The Twilight Saga

bella is a talented vampire that knows how to sing, dance and have fun. she is known as the popular perfect rich girl in a little town called forks. she is accompanied by her family called the stewarts. one day during her dance recitals, the cullens moved to forks. will she found love other than her passion? is her love strong enough to conquer her it?

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Chapter 1 Dance recital

“Hurry drew!! I’m going to be late!!” I ran in human speed across the lawn towards the gym. Ugh! I hate running so slow. It makes me even more nervous. Today is my dance recital. Well this isn’t actually my first but every time I have a dance recital, I always get so nervous. I breathe in and out. I reminded myself. It’s not like I needed air, but it’s the only method I know that calm me.
“Relax Bella. Don’t worry everybody will love you.” drew said this as he me pulled to the backstage.

Drew is my brother. He have average built, pale just like every vamp I know. And he has a blonde shaggy hair. Drew is not my brother by blood but I treat him like one. “Hey drew, what time mom and the others are coming?” I asked nervously.

“Um... I don’t know maybe, before the show starts. Duh?!!” humph! He said as he raises one of his eyebrows. I just rolled my eyes at him. He is sometimes annoying.

After I got ready, the emcee started to introduce us. If I my heart is still beating, I swear it’s going to burst right out of my chest. After fidgeting for 20 minutes, my name was called. I went into the stage and started my ballet/hip hop dance. Drew was the one who thought of that idea.

The music was able to relax my body. I really love this song, Single Ladies by Beyonce’. Drew put a touch of his orchestra skills on the music by remixing my cd with some of his compositions. The crowd applauded when I was over. I’m kinda used to it though, the standing ovations, bouquets flying everywhere. I just want to have fun.

I saw my family sitting at the back row. Zon waved at me while the others just smile. I smile at them in return. I went directly to my dressing room to change. My teachers congratulated me, unexpectedly, Gail, my other brother came in with a bouquet of red roses.

“Congratulations lil sis. Your dance was awesome!! The people watched you with their mouths open. It was so hilarious.” His booming laugh surrounded my room.
I smack him in his head. “Stop it!” Gail is an annoying yet funny type of brother. He’s always there to make fun of me. Well every brother is. There was a silent knock.
“Oh mom!!”I run towards zon to catch her adoring hug.

Zon is the leader of our coven. We kinda treat her as our mom. She’s always there whenever you needed support and advice. She was the one who created us. She works as a doctor. I really admired her because of her self control and her passion to help others that needed her. “Bella you were great!!” she hugged me even tighter.
“Congrats Bella!!” Gleb and Quinn both came in.
“Well thanks guys. Where’s drew??” everyone looked at zon. “Guys?”
Zon was first to speak “there are other vampires that watched your show so drew was the one who entertained them.” she looked at me assuringly.
“Well then come on let’s meet them.” They all nodded.
Zon was explaining about the vampires on the way home.

“I don’t know anything about them yet, but drew was the one who meet up with them. They will be visiting us, so guys please behave, okay?” Gail, gleb and I just laugh at her.
Zon and Quinn looked at the three of us murderously.
“Don’t worry zon, I will make sure that there will be nothing to worry about.” Quinn reassured zon.

Gail snorted. “Yah like that’s gonna happen.”

“I mean it.” Zon said in her motherly tone.

“Yes, mom.” We all said.
When we came to house we saw a Volvo parked in front.
We went out all at the same time, all have wondering faces.

I heard drew’s voice “there home. Just wait till you see Bella.” I was surprised. I didn’t know that I will be a topic. I looked at zon curiously.

“They really wanted to meet you because they were amazed by your dance.” She smiled at me.
All I can say was “oh okay”
Drew opened the door for us.

Chapter 2 a new dimension

“Hey” drew greeted me.
I hugged him. “So how was the recital?”
I looked at him confused. “Didn’t you watch the show?”
He looked at me apologetically. “Sorry I didn’t, I have things to do.” He motioned his head towards our guest. “I see.”

There are five vampires sitting in the couch. They smiled at me, I just smiled back.
“Well hello, welcome to forks.” Zon said.
“Thank you.” The bronzed haired guy said.
“May I introduce you to my family, I am marizon by the way, but you can call me zon. This is Quinn, Gleb, Gail, and Bella.” Pointing at each one of us. “And I think you’ve all met drew.” They all nodded.
We all said hi to them. The bronze haired guy spoke again.
“It’s nice to meet you all. I am Edward. This is my sister Alice” pointing to a pixie like girl with deep black, cropped short hair pointing in all directions.
“Hi” Alice said. Then she hugged me, I hugged her back. “We are going to be great friends.” she said. I just smiled at her. She went back beside Edward.

