The Twilight Saga

bella is a talented vampire that knows how to sing, dance and have fun. she is known as the popular perfect rich girl in a little town called forks. she is accompanied by her family called the stewarts. one day during her dance recitals, the cullens moved to forks. will she found love other than her passion? is her love strong enough to conquer her it?

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Chapter 1 Dance recital

“Hurry drew!! I’m going to be late!!” I ran in human speed across the lawn towards the gym. Ugh! I hate running so slow. It makes me even more nervous. Today is my dance recital. Well this isn’t actually my first but every time I have a dance recital, I always get so nervous. I breathe in and out. I reminded myself. It’s not like I needed air, but it’s the only method I know that calm me.
“Relax Bella. Don’t worry everybody will love you.” drew said this as he me pulled to the backstage.

Drew is my brother. He have average built, pale just like every vamp I know. And he has a blonde shaggy hair. Drew is not my brother by blood but I treat him like one. “Hey drew, what time mom and the others are coming?” I asked nervously.

“Um... I don’t know maybe, before the show starts. Duh?!!” humph! He said as he raises one of his eyebrows. I just rolled my eyes at him. He is sometimes annoying.

After I got ready, the emcee started to introduce us. If I my heart is still beating, I swear it’s going to burst right out of my chest. After fidgeting for 20 minutes, my name was called. I went into the stage and started my ballet/hip hop dance. Drew was the one who thought of that idea.

The music was able to relax my body. I really love this song, Single Ladies by Beyonce’. Drew put a touch of his orchestra skills on the music by remixing my cd with some of his compositions. The crowd applauded when I was over. I’m kinda used to it though, the standing ovations, bouquets flying everywhere. I just want to have fun.

I saw my family sitting at the back row. Zon waved at me while the others just smile. I smile at them in return. I went directly to my dressing room to change. My teachers congratulated me, unexpectedly, Gail, my other brother came in with a bouquet of red roses.

“Congratulations lil sis. Your dance was awesome!! The people watched you with their mouths open. It was so hilarious.” His booming laugh surrounded my room.
I smack him in his head. “Stop it!” Gail is an annoying yet funny type of brother. He’s always there to make fun of me. Well every brother is. There was a silent knock.
“Oh mom!!”I run towards zon to catch her adoring hug.

Zon is the leader of our coven. We kinda treat her as our mom. She’s always there whenever you needed support and advice. She was the one who created us. She works as a doctor. I really admired her because of her self control and her passion to help others that needed her. “Bella you were great!!” she hugged me even tighter.
“Congrats Bella!!” Gleb and Quinn both came in.
“Well thanks guys. Where’s drew??” everyone looked at zon. “Guys?”
Zon was first to speak “there are other vampires that watched your show so drew was the one who entertained them.” she looked at me assuringly.
“Well then come on let’s meet them.” They all nodded.
Zon was explaining about the vampires on the way home.

“I don’t know anything about them yet, but drew was the one who meet up with them. They will be visiting us, so guys please behave, okay?” Gail, gleb and I just laugh at her.
Zon and Quinn looked at the three of us murderously.
“Don’t worry zon, I will make sure that there will be nothing to worry about.” Quinn reassured zon.

Gail snorted. “Yah like that’s gonna happen.”

“I mean it.” Zon said in her motherly tone.

“Yes, mom.” We all said.
When we came to house we saw a Volvo parked in front.
We went out all at the same time, all have wondering faces.

I heard drew’s voice “there home. Just wait till you see Bella.” I was surprised. I didn’t know that I will be a topic. I looked at zon curiously.

“They really wanted to meet you because they were amazed by your dance.” She smiled at me.
All I can say was “oh okay”
Drew opened the door for us.

Chapter 2 a new dimension

“Hey” drew greeted me.
I hugged him. “So how was the recital?”
I looked at him confused. “Didn’t you watch the show?”
He looked at me apologetically. “Sorry I didn’t, I have things to do.” He motioned his head towards our guest. “I see.”

