The Twilight Saga

bella is a talented vampire that knows how to sing, dance and have fun. she is known as the popular perfect rich girl in a little town called forks. she is accompanied by her family called the stewarts. one day during her dance recitals, the cullens moved to forks. will she found love other than her passion? is her love strong enough to conquer her it?

i do not own half of the characters. SM does. i only own the characters that are added in this fan fic. And the idea came from bombonik01. please let me know what you think. comment me if you have any suggestions regarding the story. here are the first two chapters, hope you like it!!

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Chapter 1 Dance recital

“Hurry drew!! I’m going to be late!!” I ran in human speed across the lawn towards the gym. Ugh! I hate running so slow. It makes me even more nervous. Today is my dance recital. Well this isn’t actually my first but every time I have a dance recital, I always get so nervous. I breathe in and out. I reminded myself. It’s not like I needed air, but it’s the only method I know that calm me.
“Relax Bella. Don’t worry everybody will love you.” drew said this as he me pulled to the backstage.

Drew is my brother. He have average built, pale just like every vamp I know. And he has a blonde shaggy hair. Drew is not my brother by blood but I treat him like one. “Hey drew, what time mom and the others are coming?” I asked nervously.

“Um... I don’t know maybe, before the show starts. Duh?!!” humph! He said as he raises one of his eyebrows. I just rolled my eyes at him. He is sometimes annoying.

After I got ready, the emcee started to introduce us. If I my heart is still beating, I swear it’s going to burst right out of my chest. After fidgeting for 20 minutes, my name was called. I went into the stage and started my ballet/hip hop dance. Drew was the one who thought of that idea.

The music was able to relax my body. I really love this song, Single Ladies by Beyonce’. Drew put a touch of his orchestra skills on the music by remixing my cd with some of his compositions. The crowd applauded when I was over. I’m kinda used to it though, the standing ovations, bouquets flying everywhere. I just want to have fun.

I saw my family sitting at the back row. Zon waved at me while the others just smile. I smile at them in return. I went directly to my dressing room to change. My teachers congratulated me, unexpectedly, Gail, my other brother came in with a bouquet of red roses.

“Congratulations lil sis. Your dance was awesome!! The people watched you with their mouths open. It was so hilarious.” His booming laugh surrounded my room.
I smack him in his head. “Stop it!” Gail is an annoying yet funny type of brother. He’s always there to make fun of me. Well every brother is. There was a silent knock.
“Oh mom!!”I run towards zon to catch her adoring hug.

Zon is the leader of our coven. We kinda treat her as our mom. She’s always there whenever you needed support and advice. She was the one who created us. She works as a doctor. I really admired her because of her self control and her passion to help others that needed her. “Bella you were great!!” she hugged me even tighter.
“Congrats Bella!!” Gleb and Quinn both came in.
“Well thanks guys. Where’s drew??” everyone looked at zon. “Guys?”
Zon was first to speak “there are other vampires that watched your show so drew was the one who entertained them.” she looked at me assuringly.
“Well then come on let’s meet them.” They all nodded.
Zon was explaining about the vampires on the way home.

“I don’t know anything about them yet, but drew was the one who meet up with them. They will be visiting us, so guys please behave, okay?” Gail, gleb and I just laugh at her.
Zon and Quinn looked at the three of us murderously.
“Don’t worry zon, I will make sure that there will be nothing to worry about.” Quinn reassured zon.

Gail snorted. “Yah like that’s gonna happen.”

“I mean it.” Zon said in her motherly tone.

“Yes, mom.” We all said.
When we came to house we saw a Volvo parked in front.
We went out all at the same time, all have wondering faces.

I heard drew’s voice “there home. Just wait till you see Bella.” I was surprised. I didn’t know that I will be a topic. I looked at zon curiously.

“They really wanted to meet you because they were amazed by your dance.” She smiled at me.
All I can say was “oh okay”
Drew opened the door for us.

Chapter 2 a new dimension

“Hey” drew greeted me.
I hugged him. “So how was the recital?”
I looked at him confused. “Didn’t you watch the show?”
He looked at me apologetically. “Sorry I didn’t, I have things to do.” He motioned his head towards our guest. “I see.”

