The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.

Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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will this book be published? i really hope so i would love to read it all i dont want the series to stop.
Impressive!!! Not bloody bad at all. Well done.
looking forward to the next chapter!
wow! nice!
pls post the continuation.
and, post more. :)
the next chapter is coming soon!
Chapter 10. I am currenlt working on Chapter 11, so, be patient, it'll be ready soon!Reminding you this is Bella's POV
Chapter 10

As I neared the lake, my anger grew stronger. What Jake had said earlier, something that now meant an entirely different meaning arose in my head.
“I was mad at myself. Well, at first I was. I mean, until I realized why exactly I kissed her. It opened up my eyes.”
My mouth was parted slightly in shock as Edward raced to my side.
I saw them up ahead. Renesmee sat daintily upon a rock with a flattened top, while Jacob spoke to her, kneeling on one knee.
I silently screamed, about to end this blasphemy once and for all.
As I tensed to make a run for it, Edward grabbed my shoulders.
“Bella, wait. The best thing to do for right now is to stay here”, he said, calmingly.
“But we have to go! Jake told me earlier-” I started.
“Jacob has this all planned out, Bella. He originally wanted to bring her over to La Push, but it would take a longer amount of time to get to. And he figured if anyone came to take Nessie from him, he’d take her away”, he interrupted, stress showing in his face.
“You mean kidnap her?”, I asked in horror.
“I suppose you could put it that way. All he really wants is to form a permanent bond with Nessie, so he’ll never have to be away from her. Apparently something she told him sparked a sudden…longing in him. She said she wouldn’t know what she would do without him. Jacob is becoming impatient. Along with the fact that she will be fully matured in a little over two years, the effects of his elongated imprinting is driving him mad.”
“Can’t we just go over there and talk to him?”, I asked.
He caught a strand of my hair blowing in the wind, and placed it lovingly behind my ear, then held my face in his arms.
“I’m afraid it’s up to Renesmee now”, he said quietly, giving me a soft kiss.
I was so overwhelmed, I grabbed Edward’s face, tangled my fingers in his wind blown, messy bronze hair, and with a deep sigh, kissed him back passionately, a little too fiercely. My eyes pricked, and Edward held me tighter. We kissed for each other, for our family, and most importantly we shared this worried kiss for our daughter, in hopes that everything would turn out well.
good job this is really good....u awesome
you're great!!!really!!!
i need more!!! this stuff is addicting
im at work and i can't stop reading this it's wayyyyyy too good
will she say yes or no? no parent wants their little girl to grow up that fast......
just letting everyone know chapter 11 will be coming very soon!


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