Speechless . Jacob & Bella <3

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Permalink Reply by Kelley Brady on February 21, 2012 at 8:57pm

I absolutely love this story and can't wait for you to update again.  Please update again soon and please, please keep me posted!

Permalink Reply by Arianne Cutno on February 21, 2012 at 11:30pm

YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED SINCE DECEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by x Catherine x Edwards x on March 1, 2012 at 5:29pm

I know , I suck.

I just don't have as much time as I used to. I'll try to update sometime soon,\

SO stay tuned (:

Permalink Reply by Kelley Brady on March 19, 2012 at 6:14pm

great chapter!  can't wait for more!

 

Permalink Reply by Taylor Spelts on March 19, 2012 at 7:15pm

Great job! Happy to see you've posted again

Permalink Reply by x Catherine x Edwards x on March 20, 2012 at 6:36pm

wow. it was deleted again,LOL,I don't understand why it's being deleted?

Permalink Reply by Taylor Spelts on March 20, 2012 at 7:40pm

I have no clue... Maybe the content? You should ask an administrator or something. BTW have you seen how many views you've gotten? It just popped up on my phone's screen and I was like "Woah! That's a lot of views." Lol

Permalink Reply by x Catherine x Edwards x on March 21, 2012 at 9:29pm

Yeah...I'll try to see what's going on... I'm pretty sure there was nothing bad in that chapter though...

&& Ahah,yeahh,I'm pretty surprised...(':

 

Permalink Reply by x Catherine x Edwards x on May 20, 2012 at 5:12pm

I will also be closing down this discussion!

Again, (if you didn't see my post in I Beg You) , inbox me for questions.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

Thanks,

Catherine.

Permalink Reply by x Catherine x Edwards x on July 23, 2012 at 4:19pm

Chapter 49 ; What Makes You Beautiful Baby you light up my world like nobody else The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed But when you smile at the ground it aint hard to tell You don't know Oh Oh You don't know you're beautiful I have a feeling that taking Bella out will be good. We've literally grown a reputation around our neighborhood. Never leaving the house, broken doors, yelling and screaming, then me leaving for about a week... It's a small area,so word travels around fast. Even Bella's little vampire friends are scared of our relationship. I've only gone out of the house to get grocceries,and that's pretty much it... Other wise we're cooped up in here,in eachothers arms , or at eachothers' faces. Sad,but true. I buttoned up the rest of my shirt,and then combed my fingers through my hair. I put on a pair of dark blue jeans, and a black and white button up,with black shoes. Nothing too fancy, but not something too ordinary. I stepped out of the bathroom,and into the bedroom to see Bella bent over pulling on a pair of black heels. Yeah,heels. I think she was a little too excited about going out. I guess I can't really blame her. She stood up straight once she pulled on the other shoe,and squared her shoulders getting used to her new height that the shoe provided.

She caught my gaze,and smiled softly. My breath nearly caught in my throat, she looked absolutely stunning. She was wearing a bold red dress that just covered her thighs, her hair hung out in her natural curls, and the top of her dress extending down into a low V, tieing in the back,exposing her creamy shoulders, and her long pearly legs. Her lips were tinted with a red, and sparkly pink eye-shadow. She crossed her arms uncomfortably across her chest.

   "Do you like...?" She asked, doing a small twirl to give me a look at all angles, and then tripped over her own feet,falling backwards onto the bed.

   I laugh out loud,and walk over to her,"You look beautiful." I take her hands in mine,yanking her towards my chest.

   She yelped,then wrapped her arms around me,burrying her face into my neck,her heels giving her the height to do so."You think so?"

   I kiss the top of her head,"Of course you do,hun."

   I felt her lips press against my skin,"Thanks."

I grabbed the keys on our way out,and helped her into the Rabbit. I quickly got in on my side, started the car,and took off. I didn't know much places here, but on my way back from La Push I had come across a Greek restaurent. Nothing too spectacular, but it's also still quite fancy. I pulled into the parking lot,and then helped her out of the car,and she clung to my arm as we walked into the restaurent. I walked up to the desk with Bella.

   "Do you have reservations?" The lady asked.

   I nod,"Yes, Black. Jacob,Black."

   I watched as she scroleld through the names,"Alright! Follow me to your table, for two right...?" She asked politely, gathering two menus in her hands.

   "Yup." I answer,with a small smile, as Bella and I followed the lady to a table set with two chairs.