“This is Rosalie, Emmett, and jasper” Edward continued.

Rosalie has golden blonde hair. She looked like a goddess, with her beautiful figure and a very confident face. She smiled at me. Emmett was big muscled guy with brown hair. He looked like Gail, just bigger. Jasper has honey blonde hair, tall and slender but till muscular.
“Hey Bella congrats by the way, I love your dance! Can you please teach me how to do it?!!”Alice said.
“Yeah sure” as Alice and me make our own conversation, the others did too. Emmett, jasper, drew, and Gail talked about sports and other guy stuff while Rosalie, Quinn and gleb went to hunt. And Edward and zon talked about the other two members of their coven that will visit us. Sometimes I caught Edward glancing at me.

I just smiled at him, don’t want to embarrass our guests. Well actually I want to. He’s expression was the funniest thing I’ve seen. I hope he doesn’t have someone else yet. Holy crap! What am I thinking? I just met the guy. I can’t just walk up to him, and tell him I love him. Oh wait. Did I say I love him? No way! Erase, erase, erase!

I shook my head. Alice keeps on babbling about shopping trips and some family facts about them.

What I learned so far, they are also vegetarians. They also have unique powers like us. Edward is a mind reader; Alice can see the future and jasper can control the emotions.

Suddenly Alice asks me a question. “Bella I was wondering, how come Edward couldn’t hear your family’s thoughts when we went to your recital?”

“Actually, that’s because of my power. I am a shield.” I told her glumly.

“Are you the only one who has a power in your family?” curiosity burning in her eyes.

“Actually Zon can heal any sick people while Quinn makes the time stop and Gail controls the weather.” She looked amazed.
“Really? She can heal people?? She should meet Carlisle, but he’s working at the hospital right now.”


“Yeah he is our father and the leader of our coven. Oh and esme, she is Carlisle’s wife. She stays home while the five of us goes to school.”

Wow. Big family.

“Well that’s good, because zon is also a doctor. And since Quinn and gleb have work,
you and your siblings can...” Alice cut me off.
“Hangout together!” how did she?...oh yeah psychic

She’s very happy about the idea of us girls shopping together in Port Angeles. I really hate shopping, Quinn always drag me to different stores and always dress me up like a freaking Barbie doll. Ugh! So much for being a vampire, when you can’t have freedom. I’m really frustrated from all the nerve wrecking events this day.

When Carlisle and esme came to visit, we introduced ourselves again. As they make their way up to whole new conversations, I excused myself to the dance room to have a little relaxation. When I dance, it relaxes my mind. It’s very peaceful. Just me and the dance floor. When the song changed to my immortal by evanescence, there was a silent knock.

It was Edward.

I was shocked. I didn’t know what to say. What does he want?


I couldn’t say anything so I just nodded. He smiled at me. I crooked smile that took my breath away, if that was possible.

“Don’t worry I’m just going to watch. Your dancing amazes me.”

What? Is that for real? I amazed him. “Thanks”

I continued my dancing. Twisting and twirling around. The soul of music and the message of the song took me to another dimension. I went back to reality when someone clapped their hands. I was surprised Edward was still here. Usually when I danced like that, my family went out of this room. Maybe because they knew that I’m not with them at the moment. He walks across the room in human pace towards me. I just stood there confused at the same time shocked.

“That was the loveliest dance I have ever seen in my existence.”

What??!! I don’t know what to say. No one has ever said those things to me. I just stood there, still shocked with my mouth open.

He chuckled, and then put his hand under my chin to slowly close my mouth. I must look like an idiot! I can’t believe it. I lower my head to hide the embarrassment. I didn’t realize that his hand is still holding my chin. I took a glance at him. I was locked in his gaze. His beautiful golden eyes are dazzling. Its like filled with thousand diamonds and stars.
He smiled at me thoughtfully.
“When you were dancing, it’s like you’re in another dimension. And I didn’t know how but I think I was sucked in the black hole you were creating. Like a force, that wants me to be with you.” Those words that he let out, makes me want to hug him and kiss his mesmerizing lips.