There are five vampires sitting in the couch. They smiled at me, I just smiled back.
“Well hello, welcome to forks.” Zon said.
“Thank you.” The bronzed haired guy said.
“May I introduce you to my family, I am marizon by the way, but you can call me zon. This is Quinn, Gleb, Gail, and Bella.” Pointing at each one of us. “And I think you’ve all met drew.” They all nodded.
We all said hi to them. The bronze haired guy spoke again.
“It’s nice to meet you all. I am Edward. This is my sister Alice” pointing to a pixie like girl with deep black, cropped short hair pointing in all directions.
“Hi” Alice said. Then she hugged me, I hugged her back. “We are going to be great friends.” she said. I just smiled at her. She went back beside Edward.

“This is Rosalie, Emmett, and jasper” Edward continued.

Rosalie has golden blonde hair. She looked like a goddess, with her beautiful figure and a very confident face. She smiled at me. Emmett was big muscled guy with brown hair. He looked like Gail, just bigger. Jasper has honey blonde hair, tall and slender but till muscular.
“Hey Bella congrats by the way, I love your dance! Can you please teach me how to do it?!!”Alice said.
“Yeah sure” as Alice and me make our own conversation, the others did too. Emmett, jasper, drew, and Gail talked about sports and other guy stuff while Rosalie, Quinn and gleb went to hunt. And Edward and zon talked about the other two members of their coven that will visit us. Sometimes I caught Edward glancing at me.

I just smiled at him, don’t want to embarrass our guests. Well actually I want to. He’s expression was the funniest thing I’ve seen. I hope he doesn’t have someone else yet. Holy crap! What am I thinking? I just met the guy. I can’t just walk up to him, and tell him I love him. Oh wait. Did I say I love him? No way! Erase, erase, erase!

I shook my head. Alice keeps on babbling about shopping trips and some family facts about them.

What I learned so far, they are also vegetarians. They also have unique powers like us. Edward is a mind reader; Alice can see the future and jasper can control the emotions.

Suddenly Alice asks me a question. “Bella I was wondering, how come Edward couldn’t hear your family’s thoughts when we went to your recital?”

“Actually, that’s because of my power. I am a shield.” I told her glumly.

“Are you the only one who has a power in your family?” curiosity burning in her eyes.

“Actually Zon can heal any sick people while Quinn makes the time stop and Gail controls the weather.” She looked amazed.
“Really? She can heal people?? She should meet Carlisle, but he’s working at the hospital right now.”


“Yeah he is our father and the leader of our coven. Oh and esme, she is Carlisle’s wife. She stays home while the five of us goes to school.”

Wow. Big family.

“Well that’s good, because zon is also a doctor. And since Quinn and gleb have work,
you and your siblings can...” Alice cut me off.
“Hangout together!” how did she?...oh yeah psychic

She’s very happy about the idea of us girls shopping together in Port Angeles. I really hate shopping, Quinn always drag me to different stores and always dress me up like a freaking Barbie doll. Ugh! So much for being a vampire, when you can’t have freedom. I’m really frustrated from all the nerve wrecking events this day.

When Carlisle and esme came to visit, we introduced ourselves again. As they make their way up to whole new conversations, I excused myself to the dance room to have a little relaxation. When I dance, it relaxes my mind. It’s very peaceful. Just me and the dance floor. When the song changed to my immortal by evanescence, there was a silent knock.

It was Edward.

I was shocked. I didn’t know what to say. What does he want?


I couldn’t say anything so I just nodded. He smiled at me. I crooked smile that took my breath away, if that was possible.

“Don’t worry I’m just going to watch. Your dancing amazes me.”

What? Is that for real? I amazed him. “Thanks”

I continued my dancing. Twisting and twirling around. The soul of music and the message of the song took me to another dimension. I went back to reality when someone clapped their hands. I was surprised Edward was still here. Usually when I danced like that, my family went out of this room. Maybe because they knew that I’m not with them at the moment. He walks across the room in human pace towards me. I just stood there confused at the same time shocked.