There are five vampires sitting in the couch. They smiled at me, I just smiled back.
“Well hello, welcome to forks.” Zon said.
“Thank you.” The bronzed haired guy said.
“May I introduce you to my family, I am marizon by the way, but you can call me zon. This is Quinn, Gleb, Gail, and Bella.” Pointing at each one of us. “And I think you’ve all met drew.” They all nodded.
We all said hi to them. The bronze haired guy spoke again.
“It’s nice to meet you all. I am Edward. This is my sister Alice” pointing to a pixie like girl with deep black, cropped short hair pointing in all directions.
“Hi” Alice said. Then she hugged me, I hugged her back. “We are going to be great friends.” she said. I just smiled at her. She went back beside Edward.

“This is Rosalie, Emmett, and jasper” Edward continued.

Rosalie has golden blonde hair. She looked like a goddess, with her beautiful figure and a very confident face. She smiled at me. Emmett was big muscled guy with brown hair. He looked like Gail, just bigger. Jasper has honey blonde hair, tall and slender but till muscular.
“Hey Bella congrats by the way, I love your dance! Can you please teach me how to do it?!!”Alice said.
“Yeah sure” as Alice and me make our own conversation, the others did too. Emmett, jasper, drew, and Gail talked about sports and other guy stuff while Rosalie, Quinn and gleb went to hunt. And Edward and zon talked about the other two members of their coven that will visit us. Sometimes I caught Edward glancing at me.

I just smiled at him, don’t want to embarrass our guests. Well actually I want to. He’s expression was the funniest thing I’ve seen. I hope he doesn’t have someone else yet. Holy crap! What am I thinking? I just met the guy. I can’t just walk up to him, and tell him I love him. Oh wait. Did I say I love him? No way! Erase, erase, erase!

I shook my head. Alice keeps on babbling about shopping trips and some family facts about them.

What I learned so far, they are also vegetarians. They also have unique powers like us. Edward is a mind reader; Alice can see the future and jasper can control the emotions.

Suddenly Alice asks me a question. “Bella I was wondering, how come Edward couldn’t hear your family’s thoughts when we went to your recital?”

“Actually, that’s because of my power. I am a shield.” I told her glumly.

“Are you the only one who has a power in your family?” curiosity burning in her eyes.

“Actually Zon can heal any sick people while Quinn makes the time stop and Gail controls the weather.” She looked amazed.
“Really? She can heal people?? She should meet Carlisle, but he’s working at the hospital right now.”

“Carlisle?”

“Yeah he is our father and the leader of our coven. Oh and esme, she is Carlisle’s wife. She stays home while the five of us goes to school.”

Wow. Big family.

“Well that’s good, because zon is also a doctor. And since Quinn and gleb have work,
you and your siblings can...” Alice cut me off.
“Hangout together!” how did she?...oh yeah psychic

She’s very happy about the idea of us girls shopping together in Port Angeles. I really hate shopping, Quinn always drag me to different stores and always dress me up like a freaking Barbie doll. Ugh! So much for being a vampire, when you can’t have freedom. I’m really frustrated from all the nerve wrecking events this day.

When Carlisle and esme came to visit, we introduced ourselves again. As they make their way up to whole new conversations, I excused myself to the dance room to have a little relaxation. When I dance, it relaxes my mind. It’s very peaceful. Just me and the dance floor. When the song changed to my immortal by evanescence, there was a silent knock.

It was Edward.

I was shocked. I didn’t know what to say. What does he want?

“Hey”

I couldn’t say anything so I just nodded. He smiled at me. I crooked smile that took my breath away, if that was possible.

“Don’t worry I’m just going to watch. Your dancing amazes me.”

What? Is that for real? I amazed him. “Thanks”

I continued my dancing. Twisting and twirling around. The soul of music and the message of the song took me to another dimension. I went back to reality when someone clapped their hands. I was surprised Edward was still here. Usually when I danced like that, my family went out of this room. Maybe because they knew that I’m not with them at the moment. He walks across the room in human pace towards me. I just stood there confused at the same time shocked.

“That was the loveliest dance I have ever seen in my existence.”

What??!! I don’t know what to say. No one has ever said those things to me. I just stood there, still shocked with my mouth open.

