The Twilight Saga

bella is a talented vampire that knows how to sing, dance and have fun. she is known as the popular perfect rich girl in a little town called forks. she is accompanied by her family called the stewarts. one day during her dance recitals, the cullens moved to forks. will she found love other than her passion? is her love strong enough to conquer her it?

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Chapter 1 Dance recital

“Hurry drew!! I’m going to be late!!” I ran in human speed across the lawn towards the gym. Ugh! I hate running so slow. It makes me even more nervous. Today is my dance recital. Well this isn’t actually my first but every time I have a dance recital, I always get so nervous. I breathe in and out. I reminded myself. It’s not like I needed air, but it’s the only method I know that calm me.
“Relax Bella. Don’t worry everybody will love you.” drew said this as he me pulled to the backstage.

Drew is my brother. He have average built, pale just like every vamp I know. And he has a blonde shaggy hair. Drew is not my brother by blood but I treat him like one. “Hey drew, what time mom and the others are coming?” I asked nervously.

“Um... I don’t know maybe, before the show starts. Duh?!!” humph! He said as he raises one of his eyebrows. I just rolled my eyes at him. He is sometimes annoying.

After I got ready, the emcee started to introduce us. If I my heart is still beating, I swear it’s going to burst right out of my chest. After fidgeting for 20 minutes, my name was called. I went into the stage and started my ballet/hip hop dance. Drew was the one who thought of that idea.

The music was able to relax my body. I really love this song, Single Ladies by Beyonce’. Drew put a touch of his orchestra skills on the music by remixing my cd with some of his compositions. The crowd applauded when I was over. I’m kinda used to it though, the standing ovations, bouquets flying everywhere. I just want to have fun.

I saw my family sitting at the back row. Zon waved at me while the others just smile. I smile at them in return. I went directly to my dressing room to change. My teachers congratulated me, unexpectedly, Gail, my other brother came in with a bouquet of red roses.

“Congratulations lil sis. Your dance was awesome!! The people watched you with their mouths open. It was so hilarious.” His booming laugh surrounded my room.
I smack him in his head. “Stop it!” Gail is an annoying yet funny type of brother. He’s always there to make fun of me. Well every brother is. There was a silent knock.
“Oh mom!!”I run towards zon to catch her adoring hug.

Zon is the leader of our coven. We kinda treat her as our mom. She’s always there whenever you needed support and advice. She was the one who created us. She works as a doctor. I really admired her because of her self control and her passion to help others that needed her. “Bella you were great!!” she hugged me even tighter.
“Congrats Bella!!” Gleb and Quinn both came in.
“Well thanks guys. Where’s drew??” everyone looked at zon. “Guys?”
Zon was first to speak “there are other vampires that watched your show so drew was the one who entertained them.” she looked at me assuringly.
“Well then come on let’s meet them.” They all nodded.
Zon was explaining about the vampires on the way home.

“I don’t know anything about them yet, but drew was the one who meet up with them. They will be visiting us, so guys please behave, okay?” Gail, gleb and I just laugh at her.
Zon and Quinn looked at the three of us murderously.
“Don’t worry zon, I will make sure that there will be nothing to worry about.” Quinn reassured zon.

Gail snorted. “Yah like that’s gonna happen.”

“I mean it.” Zon said in her motherly tone.

“Yes, mom.” We all said.
When we came to house we saw a Volvo parked in front.
We went out all at the same time, all have wondering faces.

I heard drew’s voice “there home. Just wait till you see Bella.” I was surprised. I didn’t know that I will be a topic. I looked at zon curiously.

“They really wanted to meet you because they were amazed by your dance.” She smiled at me.
All I can say was “oh okay”
Drew opened the door for us.

Chapter 2 a new dimension

“Hey” drew greeted me.
I hugged him. “So how was the recital?”
I looked at him confused. “Didn’t you watch the show?”
He looked at me apologetically. “Sorry I didn’t, I have things to do.” He motioned his head towards our guest. “I see.”