“That was the loveliest dance I have ever seen in my existence.”

What??!! I don’t know what to say. No one has ever said those things to me. I just stood there, still shocked with my mouth open.

He chuckled, and then put his hand under my chin to slowly close my mouth. I must look like an idiot! I can’t believe it. I lower my head to hide the embarrassment. I didn’t realize that his hand is still holding my chin. I took a glance at him. I was locked in his gaze. His beautiful golden eyes are dazzling. Its like filled with thousand diamonds and stars.
He smiled at me thoughtfully.
“When you were dancing, it’s like you’re in another dimension. And I didn’t know how but I think I was sucked in the black hole you were creating. Like a force, that wants me to be with you.” Those words that he let out, makes me want to hug him and kiss his mesmerizing lips.

I was happy.

Suddenly his smile turned into a frown. Maybe because of my face, I checked my mouth if it was still open. Whew! It’s a good thing it’s not; I would really look like a total idiot if I did. I rearrange my features. Then said

“Thank you, I don’t know what to say actually. No one has ever said that to me in my existence.” I smiled at him brightly.

His face lit up, and then became irritated. I suddenly heard voices.

“Nice one Bella!! Way the go to ruin the moment by looking like an idiot!” drew exclaimed.
Gleb and Gail started to whistle while jasper and Emmett was rolling on the floor laughing. What’s so funny?

That made me furious. I controlled my anger as much as possible. I didn’t want to make a scene. Edward frowned beside me.

Then gleb shouted “hey Bella! Look what I got!”

Gleb was waving a picture of me in a shocked expression with my mouth hanging open.

That’s it!!! I launched at them.


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links to the pages:
chapter 3 rumors & chapter 4 the big scene
chapter 5 clarifications
chapter 6 dance practices
chapter 7 the race
chapter 8 jealousy
chapter 9 Baltimore
chapter 10 the streets part 1
part 2
part 3
chapter 11 my past
chapter 12 the visit 
chapter 13 the ball
chapter 14 the news
chapter 15 the surprise
chapter 16 my sweet revenge
chapter 17 the dance
chapter 18 revenge, bloodshed and coming back 
chapter 19 love at first smell?
chapter 20 karaoke night!! part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
chapter 21 cleansing
chapter 22 weirdest flight ever!!!
chapter 23 the cullen isle part 1
part 2
part 3
Chapter 24 crazy fashions, crazy vampires
chapter 25 Forkwarts?
chapter 26 a destined fairytale
chapter 27 it's all good!!
chapter 28 jealous? omg, yes! 
Chapter 30 the man who made it all happen
Chapter 31 The comeback of family crazy time 
chapter 34 our fisrt and last big concert
Chapter 35 This is it!

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i can't wait to see what ideas you have for the next chapter! please post soon!
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Chapter 10 part 3

Our moment was ruined by Alice, as she dragged Bella and me to the VIP room. I saw that the rest of the seniors are talking to drew. The rest of the family followed us. Bella went over to drakes side and while pulling me with her. Drake’s eyes widened when he saw Bella hand in hand with me.

“Who’s this guy? Is this Bella’s new boy friend”

I was taken aback by his thoughts. What does he mean Bella’s new boyfriend? I didn’t know Bella had a boyfriend before.

“Hey drake! Long time no see.” Bella let go of my hand to hug him. Drake threw bella a pillow which she dodged it by her hand.

“Hey what was that for?” Bella asked surprised

“That is for leaving without even saying goodbye.”

“Drake, it’s not my fault that you didn’t know that I’m going away, look I’m sorry okay?” Bella looked at him with puppy dog eyes and pouted lips.

“Aw man, why does she always look so cute when she does that?”

Drake shook his head then smiled widely at Bella.

“Fine, it’s just that I miss you so much!!!” drake hugged Bella tightly then kissed her in the cheek.

I didn’t even expect that. I had the sudden urge to slap the guy but when I saw that bella doesn’t seem so bothered by what the stupid scum did, I shrugged it off. Bella and drake went to sit down. Bella looked at our family then hesitated for a moment.

