The Twilight Saga

bella is a talented vampire that knows how to sing, dance and have fun. she is known as the popular perfect rich girl in a little town called forks. she is accompanied by her family called the stewarts. one day during her dance recitals, the cullens moved to forks. will she found love other than her passion? is her love strong enough to conquer her it?

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Chapter 1 Dance recital

“Hurry drew!! I’m going to be late!!” I ran in human speed across the lawn towards the gym. Ugh! I hate running so slow. It makes me even more nervous. Today is my dance recital. Well this isn’t actually my first but every time I have a dance recital, I always get so nervous. I breathe in and out. I reminded myself. It’s not like I needed air, but it’s the only method I know that calm me.
“Relax Bella. Don’t worry everybody will love you.” drew said this as he me pulled to the backstage.

Drew is my brother. He have average built, pale just like every vamp I know. And he has a blonde shaggy hair. Drew is not my brother by blood but I treat him like one. “Hey drew, what time mom and the others are coming?” I asked nervously.

“Um... I don’t know maybe, before the show starts. Duh?!!” humph! He said as he raises one of his eyebrows. I just rolled my eyes at him. He is sometimes annoying.

After I got ready, the emcee started to introduce us. If I my heart is still beating, I swear it’s going to burst right out of my chest. After fidgeting for 20 minutes, my name was called. I went into the stage and started my ballet/hip hop dance. Drew was the one who thought of that idea.

The music was able to relax my body. I really love this song, Single Ladies by Beyonce’. Drew put a touch of his orchestra skills on the music by remixing my cd with some of his compositions. The crowd applauded when I was over. I’m kinda used to it though, the standing ovations, bouquets flying everywhere. I just want to have fun.

I saw my family sitting at the back row. Zon waved at me while the others just smile. I smile at them in return. I went directly to my dressing room to change. My teachers congratulated me, unexpectedly, Gail, my other brother came in with a bouquet of red roses.

“Congratulations lil sis. Your dance was awesome!! The people watched you with their mouths open. It was so hilarious.” His booming laugh surrounded my room.
I smack him in his head. “Stop it!” Gail is an annoying yet funny type of brother. He’s always there to make fun of me. Well every brother is. There was a silent knock.
“Oh mom!!”I run towards zon to catch her adoring hug.

Zon is the leader of our coven. We kinda treat her as our mom. She’s always there whenever you needed support and advice. She was the one who created us. She works as a doctor. I really admired her because of her self control and her passion to help others that needed her. “Bella you were great!!” she hugged me even tighter.
“Congrats Bella!!” Gleb and Quinn both came in.
“Well thanks guys. Where’s drew??” everyone looked at zon. “Guys?”
Zon was first to speak “there are other vampires that watched your show so drew was the one who entertained them.” she looked at me assuringly.
“Well then come on let’s meet them.” They all nodded.
Zon was explaining about the vampires on the way home.

“I don’t know anything about them yet, but drew was the one who meet up with them. They will be visiting us, so guys please behave, okay?” Gail, gleb and I just laugh at her.
Zon and Quinn looked at the three of us murderously.
“Don’t worry zon, I will make sure that there will be nothing to worry about.” Quinn reassured zon.

Gail snorted. “Yah like that’s gonna happen.”

“I mean it.” Zon said in her motherly tone.

“Yes, mom.” We all said.
When we came to house we saw a Volvo parked in front.
We went out all at the same time, all have wondering faces.

I heard drew’s voice “there home. Just wait till you see Bella.” I was surprised. I didn’t know that I will be a topic. I looked at zon curiously.

“They really wanted to meet you because they were amazed by your dance.” She smiled at me.
All I can say was “oh okay”
Drew opened the door for us.

Chapter 2 a new dimension

“Hey” drew greeted me.
I hugged him. “So how was the recital?”
I looked at him confused. “Didn’t you watch the show?”
He looked at me apologetically. “Sorry I didn’t, I have things to do.” He motioned his head towards our guest. “I see.”

