The Key to My Heart
The Key to My Heart...
By: Lauren:)
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Gorgeous banner by Molly Greeves:)
Plot:
(All Human!!)
Isabella Swan and Emmett Swan are the new students at Forks High. There are lots of Casanova’s in the school, and they use all the girls at the school. They are actually used to getting any girl they wanted. Isabella happens to become bait at the school because she is beautiful and new. Edward Cullen, the captain of the football team is one of the Casanova’s, actually he is the leader. Bella becomes best friends with Edward’s sister and she tells her everything about her brother. Bella has a necklace of her deceased mother Renee and she wears it all the time… Emmett and Alice then come up with the idea of a Challenge for the guys… They are still interested in her after a few weeks and accept… What will happen????
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My Other Fan-Fic:)
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My Other Story:)
A TWIST OF LIFE...(Completed)
Sequel: Soul Erosion
This story happens in the time when Bella has to choose between Edward and Jacob. The whole Twist in this story is that Bella doesn’t choose Edward, she chooses Jacob instead... Why? Because Bella has for some reason found a certain love for kids after she drives past a daycare and sees the mothers and kids hugging and kissing each other... Bella then thinks she can’t have kids with Edward, so she chooses Jacob. That was the hardest decision she ever had to make, but Bella went with her mind instead of with her heart. Bella then marries Jacob, has kids and is having a wonderful life.
After five years-(which then makes Bella 23 years old)- the Volturi went and checked with the Cullen’s to see if Bella was still human, and to their surprise Bella is not even with the Cullen’s anymore. That to them is danger because Bella could reveal their secret. They then find out where she is and go to kill her. That forces the Cullen’s to go and protect Bella and to let her know what is coming for her, because Edward just could not stand anyone hurting Bella because he obviously still loves her.
What will happen then, after Edward hasn’t seen Bella for five years and still loves her and Jacob feeling very protective of his family...
Click Here to Read A Twist Of Life:) and It's sequel Soul Erosion:)
Thank You:)
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Permalink Reply by LaurenLewis:)* on -
Hey MamaD:)
I'm on my way to school now:))
Thanks so much for reading:) I appreciate it!
Hope you enjoy it.
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You know, I'm in the middle of reading the second chapter and I'm astonished that you're only 14!!! So many of you on here that is that young and still...you have the knowledge to do so much when you get older. I am so happy to know that you would rather be on here writing than doing who knows what out in the streets. i just wanted to thank you for being so responsible at such a young age. Uh oh, lol, I'm showing my true MamaD colors aren't I? Oh well, I can't help it. I just hope you stay on the track you're on. Great Job! I'm sure your parents are proud of you.
MamaD
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Permalink Reply by LaurenLewis:)* on
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Awwwwwwwww!
Thank You MamaD:) That means so much! Lol, 14 and writing fan-fics. I think that's a good thing, right? As you said, its better to be doing something constructive than to be doing all the wrong things that a few teenagers think of.
Lol. Yes you're true Momma colours are shining through:) You're daughters are to be lucky:)
Thank You once again.
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Permalink Reply by Delilah Cullen on
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That is a good thing, don't ever forget that. It's not only that you are writing FF's at 14, it's how amazingly well that you write them. If you keep this up and keep learning, if you have it in you, you will be writing a published book one day. It's so thrilling to see someone so young taking an initative like this.
Your grammar and punctuation is almost spot on, (We all need an editor, LOL). Your word usage is great and you make a reader want to delve right in and not stop. I'm guessing that you don't know ho well you write.
MamaD
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Permalink Reply by LaurenLewis:)* on
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Awwww, thank you MamaD:)
I actually just write. I don't know how well I write. I didn't even know I write well... Lol. I'm just... Writng:) LOL...
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Permalink Reply by Chris on
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Hi Lauren,
I've been resisiting reading this for ages now, I don't usually like the plots where they are all human but this is good.
I like the way that you have Bella and Emmett interacting with each other, I liked their reaction to sharing a room and Charlies reaction to that.
I'll read another chapter and comment on that next time.
Best wishes
Chris
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Permalink Reply by LaurenLewis:)* on
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Hey Chris.
Well, thank you for reading. Resisting, huh? Lol. What made you read it? If I may ask...