He chuckled, and then put his hand under my chin to slowly close my mouth. I must look like an idiot! I can’t believe it. I lower my head to hide the embarrassment. I didn’t realize that his hand is still holding my chin. I took a glance at him. I was locked in his gaze. His beautiful golden eyes are dazzling. Its like filled with thousand diamonds and stars.
He smiled at me thoughtfully.
“When you were dancing, it’s like you’re in another dimension. And I didn’t know how but I think I was sucked in the black hole you were creating. Like a force, that wants me to be with you.” Those words that he let out, makes me want to hug him and kiss his mesmerizing lips.

I was happy.

Suddenly his smile turned into a frown. Maybe because of my face, I checked my mouth if it was still open. Whew! It’s a good thing it’s not; I would really look like a total idiot if I did. I rearrange my features. Then said

“Thank you, I don’t know what to say actually. No one has ever said that to me in my existence.” I smiled at him brightly.

His face lit up, and then became irritated. I suddenly heard voices.

“Nice one Bella!! Way the go to ruin the moment by looking like an idiot!” drew exclaimed.
Gleb and Gail started to whistle while jasper and Emmett was rolling on the floor laughing. What’s so funny?

That made me furious. I controlled my anger as much as possible. I didn’t want to make a scene. Edward frowned beside me.

Then gleb shouted “hey Bella! Look what I got!”

Gleb was waving a picture of me in a shocked expression with my mouth hanging open.

That’s it!!! I launched at them.

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links to the pages:
chapter 3 rumors & chapter 4 the big scene
chapter 5 clarifications
chapter 6 dance practices
chapter 7 the race
chapter 8 jealousy
chapter 9 Baltimore
chapter 10 the streets part 1
part 2
part 3
chapter 11 my past
chapter 12 the visit 
chapter 13 the ball
chapter 14 the news
chapter 15 the surprise
chapter 16 my sweet revenge
chapter 17 the dance
chapter 18 revenge, bloodshed and coming back 
chapter 19 love at first smell?
chapter 20 karaoke night!! part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
chapter 21 cleansing
chapter 22 weirdest flight ever!!!
chapter 23 the cullen isle part 1
part 2
part 3
Chapter 24 crazy fashions, crazy vampires
chapter 25 Forkwarts?
chapter 26 a destined fairytale
chapter 27 it's all good!!
chapter 28 jealous? omg, yes! 
Chapter 30 the man who made it all happen
Chapter 31 The comeback of family crazy time 
chapter 34 our fisrt and last big concert
Chapter 35 This is it!

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Chapter 23 cullen isle part 3

“You will not tell them anything or your dead.” Rosalie hissed at me as I flopped down at the sofa of their ‘hideout’. It really was a cool hideout if I say so myself. It was actually behind the falls at the highest top of the island. Who would have known?


“Rosalie, I told you for so many times, Edward wouldn’t let the boys get to us.” Bella explained. Rosalie huffed and walked out of the room. Bella just shook her head, and I think rosalie’s smiling? I was about to ask her why when lyka and lizette’s voices caught my attention.

“I told you, it’s better if we don’t let him see my face! He’ll get suspicious for sure... And Bella wouldn’t like that, she had greater plans for him than just that.” lyka shouted annoyingly. Bella tensed at the sound of her name.

“All I’m saying is, just a bit of a devious smile or an evil eye or something.” Lizette replied, a bit exasperated.

“Well, shut up! Bella doesn’t want us to talk about it when e--” lyka stopped mid-sentence when she saw me. Her eyes widened and she immediately put a hand on her mouth.

There was a bit awkward silence then lizette cleared her throat changing the subject completely as if nothing occurred.

“So, Edward! What are your brothers’ reactions when we fired them the skunk pee?” she asked, a bit curious and a bit nervous.

“Oh, they’ve been really pissed especially Gail. He really loathes Bella right now.” I replied casually.


“Uh…” lizette nodded and looked around, a bit unsure what to do next. Bella cleared her throat then grabbed my hand.

“Come on, Edward. Why don’t I gave you a tour?” she motioned her hand towards the room like a showcase girl and grabbed my arm by the other. I nodded and got up.