There are five vampires sitting in the couch. They smiled at me, I just smiled back.
“Well hello, welcome to forks.” Zon said.
“Thank you.” The bronzed haired guy said.
“May I introduce you to my family, I am marizon by the way, but you can call me zon. This is Quinn, Gleb, Gail, and Bella.” Pointing at each one of us. “And I think you’ve all met drew.” They all nodded.
We all said hi to them. The bronze haired guy spoke again.
“It’s nice to meet you all. I am Edward. This is my sister Alice” pointing to a pixie like girl with deep black, cropped short hair pointing in all directions.
“Hi” Alice said. Then she hugged me, I hugged her back. “We are going to be great friends.” she said. I just smiled at her. She went back beside Edward.

“This is Rosalie, Emmett, and jasper” Edward continued.

Rosalie has golden blonde hair. She looked like a goddess, with her beautiful figure and a very confident face. She smiled at me. Emmett was big muscled guy with brown hair. He looked like Gail, just bigger. Jasper has honey blonde hair, tall and slender but till muscular.
“Hey Bella congrats by the way, I love your dance! Can you please teach me how to do it?!!”Alice said.
“Yeah sure” as Alice and me make our own conversation, the others did too. Emmett, jasper, drew, and Gail talked about sports and other guy stuff while Rosalie, Quinn and gleb went to hunt. And Edward and zon talked about the other two members of their coven that will visit us. Sometimes I caught Edward glancing at me.

I just smiled at him, don’t want to embarrass our guests. Well actually I want to. He’s expression was the funniest thing I’ve seen. I hope he doesn’t have someone else yet. Holy crap! What am I thinking? I just met the guy. I can’t just walk up to him, and tell him I love him. Oh wait. Did I say I love him? No way! Erase, erase, erase!

I shook my head. Alice keeps on babbling about shopping trips and some family facts about them.

What I learned so far, they are also vegetarians. They also have unique powers like us. Edward is a mind reader; Alice can see the future and jasper can control the emotions.

Suddenly Alice asks me a question. “Bella I was wondering, how come Edward couldn’t hear your family’s thoughts when we went to your recital?”

“Actually, that’s because of my power. I am a shield.” I told her glumly.

“Are you the only one who has a power in your family?” curiosity burning in her eyes.

“Actually Zon can heal any sick people while Quinn makes the time stop and Gail controls the weather.” She looked amazed.
“Really? She can heal people?? She should meet Carlisle, but he’s working at the hospital right now.”


“Yeah he is our father and the leader of our coven. Oh and esme, she is Carlisle’s wife. She stays home while the five of us goes to school.”

Wow. Big family.

“Well that’s good, because zon is also a doctor. And since Quinn and gleb have work,
you and your siblings can...” Alice cut me off.
“Hangout together!” how did she?...oh yeah psychic

She’s very happy about the idea of us girls shopping together in Port Angeles. I really hate shopping, Quinn always drag me to different stores and always dress me up like a freaking Barbie doll. Ugh! So much for being a vampire, when you can’t have freedom. I’m really frustrated from all the nerve wrecking events this day.

When Carlisle and esme came to visit, we introduced ourselves again. As they make their way up to whole new conversations, I excused myself to the dance room to have a little relaxation. When I dance, it relaxes my mind. It’s very peaceful. Just me and the dance floor. When the song changed to my immortal by evanescence, there was a silent knock.

It was Edward.

I was shocked. I didn’t know what to say. What does he want?


I couldn’t say anything so I just nodded. He smiled at me. I crooked smile that took my breath away, if that was possible.

“Don’t worry I’m just going to watch. Your dancing amazes me.”