There are five vampires sitting in the couch. They smiled at me, I just smiled back.
“Well hello, welcome to forks.” Zon said.
“Thank you.” The bronzed haired guy said.
“May I introduce you to my family, I am marizon by the way, but you can call me zon. This is Quinn, Gleb, Gail, and Bella.” Pointing at each one of us. “And I think you’ve all met drew.” They all nodded.
We all said hi to them. The bronze haired guy spoke again.
“It’s nice to meet you all. I am Edward. This is my sister Alice” pointing to a pixie like girl with deep black, cropped short hair pointing in all directions.
“Hi” Alice said. Then she hugged me, I hugged her back. “We are going to be great friends.” she said. I just smiled at her. She went back beside Edward.

“This is Rosalie, Emmett, and jasper” Edward continued.

Rosalie has golden blonde hair. She looked like a goddess, with her beautiful figure and a very confident face. She smiled at me. Emmett was big muscled guy with brown hair. He looked like Gail, just bigger. Jasper has honey blonde hair, tall and slender but till muscular.
“Hey Bella congrats by the way, I love your dance! Can you please teach me how to do it?!!”Alice said.
“Yeah sure” as Alice and me make our own conversation, the others did too. Emmett, jasper, drew, and Gail talked about sports and other guy stuff while Rosalie, Quinn and gleb went to hunt. And Edward and zon talked about the other two members of their coven that will visit us. Sometimes I caught Edward glancing at me.

I just smiled at him, don’t want to embarrass our guests. Well actually I want to. He’s expression was the funniest thing I’ve seen. I hope he doesn’t have someone else yet. Holy crap! What am I thinking? I just met the guy. I can’t just walk up to him, and tell him I love him. Oh wait. Did I say I love him? No way! Erase, erase, erase!

I shook my head. Alice keeps on babbling about shopping trips and some family facts about them.

What I learned so far, they are also vegetarians. They also have unique powers like us. Edward is a mind reader; Alice can see the future and jasper can control the emotions.

Suddenly Alice asks me a question. “Bella I was wondering, how come Edward couldn’t hear your family’s thoughts when we went to your recital?”

“Actually, that’s because of my power. I am a shield.” I told her glumly.

“Are you the only one who has a power in your family?” curiosity burning in her eyes.

“Actually Zon can heal any sick people while Quinn makes the time stop and Gail controls the weather.” She looked amazed.
“Really? She can heal people?? She should meet Carlisle, but he’s working at the hospital right now.”

“Carlisle?”

“Yeah he is our father and the leader of our coven. Oh and esme, she is Carlisle’s wife. She stays home while the five of us goes to school.”

Wow. Big family.

“Well that’s good, because zon is also a doctor. And since Quinn and gleb have work,
you and your siblings can...” Alice cut me off.
“Hangout together!” how did she?...oh yeah psychic

She’s very happy about the idea of us girls shopping together in Port Angeles. I really hate shopping, Quinn always drag me to different stores and always dress me up like a freaking Barbie doll. Ugh! So much for being a vampire, when you can’t have freedom. I’m really frustrated from all the nerve wrecking events this day.

When Carlisle and esme came to visit, we introduced ourselves again. As they make their way up to whole new conversations, I excused myself to the dance room to have a little relaxation. When I dance, it relaxes my mind. It’s very peaceful. Just me and the dance floor. When the song changed to my immortal by evanescence, there was a silent knock.

It was Edward.

I was shocked. I didn’t know what to say. What does he want?

“Hey”

I couldn’t say anything so I just nodded. He smiled at me. I crooked smile that took my breath away, if that was possible.

“Don’t worry I’m just going to watch. Your dancing amazes me.”

What? Is that for real? I amazed him. “Thanks”

I continued my dancing. Twisting and twirling around. The soul of music and the message of the song took me to another dimension. I went back to reality when someone clapped their hands. I was surprised Edward was still here. Usually when I danced like that, my family went out of this room. Maybe because they knew that I’m not with them at the moment. He walks across the room in human pace towards me. I just stood there confused at the same time shocked.

“That was the loveliest dance I have ever seen in my existence.”

What??!! I don’t know what to say. No one has ever said those things to me. I just stood there, still shocked with my mouth open.

