The Key to My Heart...
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Isabella Swan and Emmett Swan are the new students at Forks High. There are lots of Casanova’s in the school, and they use all the girls at the school. They are actually used to getting any girl they wanted. Isabella happens to become bait at the school because she is beautiful and new. Edward Cullen, the captain of the football team is one of the Casanova’s, actually he is the leader. Bella becomes best friends with Edward’s sister and she tells her everything about her brother. Bella has a necklace of her deceased mother Renee and she wears it all the time… Emmett and Alice then come up with the idea of a Challenge for the guys… They are still interested in her after a few weeks and accept… What will happen????
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A TWIST OF LIFE...(Completed)
Sequel: Soul Erosion
This story happens in the time when Bella has to choose between Edward and Jacob. The whole Twist in this story is that Bella doesn’t choose Edward, she chooses Jacob instead... Why? Because Bella has for some reason found a certain love for kids after she drives past a daycare and sees the mothers and kids hugging and kissing each other... Bella then thinks she can’t have kids with Edward, so she chooses Jacob. That was the hardest decision she ever had to make, but Bella went with her mind instead of with her heart. Bella then marries Jacob, has kids and is having a wonderful life.
After five years-(which then makes Bella 23 years old)- the Volturi went and checked with the Cullen’s to see if Bella was still human, and to their surprise Bella is not even with the Cullen’s anymore. That to them is danger because Bella could reveal their secret. They then find out where she is and go to kill her. That forces the Cullen’s to go and protect Bella and to let her know what is coming for her, because Edward just could not stand anyone hurting Bella because he obviously still loves her.
What will happen then, after Edward hasn’t seen Bella for five years and still loves her and Jacob feeling very protective of his family...
You know, I'm in the middle of reading the second chapter and I'm astonished that you're only 14!!! So many of you on here that is that young and still...you have the knowledge to do so much when you get older. I am so happy to know that you would rather be on here writing than doing who knows what out in the streets. i just wanted to thank you for being so responsible at such a young age. Uh oh, lol, I'm showing my true MamaD colors aren't I? Oh well, I can't help it. I just hope you stay on the track you're on. Great Job! I'm sure your parents are proud of you.
That is a good thing, don't ever forget that. It's not only that you are writing FF's at 14, it's how amazingly well that you write them. If you keep this up and keep learning, if you have it in you, you will be writing a published book one day. It's so thrilling to see someone so young taking an initative like this.
Your grammar and punctuation is almost spot on, (We all need an editor, LOL). Your word usage is great and you make a reader want to delve right in and not stop. I'm guessing that you don't know ho well you write.
I've been resisiting reading this for ages now, I don't usually like the plots where they are all human but this is good.
I like the way that you have Bella and Emmett interacting with each other, I liked their reaction to sharing a room and Charlies reaction to that.
I'll read another chapter and comment on that next time.