What? Is that for real? I amazed him. “Thanks”

I continued my dancing. Twisting and twirling around. The soul of music and the message of the song took me to another dimension. I went back to reality when someone clapped their hands. I was surprised Edward was still here. Usually when I danced like that, my family went out of this room. Maybe because they knew that I’m not with them at the moment. He walks across the room in human pace towards me. I just stood there confused at the same time shocked.

“That was the loveliest dance I have ever seen in my existence.”

What??!! I don’t know what to say. No one has ever said those things to me. I just stood there, still shocked with my mouth open.

He chuckled, and then put his hand under my chin to slowly close my mouth. I must look like an idiot! I can’t believe it. I lower my head to hide the embarrassment. I didn’t realize that his hand is still holding my chin. I took a glance at him. I was locked in his gaze. His beautiful golden eyes are dazzling. Its like filled with thousand diamonds and stars.
He smiled at me thoughtfully.
“When you were dancing, it’s like you’re in another dimension. And I didn’t know how but I think I was sucked in the black hole you were creating. Like a force, that wants me to be with you.” Those words that he let out, makes me want to hug him and kiss his mesmerizing lips.

I was happy.

Suddenly his smile turned into a frown. Maybe because of my face, I checked my mouth if it was still open. Whew! It’s a good thing it’s not; I would really look like a total idiot if I did. I rearrange my features. Then said

“Thank you, I don’t know what to say actually. No one has ever said that to me in my existence.” I smiled at him brightly.

His face lit up, and then became irritated. I suddenly heard voices.

“Nice one Bella!! Way the go to ruin the moment by looking like an idiot!” drew exclaimed.
Gleb and Gail started to whistle while jasper and Emmett was rolling on the floor laughing. What’s so funny?

That made me furious. I controlled my anger as much as possible. I didn’t want to make a scene. Edward frowned beside me.

Then gleb shouted “hey Bella! Look what I got!”

Gleb was waving a picture of me in a shocked expression with my mouth hanging open.

That’s it!!! I launched at them.


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links to the pages:
chapter 3 rumors & chapter 4 the big scene
chapter 5 clarifications
chapter 6 dance practices
chapter 7 the race
chapter 8 jealousy
chapter 9 Baltimore
chapter 10 the streets part 1
part 2
part 3
chapter 11 my past
chapter 12 the visit 
chapter 13 the ball
chapter 14 the news
chapter 15 the surprise
chapter 16 my sweet revenge
chapter 17 the dance
chapter 18 revenge, bloodshed and coming back 
chapter 19 love at first smell?
chapter 20 karaoke night!! part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
chapter 21 cleansing
chapter 22 weirdest flight ever!!!
chapter 23 the cullen isle part 1
part 2
part 3
Chapter 24 crazy fashions, crazy vampires
chapter 25 Forkwarts?
chapter 26 a destined fairytale
chapter 27 it's all good!!
chapter 28 jealous? omg, yes! 
Chapter 30 the man who made it all happen
Chapter 31 The comeback of family crazy time 
chapter 34 our fisrt and last big concert
Chapter 35 This is it!

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do edwards please!!!!!!
thanks for all the comment!! i'm doing edward's pov right now. don't worry in just few hours i'll be done by the next chapter. i'll post later and i promise to give you guys a message update when i'm done. so make sure your my friend!! thanks again!
Hey, great story. You should do Edward's POV.
hey guys, sorry to say this but i wasn't able to finish the next chapter. it's pretty dificult to describe the moves that bella and the seniors are about to do. so i'm so sorry i wasn't able to update today. i think this is the most difficult chapter i've done so far. sorry again!!! if you guys have any breakdancing moves and pictures of it that can help me, please share. just post it here or send me a message about it. again i'm so sorry.
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Do the next one from Edward's POV because we'll get everyone's POV that way!
I think so too
hey guys!!! i hope you like it!! and thank you for alicia for giving me info and pics. comment please and i will put a playlist for you guys to hear the songs bella and the rest danced with...thank you again!!!

