The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.

Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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Here comes Chapter 8-Prepare yourselves-
Chapter 8

Jacob and I stood next to each other in silence. His lip twitched, wanting to say something, but then re-deciding it.
Mama was still upset at Jake, but she agreed to go to his house and talk to him.
I don’t know what they said, but since Jake has come back he’s been very…careful around me.
We both stared at the TV, sitting on Grandpa Charlie’s couch. I knew Mama brought us here on purpose, she knew I wouldn’t let Jacob try anything funny, especially here.
Occasionally, I stole a glance at Jacob, and I caught him doing the same to me. Whenever that happened, we both looked down quickly. I saw that his eyebrows were mashed together tight, and his hand was in a bit of a fist. I had to end this uncomfortable feeling.
He slowly turned my way, his expression remaining the same.
I took a deep breath.
“We need to talk. Please”, I pleaded.
He started to lean in and whisper something to me, but then pulled back.
“Not here”, he whispered, his eyes once again glued on the TV. We’d both stared at the screen for the past hour, Daddy to my right, also pretending to watch. Mama and Charlie were talking in the kitchen, where Mama was preparing him food.
I love coming to visit Grandpa Charlie, but today, I was glad when we finally left. I could let my tight muscles relax.
We all got out of Daddy’s Volvo, Jake and I trailing behind as my parents entered the main house. I was about to step foot in the door, when suddenly a hot hand grabbed my arm, and pulled me the other way.
“C’mon”, Jake urged.
We ran together until we were right by the edge of the lake, and he placed me atop a flat rock. He kneeled down next to me.
“By now your dad know what I’m doing, and I don’t know how he’s going to take it”, he said swiftly, his words mixing together, yelling over the breeze.
It was very windy near the water, and our hair was blowing all over the place.
I stared back in confusion.
But Jacob was looking past me, past anything in particular. I recognized the intense look on his face from before, when we’d…
“Jake, what are you doing?”, I yelled back. I don’t really know why we were yelling, since we both had extremely good hearing. I guess it just sort of fit the mood.
He didn’t answer me. I noticed his hand fumbling around in the right pocket of his jeans.
When he pulled it out, slowly, I gasped.
I saw the object he was holding out towards me clearly, of course. But I couldn’t comprehend it at first. I didn’t know what to do, what to say. I was just so very confused, my mind felt jumbled. All I saw was Jacob. All I knew was Jacob. And I was faced with the strangest and most difficult decision of my life. What should I say, what should I do?
The object, was a silver, pearl encrusted band.


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