“Oh I’m sorry, uh drake this is my family and some friends. This is Edward my boyfriend.” Drake’s eyes went bigger then nodded in understanding. In his head, he was comparing me to a guy with brown hair and green eyes. Who is this guy? Is this Bella’s ex-boyfriend? I think I’ll ask her when we get home.

“This is my sister, Quinn and her boyfriend Gleb and my other brother, Gail. Oh and this is Alice, jasper, Rosalie and Emmett” Bella pointed each of them. Drake nodded. I was surprised that he didn’t even noticed Rosalie’s beauty, his thoughts were surrounding Bella. His thoughts were kind and caring when it comes to Bella, I can see that he treats Bella as a sister. I was relieved at his thoughts, I think I well get along with this guy perfectly.

“So how are things, when we left?” Bella asked anxiously.

“Oh, um same old stuff that we do. Work, dance and some stuff you wanted us to do.” Drake said.

“Hmmm… thanks” Bella was deep in her own thoughts.

Drake just looked at her sympathetically. Then mouthed ‘sorry’ so that no one will notice but apparently drew and the rest of the seniors noticed.

“Dang girl, please don’t cry.” Said letty in her thoughts.

“I hope she’s okay with Edward, but I think he didn’t have any clue yet. Maybe Bella will tell him when we get home.” Drew looked at her like he wanted to cry too.

Drake hugged her closer as if he was some kind of Bella’s father. I feel so helpless not knowing what their thoughts mean. I wish I could hear what Bella is thinking so I can comfort her. I think it has something to do with~ nah… of course not. Bella pulled away from drake to lean her head to my shoulder. I held her hand for the rest of the night. We all talked about random stuff and a few dancing moves because Emmett and Gail wanted to learn some. Bella didn’t talk for the rest of the night, and no one seems to bother her. It was getting late and I can see all Bella’s human friends are pretty drunk, so we said our goodbyes and thank them.

When we were about to leave the room, Bella let go of my hand. I was a bit hurt seeing her doing that but I regained my composure when Bella walked back into the room to move drake away from the two drunken seniors. She moved him to a much comfortable couch then kissed his forehead. Bella went her way to me with a flashing smile that melted my whole body. She wrapped her arms around my waist then kissed me lightly in the lips.

When we got to the parking lot, our siblings are waiting for us. On our way home, Bella came back to herself. She talked to Alice about some shopping trips and about the school dance decorations. Bella must have asked Alice to help her decorate the gym. It’s a good thing I already asked bella and it was the same day that she became mine forever.

We parked our cars then headed off to our own rooms. I pulled Bella in our own room when Alice whispered in Bella’s ears

“Don’t worry, he’ll understand” Alice flashed a smile at Bella then walked away to her own room.
I carried her into our room. She kissed me softly then suddenly her kisses turned into faster rhythm. I kicked the door lightly behind me. She wrapped her arms around my neck, I broke away to kiss her at the neck. She pushed me slightly away. I looked at her confusingly. She took a deep breath then cradled my face in her hands. I looked at her gold eyes; I massaged her cheeks with the back of my hand. She closed her eyes.

“Edward, we need to talk”
guys comment me!! sorry for the ending of this chapter, i just really need to cut it to proceed to the next chapter. i hope you like it!! tell about your opinion in bella's ex-bf. thanks again.
wt heck i want to noe now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~

tell me or edward gets it!

*pulls a gun to his head*

aww nvm i will noe sonner or l8ter *puts gun down and releases eddie*
hahaha! i'm sorry to say but even if you shot edward with a gun there's no use....hahaha well anyway, i'll try to post tomorrow of the next day...have fun!
WHat!!!!!!! why did you stop??!! I need more!!! please post more up really really really soon!!!!!! what do they have to talk about? WHat happened in the past that made Bella want to cry!!!!!! What are they talking about!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep writing i need to find out and SOON!!!! Love your story:)
aww dont leave us hanging like tht nd bellas ex boyfriend as yuh describe him sounds like edward when he was human { brown hair and green eyes } tht left me thinking keep me udated!!! love it


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