where sh e meets edward

Permalink Reply by Isabella Marie Swan on August 1, 2010 at 1:02am

hurry up

Permalink Reply by shauny on August 1, 2010 at 7:34am

oh my gosh!!
i love the chapter!!
and i think she is going boxing!!!!
please keep me updated!!!
xx
love shauny

Permalink Reply by sarah richardson on August 1, 2010 at 8:54am

love it!!that was fab!!

Permalink Reply by kaylyn cullen on August 1, 2010 at 12:22pm

love it more plz

Permalink Reply by Sofia Michelle Clearwater on August 1, 2010 at 1:36pm

hurry What will Bella do?? more ASAP

Permalink Reply by Sara~ on August 2, 2010 at 8:13am

omg, cliffieee nooooooo post!!!!!

Permalink Reply by twibarbie on August 2, 2010 at 3:30pm

Ch.4 "Oh Bella you dont even know what were doing!" Necole said getting out the car. I unbulcked my seat belt and got out following behind Necole.We walked into the small building seeing 3 guys sitting down hands tied behind their backs,blind folded and shirtless.

"If this is your little suprise im not doing it." I whispered in Necole's ear.

"Bella you have to know how to kiss a boy right." She looked at me.

"What does this have to do with me being mean?" I asked.

"Oh,that was just to get you out the house, if i said hey Bella im taking you to learn how to kiss some boys,would you have come?" She asked already knowing the answer.

I sighed. "No."

"Ok then just enjoy yourself,your gonna use this one day in life." She turned back around and walked over to girl with fire red hair. I walked toward them.

"So this must be Bella." The red head said. "I'm Victoria." She smiled. I shook her hand. "So are you ready to start?" She asked.

"Um i guess." I said figuaring this was the only way i was going to be able to get back home.

"Great!" She exclaimed. "Well first pick one of the guys sitting in the chairs." She said pointing to them.

"The one in the middle." I answered not really caring.

"Ok So i want you to go up there and kiss him like you did it a million times before." She said. I nodded. I didnt know what to do,i havent kissed anyone before let along a million times.

I walked up to him slowly. I looked at him for a min. He had the most beautiful lips i ever saw. I leaned down and slowly pressed my lips to his. My mind wasnt in control anymore my lips were. Who knew a kiss like this could be so wonderful. As are lips and tongue touched i felt something around my waist pulling me closer to him. It was his hands. Somehow he had unfreed his hands.

"Ok thats enough." Victoria said. And i pulled away. I walked back over to were she stood. She smirked.

"Ok next your gonna slap him now." She said.

"What? why?" I asked,i didnt want to slap him.

"Your at a party and he wonders off, you go to look for him and you see him cheating on you with your bestfriend!" She said.

I wasnt sure about this. So i walked up to the guy i just shared my first kiss with and whispered "Im sorry." All though i couldnt see his eyes i had a feeling they had sad in them. I raised my hand up and slapped him light as i could.

"Harder! He Cheated on you with your BESTFRIEND!!" Victoria yelled.

So i slapped him harded as i could. His Cheek was red! "Im really Sorry! She making me do this to you!" I whispered.
His lips turned into a very small smile.

"Ok thats all for tonight!" Victoria said clapping her hands together.

"Alright Victoria,will see you tomorrow right same time?" Necole asked speaking for the first time in a while.

"Yupp!" She answered.

Once we were in the car Necole started talking.

"So how was your first kiss?" She asked excitedly.

"It was ok." I lied. It was amazing! I wish i could kiss him forever!

"You liar! It didnt look like it was just ok." She objected. I didnt say anything. It was quite the rest of the way home.

"Ok i'll see ya tomorrow night." She called as i got out the car to shut the door.

I ate,showered,washed my face, painted my nails and i even order some more clothes. It was 11pm now my bed time.
Oh boy! This was the best day ever! I got my first kiss and i actually get to sleep in today! I think i'm to excited to close my eyes!


Ok i hope you guys enjoyed this chapter ill update soon!! Please tell me what you think and Comment!!!

Permalink Reply by kaylyn cullen on August 2, 2010 at 3:54pm

omg i feel so bad for bella cause she had to slap him but alright bella she got her first kiss nice

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