Lizette and lyka stood still while waving at me frantically. When Bella and I rounded the corner, I heard them both whispering and blaming their self. I looked at Bella curiously but she just shook her head then muttered “don’t even ask”



After hours of spending time together, I noticed that I haven’t coma across Alice ever since I got here so I decided to ask Bella as she played with the buttons of my shirt.

“Bella, I was wondering, where’s Alice?” I asked.

“Oh. She’s probably playing the guys some trick or something. After all, she’s the one who got this idea in the first place.” She waved her hand dismissively.

“You do know that Gail and Drew really are convinced that you’re the mastermind here right?” I asked while chuckling.

“Yup! We all are actually. We’ve got a lot of great minds, you know. Not all pranksters are men, there can be women too.” She pointed out.

I sighed. “Bella, I’m really sorry for provoking you. Really, I am. I’d rather provoke the volturi than you.” I looked at her sincerely to make my point and she smiled at me lovingly. I caressed her cheek before leaning in to kiss her.

My lips met the softest lips I’ve been craving for weeks. I deepened the kiss which makes her a bit surprised. Usually, she’s the one that makes our kisses deep but right now, all I want and need is her.

She pulled away suddenly looking all serious. She squared her shoulders as she spoke “Edward, I want you to promise me, to never go near the volturi, do you understand me? I swear, if you do that...” her voice faded as I took in her worried face. This angel is feeling worried because of me. I couldn’t take it.

“Bella, I will never, I promise. As long as you’re here by my side, I will never.” I vowed. Her worried lines faded and were replaced by a delicate yet playful smile.

He attacked my lips full force, which made me fall off the sofa we were cuddling in. there was a loud thud but the others didn’t mind so we continued making out. She was frantically caressing my hair and kissing my jaw when I heard the same familiar voice that I dreaded to hear.

“Having fun, Edward?” the voice giggled as its child like voice echoed across the room. I noticed that Bella was still hovering over me and kissing my jaw. She sensed my lack of cooperation and looked at me quizzically.

“Did you hear that voice?” I asked while looking around the room.

“Edward, what are you talking about? I didn’t hear anything besides you and me. The others are out, pranking the guys.” My head snapped up at her direction. She looked at me completely worried and confused.

“Oh. Well um, why don’t we just settle at the sofa for a while.” I asked pleadingly.

“Oh, okay.” Bella frowned at the idea but flopped down at the sofa. I sat beside her and kept her close as possible.

“Hey, why don’t we watch a movie?” she asked out of the blue. I nodded in confirmation and she immediately grabbed two DVDs.

“Which one do you like? The ring or The Grudge 3?” she asked holding out the CDs in front of me. My eyes widened and I started to become nervous. Why can’t she pick high school musical instead? Why? Why? I swallowed loudly.

“Er…Bella, why don’t we settle for high school musical or something?” I asked hopefully. She looked at me confusedly and in disbelief.


“Are you gay?” she blurted out. “Why would I want to watch high school musical? Why would you want to watch high school musical? And besides, Alice forced us to watch it for thousands of times here, so I want something different. My head is swimming with chick flicks and high school romances.” She babbled out while looking suspiciously at me.

I was shocked at what she said. Great, now my manhood is being questioned because of a stupid ghost! Ugh. This cannot be happening.

“No! God, Bella no. I just thought that since you hate the dark, you do hate horror movies.” I said immediately without thinking. She smirked at me then walked over to the player to put in the CD. I didn’t have a chance to see what she put in because her back was facing me.

“Edward?” Bella asked as she arranged the TV set.

“What?” I replied.


“I don’t hate the dark.” My eyes widened and I could hear the smile in her voice as she said it. Ugh! Idiot!

I laughed nervously as she cuddled close to me. As the movie introductions started to set in, I noticed were watching the grudge 3. Well at least there’s no phone call involved. Right?

Half way through the movie when the grudge started to show up, I was feeling tense and a sudden gush of wind came in the room. I felt the shiver ran down my spine when I heard soft footsteps coming from the hall. My eyes widened and I started to breathe heavily. Bella shifted beside me.

“Ugh! The wind is messing my hair.” Bella mumbled as she got up and paused the movie to close the terrace doors. Weird thing to say. Yeah I know girls say that a lot but this is Bella we’re talking about. She’s not Rosalie or Alice for Pete’s sake.