Chapter 10 the streets part 2

Edward’s POV

As Bella pulled Alice to the dance floor, the others started to dance too. The people started to stare at Bella and Alice who is dancing gracefully with a hint of wildness in their moves. Oh how I love how her body flows to the sound of the music. Her luscious hips swinging from side to side, her long brown hair swaying together with her body. How I wanted to wrap my arms around her beautiful and perfect body, kiss her neck and caress her lips with mine. I was distracted out of my reverie when lustful thoughts surrounded Bella.

“Wow, look at that body. So hot!” Then he pictured himself coming to Bella and dancing and closing their bodies together, where Bella was grinding her body to him. I was clenching and unclenching my fist. I noticed that all the men’s thoughts near Bella were like that. That’s it I couldn’t handle it any more. I was about to make a move when I heard Alice “Edward don’t you dare make a move! If you hurt one human in this room, Bella will never forgive you! I swear.” I nodded unconvincingly at her direction.

Bella looked around, when her eyes settled on me; there was a bit worry in her eyes together with an amused expression. She smiled brightly at me then walked slowly to me; I brushed my hand at my hair while smiling my crooked smile at her. She hugged my waist and kissed my lips. She whispered in my ear

“You know, you look so hot when you’re jealous.” She said seductively.

I lowered my head. I can’t believe I’m ruining her fun because I’m jealous! She cradled my face in her hands. We looked at each others eyes which seemed like hours. She smiled again at me.

“Let them think what they want to think because that’s the only thing they can do, but you, you can do this” she kissed me in the lips. The thoughts of the men around us were jealous and disappointed. I smiled at the victory that this loving, beautiful girl hugging me tightly is mine and mine only. I kissed her forehead then she dragged me to where Alice and jasper are dancing. Bella kept close to me while swinging her beautiful body against mine.

All of a sudden there was large honk coming from the speakers. Alice jumped up ad down while clapping her hands. Drew came to Bella’s side grinning widely at her sister. Bella rolled her eyes then muttered under her breath

“I can’t believe we’re doing this.” she sounded annoyed yet amused.

Then a loud booming voice came out of the speakers.


There were two spotlights pointed at the two. Drew was waving and smiling in every direction while Bella is standing shyly and smiling at everyone. The whole room erupted into fits of cheering and some guys wolf whistled. Quinn and the rest of our group joined us. Emmett is yelling embarrassing things about Bella while Gail is wolf whistling. The speakers boomed again


We saw Ryan winked at Bella and drew from the DJ booth. Bella and drew nodded at each other. Bella pecked me on the lips then went to a clearing together with drew. She raised her hand in the air then the whole room became dim. Then 2 spotlights were pointed at her. The music “fergaliscious” by fergie was played. I heard this many times because Alice always plays this music at the house. At first I thought this song is so cheesy and has no sense but now that I see Bella dancing with this song, I think I have a lot new perspective in music.

She was doing the flare when drew joined her. He started to do the same as Bella.
(what a flare looks like)

The people are amazed because they move exactly at the same time and they didn’t even bother stopping.

I heard Emmett’s thoughts “whoa! That girl knows how to have fun!!! I should take driving and dancing lessons from her...” jasper on the other hand was startled that a girl as graceful as Bella can be rough. Even Rosalie is surprising us these past few days when we met Bella and her family. Rosalie changed a bit about her attitude and I think it’s a good start. I was lost in my thoughts when the crowd erupted again. Letty was dancing with Bella and drew. I heard her thoughts “I miss this, just like old times!”

The three of them were doing a fake fight while dancing. Bella tries to take a swipe at drew but he ducked and was about to punch her. She held drew on the arm then throws him in the air, the crowd was full of “ohhhs” and “ahhhs” as drew flip in the air and landed on the balls of his feet. Their fight was like fighting with vampire just slower and with no violence. The crowd erupted again in wild cheering. Even Alice and the rest of our family were amazed by their stunt. The song changed again, I rolled my eyes at Alice who squealed
“OMG! I love this song! Its shake your pompom by missy Elliot!!!! Omg!”