He chuckled, and then put his hand under my chin to slowly close my mouth. I must look like an idiot! I can’t believe it. I lower my head to hide the embarrassment. I didn’t realize that his hand is still holding my chin. I took a glance at him. I was locked in his gaze. His beautiful golden eyes are dazzling. Its like filled with thousand diamonds and stars.
He smiled at me thoughtfully.
“When you were dancing, it’s like you’re in another dimension. And I didn’t know how but I think I was sucked in the black hole you were creating. Like a force, that wants me to be with you.” Those words that he let out, makes me want to hug him and kiss his mesmerizing lips.

I was happy.

Suddenly his smile turned into a frown. Maybe because of my face, I checked my mouth if it was still open. Whew! It’s a good thing it’s not; I would really look like a total idiot if I did. I rearrange my features. Then said

“Thank you, I don’t know what to say actually. No one has ever said that to me in my existence.” I smiled at him brightly.

His face lit up, and then became irritated. I suddenly heard voices.

“Nice one Bella!! Way the go to ruin the moment by looking like an idiot!” drew exclaimed.
Gleb and Gail started to whistle while jasper and Emmett was rolling on the floor laughing. What’s so funny?

That made me furious. I controlled my anger as much as possible. I didn’t want to make a scene. Edward frowned beside me.

Then gleb shouted “hey Bella! Look what I got!”

Gleb was waving a picture of me in a shocked expression with my mouth hanging open.

That’s it!!! I launched at them.

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links to the pages:
chapter 3 rumors & chapter 4 the big scene
chapter 5 clarifications
chapter 6 dance practices
chapter 7 the race
chapter 8 jealousy
chapter 9 Baltimore
chapter 10 the streets part 1
part 2
part 3
chapter 11 my past
chapter 12 the visit 
chapter 13 the ball
chapter 14 the news
chapter 15 the surprise
chapter 16 my sweet revenge
chapter 17 the dance
chapter 18 revenge, bloodshed and coming back 
chapter 19 love at first smell?
chapter 20 karaoke night!! part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
chapter 21 cleansing
chapter 22 weirdest flight ever!!!
chapter 23 the cullen isle part 1
part 2
part 3
Chapter 24 crazy fashions, crazy vampires
chapter 25 Forkwarts?
chapter 26 a destined fairytale
chapter 27 it's all good!!
chapter 28 jealous? omg, yes! 
Chapter 30 the man who made it all happen
Chapter 31 The comeback of family crazy time 
chapter 34 our fisrt and last big concert
Chapter 35 This is it!

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chapter 14 the news

The flight back home was fast; at least I think it was. I’m a bit sad that Edward and I need to be separated because we needed to settle our things. We were on our way home when the sun was about to set, so it means it’s time for school and time to see Edward again. We got home then I took a quick shower then changed with some fresh clothes that Quinn laid on my bed.(bella's outfit: http://www.polyvore.com/bella_outfit_news/set?id=8798173) I was about to reach the blow dryer when Quinn burst into my room then dragged me to the chair in front of my hair dresser then started working on my hair. The worst five minutes of my life was over. I thanked her then called my brothers for school.

“Drew! Gail! Come on, were going to be late!” I shouted even though they can perfectly hear me.

A few seconds drew came down. I looked around.

“Where’s Gail?” I asked him.

“Oh he’s on his computer, uploading the photos we took in Baltimore.” we both chuckled. After a few seconds, we both got impatient. We both yelled

“GAIL!!!”

“Alright, alright! Can’t you two wait?” he said irritated.

As we walked out of the house, we heard a car turning onto our driveway, the three of us tensed up. Who could that be? A shiny silver Volvo appeared. I relaxed but still confused. Edward stepped out of the car, smiling brightly at me. I ran over to him, and then pecked his cheeks.

“What are you doing here?” I asked him. He smiled his crooked smile.

“Picking you up for school” he said

“Oh, okay” we were about to turn when Gail cleared his throat. I looked at him annoyed.

“What?” I asked irritated.

“Huh, so you’re just going to ditch us?” he said I rolled my eyes at him.

“Fine, go use your car, you can drive. Bye.” I waved at them.

Drew and Gail started arguing which car they will take, so we went off.

The car ride was only three minutes or so. When we got to school, almost everyone was looking at Rosalie’s convertible. Edward parked his car beside it. I was about to open my door when Edward ran at human pace to open it for me. I flashed him my smile.