Ironically, it stops on the part where it features the grudge’s face attacking the lady painter. I swallowed loudly and searched the room frantically for Bella. Unfortunately, she was no where to be found. I started getting up when the familiar soft footsteps padded against the floor.

Then, cue the giggle.

“Edward” the voice sang.

I stiffly got up and moved closer towards the voice coming from the hallway. Every step I took, the voice seems to fade so I hurried up. I followed the voice all the way to game room and stopped at the doorway.

There stood a girl wearing a long white sleeping gown whose back is to me. She has long dark brown hair and her skin was a bit pale. I cocked my head to the side, thinking deeply that this girl seems familiar, too familiar.

I walked slowly towards her, inching slowly, trying not to let this mysterious girl learn my presence. I stretched my hand to grab her shoulder but then I herd Bella voice calling from me.

Reflexively, my head snapped towards Bella’s voice.

“Edward? What are you doing?” Bella asked confusedly, looking at my outstretched hand.

“Oh I was just…” my voice faded when the mysterious girl in front of me was no longer there. Bella raised her eyebrows at me while folding her arms against her chest.

“nothing.” I muttered. Was that just some crazy imagination??? It can’t be hallucination…vampires don’t hallucinate, do they? Man! I think this island is cursed. I felt my eyebrows furrowed and my back slumped in defeat.

“Okaaay” Bella said in a sarcastic tone. “Why don’t we go for a hunt? We haven’t hunted for awhile.” She grinned at me as she skipped onto my side, grabbing my arm and pulling me outside towards the patio.

“Come on” she kissed the tip of my nose and jumped to the heart of the forest. I grinned as I took in how graceful she moves. I quickly followed her as her voice rang through the forest.


After a while of fooling around, Bella and I started to really hunt. We found a pack of jaguars and lunged at them as they sleep. We were later joined by Alice, Quinn and Rosalie.

As we ran towards their ‘hideout’ I noticed that I haven’t seen lizette and lyka. So I asked Alice.

“Oh, they already left.” Was her only response, which confused me. How do they get out of this island? Did they swim all the way back? How did they even got here? We should have noticed their arrival since there’s only one dock and I’m pretty sure Carlisle would be informed about it.

I was about to open my mouth to ask her another question when Rosalie spoke.

“Come on. Let’s go back, it’s time.” The four of them shared wicked smiles. I cocked my head onto the side and looked suspiciously at them.

“What are you planning at?” I asked while squinting my eyes at each of them who gave me their most innocent look. And I noticed Bella’s innocent but sexy expression at me. My eyes started traveling down her body; she changed her comfy clothes to a more suitable attire to wear in an island.

She was wearing a swimsuit underneath a plaid wrapped around and some sneakers. She put on her huge red sun glasses and I noticed the rosary necklace and two cute ribbons clipped on her hair.


I smiled lovingly at her and we all started to run towards the villa Esmeralda. When the five of us walked through the door, we were welcomed by Carlisle, Esme and Zon.

“Edward!” Esme ran to my side as I hugged her tightly. Zon came to Bella and Quinn smiling somewhat, proudly at them. I nodded at Carlisle as he shook his head when we heard the guys coming in, struggling to be the one to first say sorry.

“What the-”

“EMMETT! Move your ass!”

“HEY! I’m stuck. Hey watch it, back there.”

“Emmett! Just knock the freakin’ door off of its hinges!”

“Heyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!”



BANG!


We heard some scrabble of feet then one by one, the boys came out of the kitchen and kneeled in front of the girls.

“Please forgive us!!! We’re totally sorry.” Gleb pleaded.

“Please!! No more pranks!!!” Gail shouted desperately and grabbed the hem of Bella’s dress in a desperate manner. I saw a Bella smirked and crossed her arms.

“We’re so sorry!!! And it’s Emmett fault!!” jasper put both of his hands in the air while pointing his index fingers to Emmett.

“Hey! It’s not my fault entirely.” Emmett defended.

“Oh shut up!” drew retorted then turned to Bella. “We admit, you girls we’re pretty great when it comes to pranking. And we’re sorry for the things we said, so are we cool?” he reached Bella for a hug and smiled at the girls.

