The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.

Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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you have excellent talent
your writing is just like stephanie's but in a good way
cant wait for more
Dear Jesus that was one good piece of reading! congratulations to you, thats the closer to stephenie i've read so far. From one writer to another, i have some recommendations for you. Try to come up with a piece that fits between this 2 "chapters", long enough, so it turns into what we properly call, a chapter, otherwise they're too short. I have to say i can't wait to see how Bella and the rest of the Cullens are going to pull this off rightly for Angela to don't get too suspiscious, in your place i would have hidden Edward and Bella away and told Angela they had moved from Alaska to some other city or stayed there, whatever necessary. But yet again is your story not mine. I also started my own continuation for the saga, but i'm not brave enough to post it! lol...but maybe i will....hope you find my comments useful somehow.
Take care
Joe Cullen
i cant believe you wrote it, it's so amazing like thembelihle said you should become an author!! great work
This is really good!! :)
please do more!
I think it's great. Can't wait to reade more!
More please.. I am already going through withdrawls!! LOL
Awwww omq I wonder what angela is going to say
this is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoow i like ur story i hope it`s getting more dramatic and exciting details :D GOOD LUCK
That was great, I can't wait for the next chapter. It kept me wanting to read forever and ever. What will come next will Angela figure it out that Bella is a vampire and will she want to be changed as well. There is nobody for her to be with. Wow that was an interesting twist. So many possibilities. How funny if only Stephanie would incorporate this into the rest of her books somehow. Is there going to be more, you left me wanting more. It is funny how Bella has to act like all the cullens did before she became immortal.
I really like this, it really does flow with teh ending of breaking dawn, your writing is great!


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