“Thank you” I said.

Some people noticed us, especially Jessica Stanley’s group. Edward wrapped his arm around my shoulder, and then all of the guys are glaring at him while some girls are glaring at me. We both laughed at their expression while we walked over to Rosalie’s convertible. Alice walked ~more like danced over to my side.

“Hey Bella” she said while hugging me.

“Hey Alice” I replied.

“Remember we have to plan the decorations for the gym, okay?” she said suspiciously.

Shoot! I totally forgot about that! How can a vampire forget things?

“Yeah, of course.” I told her. She’s still not buying it so I changed the topic.

“Wow, love the outfit Alice…very schoolgirl.” I looked at her outfit adoringly.
(alice's outfit: http://www.polyvore.com/alice_outfit_news/set?id=8798185)

She smiled at me. “Thanks, like my bag?” she said enthusiastically while flaunting her bag like a model. Edward chuckled beside me.

“Of course, so cute” I replied. Rosalie walked over to Alice’s side then said,

“Hey, Bella!!! What about my outfit?” she asked while turning around like a model.
(rosalie's outfit: http://www.polyvore.com/rosalie_outfit_news/set?id=8798181)

“Are you kidding? Love your outfit too. Very sexy.” I smiled at her.

I heard Gail’s pickup pulled up. Gail stepped out of his pickup grinning from ear to ear while drew looked like he’s mourning for someone. We all laughed at their expression.

As Edward walked me and Alice to class, people in the hallway stared at us. The three of us just chatted happily and ignored the endless stares. I kissed Edward goodbye, then walked inside the room. I sat beside Alice. We talked about our plans for the dance. The teacher didn’t bother asking us any questions because she knows we can answer anything.

The bell rang and I waved at Alice goodbye. I walked all the way to math. I sat at my usual seat. I pulled out my ipod while waiting for the teacher to arrive. Someone tapped me from behind. I turned around to see Tyler Crowley and Eric Yorkie grinning at me.
I smiled at them politely.

“Hi guys! What’s up?” I asked them. Their heartbeats started fluttering. Tyler was the one who composed his face.

“Um, we we’re just wondering are you and Cullen dating?” he asked nervously as if his life depended on it.

“Um…yeah we are dating.” I said innocently.

Eric yelled “YES!! Pay up?!” he motioned his hand to Tyler. They started arguing about different possibilities about me and Edward’s relationship. I blocked their voices out and focused on the lesson but it’s very hard, because when something that reminds me of Edward, my mind started to go in a different direction.

As soon as the bell rang, I run in human pace out of the room to meet drew for the singing rehearsal we’re having. I passed Jessica Stanley’s group who is glaring at me murderously. I chuckled under my breath. As if they could beat me, I’ll be happy if they even try. I was so wrapped up in my imagination that I didn’t notice Edward walking beside me with a smirk on his face. I stopped. He did the same and looked at me confusingly.

“What?” he said.

“Since when did you come up beside me?” I asked bewildered.

“About five minutes ago, you were so focused on your daydreaming you didn’t even notice me. The lockers almost got hit by you, and it’s a good thing I pulled you away before anyone got hurt.” he was trying hard not to laugh. I sighed.

“Sorry. I didn’t mean it to happen” I said while looking at my shoes. He put his finger under my chin to see my face. His eyes were burning in curiosity.

“What exactly were you daydreaming about?” he asked.

I couldn’t tell that I dreamed of trying to torture someone. He noticed my sudden hesitation so I answered quickly

“Just someone not important, don’t even think about it. I just got carried away by my emotions.” I smiled trying to reassure him.

As I entered the music room, Edward opened the door for me. Oh, he’s such a gentleman!
I smiled at him. Drew and I started the duet again but half way through the song, someone knocked on the door. Then Mrs. Cope came in.

“Bella, the principal wants to talk to you.” she said in a business tone. She looked around the room to find Edward sitting in the corner. He smiled at her brightly setting her heart to burst right out of her chest any moment. I shook my head. He always does that kind of response to females. I picked up my things, then turned to drew and Edward.