The girls looked at each other knowingly and nodded. “Yeah we’re cool” Bella smiled then hugged his brother.


“So guess everyone learned their lesson?” Carlisle asked in between the hugs. The girls cough-laughed. “Not quite.” Someone mumbled.

I felt Gail and Drew’s eyes on me so I looked at them confusingly. I tried reading their minds but it was shielded by Bella. As we all gathered our things, they looked at me pitifully then patted my back. “Good luck, dude.” Was all they mumbled. Again, I looked at them confusingly while cocking my head to the side.


“Come on, love.” Bella smiled at me invitingly and pulled me upstairs to my, I mean our bedroom.

“I think you have something for Me.” she said with love and adoration in her voice. My eyes widened. Did she know about the song? Is she the ghost? Nah…if Bella is the ghost, then I would have smelled her right??? I shrugged then grabbed her guitar.

We sat on the bed and she wrapped her arms around me comfortably. I smiled down at her and kissed her head. I was about to start when the questions of insecurity flooded my mind. What if she doesn’t like it? What if she started to laugh? Or even get angry? Will she like it? Bella noticed my hesitation and put an encouraging hand on my knee.

I smiled down at her and took an unnecessary breath. I glanced down at the guitar and start strumming it. then I thought of the lyrics I put in.

“We were as one babe
For a moment in time
And it seemed everlasting
That you would always be mine


I smiled knowingly and looked at Bella. Her face was a complete blank. I stated to panic but she nodded in encouragement.

Now you want to be free
So I'm letting you fly
Cause I know in my heart babe
Our love will never die
No!


Bella’s hug became tighter as she listened to me silently.

You'll always be a part of me
I'm a part of you indefinitely
Girl don't you know you can't escape me
Ooh darling cause you'll always be my baby
and we'll linger on
Time can't erase a feeling this strong


I pointed my finger on my heart and looked at Bella lovingly. She smiled a little then her face became blank again.

No way you're never gonna shake me
Ooh darling cause you'll always be my baby

I ain't gonna cry no
And I won't beg you to stay
If you're determined to leave girl


I thought back at the time when Bella left, the broken feeling I had came back but as soon as the next lines came flooding, I smiled adoringly to this lovely girl in front of me.

I will not stand in your way
But inevitably you'll be back again
Cause ya know in your heart babe
Our love will never end no


I looked into Bella’s eyes and found the love and over whelming passion she have for me. I sighed in relief as she cuddled closer to me.

You'll always be a part of me
I'm part of you indefinitely
Girl don't you know you can't escape me
Ooh darling cause you'll always be my baby
And we'll linger on
Time can't erase a feeling this strong
No way you're never gonna shake me
Ooh darling cause you'll always be my baby


I strummed the last few notes and sang the last lines to my beautiful girlfriend, who was now attacking me with kisses and squeals.

“Oh Edward! I love it!!!! I’ll set this as my ring tone!! And I’ll put it in a CD…” Bella’s voice faded as she think of the things she will do to my song.

I hugged her tightly and kissed the nape of her neck. “As long as you love it, it will be fine by me on whatever you do with it.” I said, breaking her from her thoughts.

“Edward, I love you” was her last words before we wrap ourselves with kisses for the rest of the evening.


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people been busy lately so i think it'll be hard for me to post the next chapter sooner or later but i'll take evry chance i got to write and post for more..thank you!! Comment!!!!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
ha ha ha ha at least the pranks are done but I wonder about the ghost?????
good chapter
( heh heh 1st to comment)
awww(2nd)

It was actually great

Yeah im gonna be busy too (its our exam week and its gonna be rough)

and o yeah ( I wonder whos the ghost?)FREAKY....
i hope this week get better 4 u! i hope u write more soon!
thanks~!
yeah, when i was writing the part about the ghost, i was a bit freaked out myself.
you'll find about the ghost on the next chappy...it's on bella pov

oh and congrats on being the first to comment!! hehe
oooooooooh, awesome again!!
Awww! So cute i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the ghost like creepy!!!
awww,great chapter,but I wonder about the ghost?://

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