 

I sat Bella down in her chair,kissing the top of her head.

   "I will be your waitress for the night." The lady instructed throwing me a smirk."Would you have anything in mind for a drink?" She took out a small booklet and a pen.

   I raise my brows towards Bella,and she shifted uncomfortably,"Uhmm... A water thank you."

   The waitress nods,and looks over to me,"And for you?" She asks,her voice soft.

   "Ah,just a coke thank you." I answered simply.

   "Notta problem!" She scrawled it down in the booklet, she looked about seventeen or eighteen, the same age as Bella.

Her hair was auburn red,and pulled back in a pony tail, her nose pierced with a small diamond, three piercings on her right ear,and two on the other. She wore bright red lip stick,and the uniform she was wearing was a dark blue skirt, and a white shirt under a black sweater vest, black and white striped socks,with orange converse. I hear Bella huff,which snapped me back into reality. Not that I was checking the girl out,cause I wasn't. Just, taking in her image. Definately one of those 'out there' kind of girls.

   The girl snorts,"The name is Kiana, holler if you need me, I'll check up in a few minutes though." She smiled,throwing a wink.

   As she walked away,Bella rolled her eyes."Unbelieveable."She mutters.

   "What's wrong?"

   "She was totally checking you out the whole time,and failing at flirting." She grumbled.

   "I don't think she was flirting..."It hardly looked like it,I think she was just being nice... But,then again Bella was always the jealous type.

   She scoffs,"Okay..."

   I sigh,"Bella,you know I love you. I'm bound to you forever. You're not only my bestfriend,but my lover. How many people are lucky enough to have this kind of bind? Not many. So believe me, I know it's true, I love you,and only you. I will only ever love you,I will only ever see you the way I do. You're beautiful, you're ... Amazing. And you're mine." I smile softly, taking her hands from across the table into mine,and kissing her fingers.

    She smiles slightly,her eyes started watering,"Aweh,Jake!"

I leaned across the table,to press my lips softly to hers,and her hands weaved into my hair,pulling me closer. Kissing Bella, I'd never get used to it. It's different everytime, but I always get the same feelings,if not ; more. I pulled away slightly,my tongue running a long her lower lip,before pressing them fully to hers again,before sitting down. I hadn't noticed Kiana standing a few feet away from the table,watching. When we were seated again,she skipped over.

    "Ready to order?" She asked,not as enthusiastically as she was before.

    Bella took a quick look from the Menu,"Ahm, just a Greek salad,thank you." She smiled,smug.

    "I'll have the Lamb Caserole."

    Kiana nods,"Alright, it'll be about ten minutes." She said before walking over to another table.

     Bella giggled.

     "What's wrong now?"

     "Lamb... Weird." She mused.

     "How is it weird?" I raised my eye brow.

     She shrugs,"Just is."

The rest of the night went by pretty smooth. This was definately a good idea, and I'm planning on doing it again soon. I think she had a good time, and it was good to see her laugh and smile like old times. It was almost like it was just me and her. Just Jacob and Bella, like she's always wanted.

Kiana came back with the bill, and when I turned it around, a number was scrawled across the back, I stared at it in confusion until it finally dawned on me. It was most likely hers. I shake my head, pulling out my wallet,and walking up to the desk to pay,then put the bill in a nearby garbage. I walked back up to the desk where she was.

    "I have a girlfriend. I love her. I don't mean to sound... Like an ass, but, it would be nice if you just backed off a little." I told her.

    The smile that was on her face disapeared,and she only shrugged,"You're a teenager,you both are,you'll get over eachother one day."

     That ticked me off."I'll never get over her. And I mean this,sincerely." I waved bye before she could say anything that would set me off.

I helped Bella stand up,putting my arm securely around her waist,and walked out to the car with her clutching my arm, still not used to the heels I guessed. I helped her into the car,and then got in on the other side.

    "Thanks Jacob."

    "For what?" I wonder,as I started up the car.

    "Telling her off." She smiled brightly,and kissed my cheek.

Permalink Reply by x Catherine x Edwards x on July 23, 2012 at 4:20pm

this is the chapter that was deleted, and I fixed the problem, so hopefully it'll stay up :)

Permalink Reply by D. Ann Logan on August 9, 2012 at 7:41pm

I've been gone for awhile, but I finally finished the story. It is AWESOME!!!!!!

Love it!

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