There was another cheering when a blonde guy from the picture, what’s his name?...drake! entered the clearing by tumbling backwards several times.. The three formed a small circle as drake hi five them. The speakers roared again
“DRAKE IS IN THE BUILDING!!” the voice wasn’t Ryan any more. Then out of nowhere Ryan was in the clearing. “THE SENIORS ARE BACK!!!!” the voice erupted again. The five of them was doing a flare all at the same time. Then they all froze in different positions, balancing their whole body with their hands when the music changed.
(bella's position)

(drew's position)

(ryan's position)

(drake's position)

(letty's position)

“Bounce! I love this song!” Quinn shrieked in her head. Bella was the first to move when the music change, she back flipped then landed at the floor in a split position. She popped her chest while half bending. Emmett started to yell “GO BELLA! GO BELLA! GO BELLA!” Gail and Gleb joined him and so the rest of my family. The crowd also joined. Bella flashes us a smile while doing multiple stunts very smoothly. The song change again and bella was frozen then drew was the next to move.

The crowd seems to recognize the song very well because once the song started, the cheering got louder. One of the guys shouted “this song is awesome!!!” I searched his mind what song it was, it’s called 24’s by T.I. he seemed pretty addicted to the artist just like those crazy teenage girls screaming every time they see a cover or a picture of the famous vampire book. I chuckled at the silliness of those girls, if only they new vampires are true…

Drew was doing a head spin then led into a flare while hopping from hand to hand. The crowd erupted again into cheers of amazement and awes. The song changed again so drew froze. Ryan was the next, from his last position, he was doing a hand stand then started to do the jumping jacks but in an inverted way. After Ryan do a little stunts and footwork the music changed then drake came next. After drake, letty did the same. The crowd applauded and shouted their names but they were not done. Drew, Ryan and drake went to the side while Bella and letty were left at the center; Bella motioned a finger at our direction. I heard Alice shrieked.

“Yes!!! This must be my time!!!”

Alice went to Bella’s side. Letty looked confused but Bella nodded at her. She nodded back

“Hmmm…I guess Bella trained her.” She thought.

They positioned themselves like a triangle. Bella was the center. The DJ spoke again.

Another unfamiliar song was again played. Quinn again, squealed the song title in her head. “1, 2 step!!! Ahhhh!!! I love the songs that they played here!!”

i was shocked that Alice know the step that Bella and letty did. Letty also was shocked as well as the rest of us.

“I didn’t know Alice knows how to dance that. I didn’t even see her practice those moves!!” jasper thought

The three ladies on the dance floor seem to enjoy it. All the guys were drooling by the sexy dance moves, thinking about touching their bodies and every nasty thing they could imagine. Ugh!! I felt a wave of calmness. I looked at jasper thankfully. He smiled at me.

“Hey no prob bro, I know how your feeling.” We both sighed in unison.

I focused my attention to bella, she was beautiful and good at everything. No other woman can top at her personality. She is both beautiful inside and out. The song ended. The three strutted at unique poses.
(thier poses)

The crowd emerged at the center and cheering their heads of for the unique show they saw. They started to jump up and down. When I saw Bella, I instantly hugged her close to me then whispered in her ear

“You were great. And I think you’re trying to seduce me and half the men in this club” I raised an eye brow at her.

She laughed at my expression. Her laugh sounded like wind chimes. She looked at me and said “is this beautiful god-like creature jealous?” she copied my expression earlier.

I kissed her lips.

“Well of course, who wouldn’t? When you loved a perfect, graceful and kind woman that can dance like that, of course I will be jealous” she smiled at me and hugged my waist.

the playlist:

hip hop
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that was awesome!!
THat was really good!!!! keep writing more!!
i love the songs!
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