I was happy.

Suddenly his smile turned into a frown. Maybe because of my face, I checked my mouth if it was still open. Whew! It’s a good thing it’s not; I would really look like a total idiot if I did. I rearrange my features. Then said

“Thank you, I don’t know what to say actually. No one has ever said that to me in my existence.” I smiled at him brightly.

His face lit up, and then became irritated. I suddenly heard voices.

“Nice one Bella!! Way the go to ruin the moment by looking like an idiot!” drew exclaimed.
Gleb and Gail started to whistle while jasper and Emmett was rolling on the floor laughing. What’s so funny?

That made me furious. I controlled my anger as much as possible. I didn’t want to make a scene. Edward frowned beside me.

Then gleb shouted “hey Bella! Look what I got!”

Gleb was waving a picture of me in a shocked expression with my mouth hanging open.

That’s it!!! I launched at them.


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links to the pages:
chapter 3 rumors & chapter 4 the big scene
chapter 5 clarifications
chapter 6 dance practices
chapter 7 the race
chapter 8 jealousy
chapter 9 Baltimore
chapter 10 the streets part 1
part 2
part 3
chapter 11 my past
chapter 12 the visit 
chapter 13 the ball
chapter 14 the news
chapter 15 the surprise
chapter 16 my sweet revenge
chapter 17 the dance
chapter 18 revenge, bloodshed and coming back 
chapter 19 love at first smell?
chapter 20 karaoke night!! part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
chapter 21 cleansing
chapter 22 weirdest flight ever!!!
chapter 23 the cullen isle part 1
part 2
part 3
Chapter 24 crazy fashions, crazy vampires
chapter 25 Forkwarts?
chapter 26 a destined fairytale
chapter 27 it's all good!!
chapter 28 jealous? omg, yes! 
Chapter 30 the man who made it all happen
Chapter 31 The comeback of family crazy time 
chapter 34 our fisrt and last big concert
Chapter 35 This is it!

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Chapter 9 Baltimore

As we work our way around the cities of Baltimore, Gail was responsible for the cloudy skies. Over the past years, my family and I didn’t have a problem about the weather. If we want to go to Florida, just leave it to the “weather man”. We call Gail weather man because of his oh so weather changing abilities. I remember the time when we used to live here, Gail was so pissed because drew made a scratch at his car so drew was not able to go to school for a week because there’s a rain cloud above his head. Me and gleb laughed at him all week but when Quinn and zon came from their shopping week the house was soaking wet. I chuckled at the memory. Oh how I miss this place! It’s full of memories I want to relive. Tonight will be the best night ever!!! I looked at drew, he looked excited as well. While we make our way to the hotel, Quinn got us a separate room because of the fact that Edward won’t leave my side and I don’t want to leave Edward’s side. While Edward and I are lounging at our huge bed, Quinn and Alice busted in our door.

“You!” pointing at me. “Your coming with me whether you like it or not!” Quinn commanded. I groaned.
“What! No way! I won’t leave Edward.” When I looked to Edward, I saw him by the door being dragged by Alice. My eyes widened. Alice is so little yet very scary. I heard them shouting in the other room.

“Alice! What are you doing?! Have you lost your mind?”

“Edward! This is also for Bella so just behave okay? We’re just going to shop clothes for the activities for tonight.”

“You knew?” he said with disbelief.

“Of course! Why do you think Bella’s protecting my mind?”

“Fine!” he said sounded defeated.

I looked at Quinn who has a smug smile. Fine! Why do we even need to shop for clothes? I already packed the clothes needed for tonight. Why shop? I looked at her suspiciously.

“Oh stop it Bella, we’re going to shop clothes for the ball this Sunday”

“What ball?” I asked innocently.

“Duh?! Alice saw that we’re going to a ball this Sunday, so I figured you, Gail and I should shop for gowns and some tux for the boys.” I rolled my eyes at her.

“Fine, but why Gail? Can we just grab drew instead? He will just make fun of me the whole trip.” I complained.

“Bella, Gail volunteered. And to my surprise, he didn’t complain about our plans.”

I was shocked. Gail never, I mean never in our whole existence volunteered to a shopping trip with Quinn unless it involves camping. I took a deep breath.

“Okay! Let’s go shop!” I said with enough enthusiasm to make Quinn happy.