I'm glad that you're enjoying the story:)
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CHAPTER 1
-New girl
(Bella’s POV)
*Edited Version.
I have always thought of the concept ‘true love’. True love? Could there be something like that? In movies, yes, there's proof. But in reality?
I was pulled from my reverie when I heard a flight attendant try to get my attention.
“Excuse me, miss? Hello?” she said and I swerved my head toward her, instinctively.
“Uh, yes?” I said, looking up at her.
“I wanted to ask if you wanted anything?” she asked and smiled.
“Uh, no thank you. I'm alright.” I said and she nodded. She looked at Emmett, who was sitting next to me with his headphones on.
“Sir?” she asked. She must have thought we were some weirdos, because we're not even paying any attention to her. Poor Lady!
“Emmett!” I yelled and pulled out the plug with my hand quickly.
“Hey! You could have broken that you know! What do you want??” he asked and I just shook my head. I looked at the kind lady again. “Nothing for him too. He doesn’t deserve it!” I said and glared at him. He looked up and saw the lady walk away.
“Bells! I have waited for hours, and there you send the flight attendant away! What’s wrong with you??” He yelled at me. I looked at him fiercely and pointed my finger at him.
“Listen Emmett McCarty Swan! If you don’t start respecting me, or give me the respect that you in-turn want from me, I will give you a reason to. I’m the oldest in this relationship, as far as I can tell. So I'm telling you, if you are not going to start respecting me, you are going to get it! OK?” I said and looked at him with full authority.
“OK, OK! Sorry Belly-bear! I didn’t mean to get you angry. Sorry!” he said and hugged my left arm. I looked at him and tried not to smile. I couldn’t resist anymore, so I smiled a bit and shook my head.
The flight to Forks was quite quick and Emmett fell in and out of sleep all the time. He lives up to the saying ‘Party like a rock star!” fully. He is a party animal! And with him being my younger brother, it kind of troubles me. But I trust him enough. Besides I'm always the one who has to pick him up and drop him off. Even though it pests me, it somehow gives me peace-of-mind.
The plane landed and I attempted to wake Emmett up. “Wake up, sleepy head!!” No answer. I sighed, “Free Beer!” I yelled and immediately Emmett’s eyes fluttered open. “Huh? Where?” He asked tiredly. I chuckled and patted his cheek gently
“I know you way to well, little one. Welcome back!” I said and got up. Emmett followed and we got our luggage and then walked to Charlie who was standing and waiting for us over at the exit. He hugged us both awkwardly and then we walked out to his police cruiser. We got in and drove home. Our new home.
When we arrived at Charlie's house, Emmett took both of our bags into the house. We walked upstairs and Charlie walked into a room with two beds.
“Uh, thank you Dad," Emmett smiled, "So where’s Bella’s room?” Emmett asked.
“Here.” Charlie said and pointed into the same room.
“Oh, I get it! This is Belly’s room," he grinned, "Okay, where’s mine?” Emmett asked with a smirk on his face.
“Here!” Charlie said and we both dropped our bags, gaping.
“What?! NO!” We both screamed and Charlie shrugged with a smile on his face.
“Dad! You can't do this! I am not sharing a room with Emmett!! He's so irritating!” I yelled and Charlie just shrugged again and left the room.
“Emmett! Can you believe this guy! Us sharing a room? Is he serious?” I asked, turning to look at him. He started staring at me, with an idiot grin and then started laughing.
“What?” I asked and stared at my crazy brother.
“I get to torment you while you're sleeping! Oh yeah!!!” he screamed and I started stamping my foot.
“DAD!!!!!” I screamed.
“Oh and kids, tomorrow is your first day at Forks High!” he yelled back, ignoring the 'hissy' fit I was attempting. In all of my seventeen years, I've never attempted that in my life. Maybe, just maybe I thought it would work? I sighed.
“Uh!!” I despise Forks already!
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Permalink Reply by Cait♥[Roe]WRU4ever on -
grrrr....
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Permalink Reply by LaurenLewis:)* on
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Uh, i dont know what this is for but thanx for commenting Ana!
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Permalink Reply by LaurenLewis:)* on
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Yeah, i know! and thanx for reading!
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Permalink Reply by LaurenLewis:)* on
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Thanx and sure will!!
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