“See you guys at lunch.” I waved at them. Edward winked at me, so I walked out of the room and through the hallway with a big grin plastered on my face. Mrs. Cope led knocked the door of the principal’s office.

“Principal Greene, Bella is right here.”

“Oh let her in, please.” Mrs. Cope motioned me to come in. Mr. Greene has a bald head with thick black eyebrows and blue eyes. He arranged his very tight brown coat and cleared his throat.

“Please sit down Miss Stewart.” He motioned his hand to the chair beside his table.

“Um, what is this about principal?” asked him, getting straight to the point.

“Well it’s about your performance at your dance recital. You see, we video taped it and send it to Julliard’s school of art. They’ve seen your potential so they are giving you a full scholarship in college” he said proudly.

I can’t believe it!!! Julliard?! OMG! Of course I’ll accept it. But I’ll have to ask my family first. Mr. Greene was waiting impatiently for my answer.

“Um, wow! Julliard? I can’t believe it!!! Thank you so much, but I have to talk to my family first about this if you don’t mind”

“Oh, of course miss Stewart.” He nodded approvingly.

“Is that all you wanted to say sir?” I asked him impatiently.

“Actually, how’s the dance preparation doing?”

“Oh, everything fine sir. Alice Cullen volunteered in decorating the gym and I swear, she’s pretty good at it, so all you have to is come there and look great.” I smiled at him

“Well, that’s all miss Stewart. You can go to lunch now.”

I walked out of the room to and went straight to the cafeteria. My brothers together with the Cullens are sitting at the farthest corner of the room, laughing and talking. When Edward saw me, his eyes brightened. I was about to walk towards them when Jessica Stanley, Lauren smith and Miranda miller blocked my way. I tried avoiding them but just keep on blocking me. I got irritated then snapped at them

“What do you want?”

Jessica smirked. She leaned closer to me so she’s talking in my face.

“Just wanted to let you know, Edward’s going to be mine before the dance and you’re going to be dateless.” I didn’t look her in the face, if I did that; I’ll do something I’ll regret later on.

“Hey,” she tried to push me with one finger on the shoulder but I didn’t feel anything. “Look at me when I’m still speaking. You have no respect. What would people think if they learned that?” I looked at her with disbelief.

“Are you crazy? Oh wait, you already are! First of all, you don’t need to be respected ‘cause you don’t deserve it. Second, fine, go and try everything you can to take Edward from me, and third, I will fight for him, twice as hard as you will.” I bumped her lightly on the shoulder as I pass them. She fell backwards stepping Miranda miller’s shoe. Well I thought lightly.

I smiled grimly while walking to our table. My family and the rest were laughing hysterically. When I reached there Rosalie said

“You go girl!” I laughed at her.

“You know Bella, all you need to do is ask us if there’s any prank you wanted us to do with that frog.” Gail said. Our table is shaking from laughter. Even Edward is happy on what I did. I cuddled closer to Edward’s chest. He whispered in my ear

“She’ll never have me and you know that, right?”

I looked at him then said

“Of course, but I know her, she’ll do everything to break us up and I don’t want that to happen that’s why I’m fighting for you, silly.” I kissed him passionately on the lips. Alice cleared her throat. I looked at my annoying pixie sister.

“Bella, do you have anything to tell us?” she said expectantly at me. Everyone at the table looked at me, curious about the news.

“Actually, Alice, I’m going to ask first my family, but since you guys are practically family, I might as well break the news to you guys.” I took a deep breath. Alice rolled he eyes at me.

Drew looked worried. “Bella, is there a problem?” I smiled at him.

“No there’s no problem, at all. In fact, what I’m going to tell you was good news, I think.” I paused.

“Oh, say it already!!!” Alice shouted impatiently.
“fine, the principal said that I got a full scholarship from Julliard’s school of art.” There was a moment of silence from the table I heard Edward chuckled under his breath. Drew was the one who broke the silence

“YES!!! We’re going to Julliard’s!!! Oh Bella, did the principal said anything about me? Huh? Huh? Huh?” The rest of us looked at him like he’s crazy, and I think he is. I composed my face.

“Um, I’m sorry drew, the principal didn’t say something about you, but I guess he’ll call you later.” His face fell down a bit but he still has a smile on his face. The rest started to congratulate me and talked about what college they’re going to.