Edward’s POV

Alice kept tugging my family to various stores. I don’t even know why she’s buying us jackets and rubber shoes. It’s like the clothes some teenagers wear in some gangster show I once watched in MTV. We kept asking her why is she buying this but she just smile then said “it’ll be awesome!” I keep on putting the puzzles together but it just doesn’t make any sense. As the five of us make our way to the next store to buy tuxes, I smell Bella’s scent surrounding the whole store. It’s like heaven. It was only an hour ago. Quinn must have dragged her in this store, but why?? It seems were going to some dance tonight but I still don’t get the hoodies and rubber shoes. I feel so frustrated. I can’t read Alice’s mind because of my Bella’s shield. Ah…Bella. The love of my whole existence. My wonderful, perfect Bella. I must be the luckiest man in the world to be with her, to caress those luscious lips of hers with mine. My daydreaming was interrupted by jasper.

“Er, Edward can you control it a bit” he said.

“Sorry jazz” I smiled at him apologetically

He rolled his eyes at me. Then Emmett came to my side putting his arm around my shoulder.

“Hey, my little brother is man!! He is already thinking like one right now!! Way the go!!” he ruffled my hair. His booming laugh surrounded the whole store. The sales lady is looking widely at the five of us. Rosalie and Alice looked at us like we’re something to eat.

“Way the go, egg heads, you scared the sales lady!” Rosalie whispered menacingly at us.

“Come on guys! I already got your tuxes.” Alice intruded. I smiled at the sales lady brightly. We walked out of the store.

“Okay, you guys can have your fun while me and Rosalie buy our gowns. And you better not do anything stupid!!” we rolled our eyes at her. We walked in the opposite direction.

Emmett started teasing me after we walked a mile from the store.

“So Edward, did you guys did it? You know? Did you already got to the second base?” I looked at him bewildered. Bella and mine’s relationship is only a day old and he started to talk sex with me??

“Are you crazy? Of course we haven’t done it” I smacked him in the head. Jasper was laughing uncontrollably. On our way to the hotel, we passed a few girls who are looking at us. I heard one of the girl’s thoughts “wow! Hottie alert! That guy with bronze hair is yummy!! Maybe he’s new here. I should go talk to them.”

Jasper and Emmett noticed the girl waving at us. They waved back.

“Hi, I’m Tasha are you guys new here? Maybe me and my girls can show you around.” Before she can grab my arm, all three of us backed away just enough for them not to notice. I smiled at them.

“No thank you, we can handle our own” I flashed them another smile. They looked like they’re going to faint. Out of no where Bella, Alice and Rosalie came at our sides. Alice kissed jasper’s cheek while Rosalie kissed Emmett on the lips. The two girls behind Tasha looked pissed. Thier thoughts screaming at alice and rosalie.

“Wait! Who are they? Ugh!! Did she just kiss him?!!”

"Who's the freak?"

Bella wrapped her arms around my waist. I put my arm around her shoulder. Bella smiled at the girls. “Hi my name is Bella. And you are?”

Tasha composed herself. “Hmm… Bella whys does that name sounds familiar?” “I’m Tasha, I was just asking if maybe you guys would need a tour here in charms city.” She said uninterested.

“Oh no thank you.” She paused to look at her tattoo in her wrist. “Nice tattoo” Bella complemented. Tasha looked at her blushing. “Thank you; it’s actually from an exclusive society here which none of you can join.”

Bella looked at her thoughtfully. “Oh so you’re a new comer at the society huh?”

The girl’s eyes widened. “How did she know? She doesn’t even live here”
“Um yeah actually I am” Tasha said ashamed

“I have a pendant just like that.” Bella showed Tasha her necklace. The girl’s eyes were shocked. “How? Where did she get that? Only the seniors have that kind of necklace.”

“Where did you ge~” before Tasha could finish her question Bella cut her off. “We better go, bye. It was nice meeting you.” She smiled kindly at her then pulled me to the hotel’s entrance. I got a lot of questions in my head. Why does Bella have a necklace just like the girl’s tattoo? Did Bella and her family live here before they moved to forks? Is Bella part of that society? Bella looked at me smiling.

“Don’t worry Edward. There’s nothing to worry about. You should go change, it’s time to party!” she said happily.

As Bella headed for Alice’s room, I went to Emmett’s room to change. I heard his thought’s before I was in the room. “Is that little pixie crazy? I thought were going to a ball?”

I entered the room; Emmett was wearing what Alice bought us earlier. (emmett's outfit: ones like the rappers wore in music videos. I sighed. I think the best option to know Bella’s surprise is to just follow what Alice wants us to do.

“Just wear it Emmett, I’m sure she knows what she’s doing”

“Fine, but if were going to the ball wearing like this, I’m out”

I changed my clothes to the out fit Alice gave me. I am wearing a blue hoodie, denim pants and sneakers. (edward's outfit: are definitely not going at the ball. When I turned around all of the boys are dressed like me except for Carlisle. He decided to stay behind together with esme and zon to plan their antique shopping for tomorrow. So any way, the guys are looking at the full length mirror to look at them selves goofing around.
(jasper's outfit:
(gail's oufit:
(gleb's outfit:
(drew's outfit:

All of a sudden, Alice came barging inside the room together with Rosalie, Quinn and Bella.

“Okay guys, it’s time to party!!!” Alice yelled over the commotion.
(bella's outfit:
(quinn's outfit:
(alice's oufit:
(rosalie's outfit:
Drew came to Bella’s side; I noticed that he is wearing the same necklace that Bella have. Is he part of the society too? Maybe not. Maybe it’s just a friendship necklace that they both bought for each other. We went down stairs to see that Bella’s Infiniti, drew’s Giugiaro and gleb’s Lamborghini are parking in front of the hotel. We looked at them in confused faces but Alice just smiled. Alice, jasper and I rode with Bella while Rosalie and Emmett rode with drew and Quinn and Gail rode with gleb. We worked our way to an old building, it sounds quiet for human ears but for us we can hear the loud music coming from the building. Jasper and I looked at each other.
“Bro, is this a club?” jasper asked confusingly.

I just shook my head. I didn’t know where we are. Bella parked the car beside a silver Porsche. It was not surprise to see that a lot of high standard cars are parked in that area where it says “VIP”. We went out of the car, we all looked at Bella, drew, Alice and Quinn. They all smiled grimly at the five of us who still doesn’t have any clue where we are. Bella and drew lead our way to a small entry where to big guys that is bigger than Emmett, guards the door. I heard Emmett’s thoughts “I bet I can take them both down.”

Bella and drew showed their necklaces to the body guards. I noticed that the body guards also have the same tattoo like Bella’s pendant. Maybe this is the society the girl, Tasha is talking about. She also mentioned something about seniors. The two body guard nodded then opened the door. There are three elevators that welcomed us. We all entered the elevator. Bella was the one to break the silence.

“Okay, so by now each and every one of you are curious why we are here. First of all this is an exclusive dance club. Drew and I used to sneak up at night when we used to live here, just to dance at this club. Due to our dancing, we became royalty or seniors. We learned that it is a society called “the streets” We became members for about 3 to 4 years. Ever since we moved to forks last year, we didn’t have any contact up until now. The girl Tasha is only a freshman, because of the tattoo she had on her wrist. It will be erased if the king or as we say the DJ decides to move her rank. The highest ranks are the seniors, there are only 5 seniors. Me, drew, Ryan, letty and drake, which you guys will meet afterwards. When we first danced at this club, we joined crews. A crew is a group of dancers that competes with other crews. They do various routines and break dances their way to beat the ultimate crew.” Whoa?! This her surprise? To tell us that drew and her are part of this society? I bet there is something more she’s not telling us. I was shocked at the thoughts that I heard. It came from Bella. “Don’t worry Edward I’ll tell the rest of the story.” She looked at me reassuringly. She must have noticed my worried expression.

“Edward, are you okay? You look pale.” Emmett asked sarcastically.

“Of course I am! I just heard Bella’s thoughts that’s all.” I said proudly yet irritated by Emmett. All of them looked at me with disbelief except for Alice.

“Hey guys! Let’s not worry about that okay? I’ll tell you when we get home, but right now it’s time to party!” Bella shouted at us because of the loud music and I can see she is very excited in meeting some of her old friends. Alice and Bella jumped up and down with the music getting louder. And at the same moment the elevator opened and welcomed us with wild people dancing in loud hip hop music.
hey guys! i hope you like it, pls comment me about the outfits of the characters. i'm so sorry to say this but i'm going on a 3 day vacay with my family so i won't be able to post the next chapter until sunday or monday. i promise that your patience will be paid with a really good chapter. the next chapter is about bella's cool dancing moves. thanks again!!


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