Edward and I walked hand in hand towards biology. We sat on our usual spots. We talked a bit then the teacher arrived. The discussion was so boring. I heard it for like hundred times.

Edward on the other hand, passed a note to me.

“I have a surprise for you, later.”

“What kind of a surprise?” I scribbled then pass the note to him.

He passed the note to me vary fast for human eyes to see.

“Just wait and see, my love.” I smiled at the note. Then I mouthed to him “okay”

He mouthed back “I love you” I giggled. Then Mr. Varner cleared his throat.

“Miss Stewart and Mr. Cullen, would you please share to the class what the two of you are talking about?” he looked at me suspiciously. I smiled brightly at him. His face softened then his heart beat accelerates.

“Oh Mr. Varner, we were just talking about how handsome, awesome and great teacher you are.” I smiled at him, the smile that makes every human male faint. On the way his heart beats, I think he’s going to have a cardiac arrest. Mr. Varner swallowed loudly then said “why thank you miss Stewart. That was very kind of you.” he turned to the class then continued the discussion. Edward just shook his head while chuckling then he whispered in my ear,

“You do know that, you’re the most wonderful creature I have ever met.” I giggled.

The school bell rang so; we went our separate ways even though it’s hard. I entered the gym to find Alice jumping uncontrollably. She ran to me in vampire speed then hugged me while wrapping her legs on my body.

“Um…it’s nice to see you two, Alice.” I said while struggling to get the annoying pixie off of my body.

“Oh my gosh, Bella! Thank you so much for this! Don’t worry; you won’t regret that you chose me.” Alice jumped off of me as the rest of the dance committee came in.

“Hey everybody!! This is Alice Cullen, and she will be the one in charge in decorating the gym for the dance.” Angela Webber handed the poster each and every one of us. She spoke shyly

“Um, since our theme is black and white masquerade ball, I came up with this poster. If anyone doesn’t like it, I am willing to change it.”

“Well, thank you Angela for the poster. I love it actually. In fact, you just gave me the perfect idea about the decorations for the dance.” Alice said smiling brightly around the group.

We talked for about an hour in planning and organizing the dance. And I think it was the longest 60 minutes of my existence. I can’t wait to see Edward. When the bell rang, I was the first one to stand up. I told them my goodbyes then walked out of the gym. I saw Edward leaning against the wall. I walked over to him as he welcomed me by his embrace.

“I’ve missed you” I said.

“Well, not as much as I miss you.” he whispered in my ear.

Alice caught up with us on the way to the parking lot. When we reached our siblings, she danced all the way to jasper’s side. Then out of no where, a familiar voice shouted my name.

“BELLA!!!!!” drew shouted.

He ran out of the school doors pushing everyone out of his way. He looked excited and jumpy.

“Bella!!!! The principal talked to me, and guess what?” I rolled my eyes at him.

“You’re going to Julliard’s” I replied plainly.

“I’m going to JULLIARD’S!!!” he shouted on my face. He started dancing around, so me and Edward sneaked out of the lot laughing hysterically. After a few minutes of silence, I remembered his surprise.

“So, what’s the surprise?” I asked excitedly.

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comment me!! and comment about the out fits!!! thanks!!!
I love Jessica's threat. This makes for some excitement in Edward and Bella's relationship. Good story!!!!!!
yeah i know, i think the dance will be exciting!! thanks for your comment!!
What!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dont stop there!!!!! I have to know what the surprise is!!!!1 Keep writing!!! write more soon!!!!
wll i'm still thinking of ideas about that...if u have, please send it to me by message..thanks!
I really want to know the surprise. I've been following your story religiously.
wow, thanks for keeping up with it! and you'll have to wait to find out the surprise!!!
i did 'nt like alice sweter=0
Okay, so im just reading this like now....yeah i noe its really late!! Um the outfits are very cool but i jst think in this chapter, maybe rosalies outfit is....how do i say it? Very colourful....maybe you could tone the colour just a smidge.....but other den that, very good...i love it!! i told you i was going to be very honest in my responses...*smirks*
zhaydel_keekay wow great job please post soon :D
thanks!! i'm posting the next chapter on wednesday

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