When Love Hurts "PG For Now"

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Permalink Reply by Moniqua Reid on August 13, 2009 at 6:11am

Chapter Four
Part Two
Bellas Point Of View

I decided to start organising my birthday party, i was allowed ten people and boys were allowed. my Aunty Leah was single she was in her late thirties and had never married and never had kids either, she worked at a lawyers firm but she wasnt strick she was cool. But i missed my family and ill miss everyone here, and i know Emm will make fun of my english accent but he would get over it. He was getting old nearly 16, i had missed out on so much it would be good to get back to my rainy hometown, Forks.
For my party i was going to have my boyfriend my best friend Emily and her boy friend then the rest of our group, Ben, Angela, Jessica, Lauren, Eric, Seth, and that was ten including me. I decided that we would have a movie night i was going to get out Twilight and Shes The Man, i knew the boys wouldnt be stoked about the choices but i was sure they would get over it.

"Bellz you home?" Leah called out
"Yip Im upstairs"

My aunty walked up the stairs and came into my room.

"Whats up?" i asked
"Do you think youll be okay back in forks?"
"What do you mean?"
"All your friends are here and Sam and your school, i just mean do you want to go back? Do you think you would fit in?"

I hadnt thought about that, i actually had no idea i just knew any where i went i would end up missing
someone.

"I dont know but i think i should atleast try...I could come back if it didnt work out"
"Yes you can dont forget im always here with open arms i just care for you girl i just dont want you to be upset, because i know youll be leaving alot behind, its hard to start again during your teenage years"
" I know you do i just need to go back though"
"Okay then" and she gave me a hug

Edwards Point Of View

"Do you Edward Cullen take Alice To be your wife?"

These would be the words that would tie me to Alice, i should be happier.

"I do"
"Edward you may now kiss your bride"

So i did , Alice looked beautiful in her plain yet elegant white wedding dress, she wore long hair extensions and had her hair curled down her back. She was ecstatic, i could hear her thoughts and i was happy i could do this for her. We walked down the aisle and was surrounded by our friends and family.

Permalink Reply by lani johnson on August 13, 2009 at 12:05pm

i love it! keep me updated!
xoxo lani

Permalink Reply by Moniqua Reid on August 17, 2009 at 5:09am

sorry this is actually part two of chapter two :(

Permalink Reply by Ziesha on August 16, 2009 at 4:50am

LOve it Bella's crazy way crazy

Permalink Reply by Moniqua Reid on August 16, 2009 at 5:06am

lol yip it gets worse....dont worry lol

Permalink Reply by ♥Isabella Kay♥ on August 16, 2009 at 11:56am

Wow! more soon!

Permalink Reply by lani johnson on August 16, 2009 at 12:31pm

wow! hurry and write more!

Permalink Reply by Moniqua Reid on August 17, 2009 at 12:27am

Chapter 4


Bellas point Of View

Even though i didnt have to go to school anymore i felt like it. Mike said hed take me even though i said id walk. Once we got back to mikes i went up the room he said was mine. It was cool, it had a big double bed a flat screen tv and a closet in the corner. It wasnt as big as my old room but i liked it still.

"You like it?" Mike asked
"Its great mike thanks"
"Your welcome want some help unpacking?"
"Nah im good"
"Okay ill be in my room you know where to find me" He winked and walked away

I had fun in my life these days but i knew what i did was over the top to much. I missed London but for some reason i didnt want to go back. I didnt these days it just made me more upset.Drinking and sleeping around was my way to have fun, Girls hated me for it and guys loved me for it. Mike was like my best friend i was considering going out with him but i knew i would just hurt him next time drinking. But then again maybe some boundaries would be good for me, i will then, i will go out with mike. After unpacking i walked over the hall to Mikes room he was laying on his bed with his eyes shut. I decided it was perfect way for me to show him, so i jumped on next to him and started kissing him passionately then i just layed beside him.

"What was that for?" he asked
"Well i was thinking.."
"Yes?"
"Well i was thinking that i did want to go out with you"
"Really?" he asked excitedly
"Yip i mean if you wanted to"
"Of corse i do!" and he kissed me for god knows how long

The next day he drove me to school after a long night i was almost to tired to go but i decided to any ways. Once we got there i kissed mike goodbye and started walking to first period english, when i bumped into Emmett.

"Bella! What is going on!"
"What do you mean?"
"You moved out and now your going out with Mike?"
"Yeah and yeah so what?"
"Do you know how worried mum and dad are could you please just come home?"
"Why? So they can yell at me more? No that isnt happening i happen to be very happy at mikes i had the longest night of my life last night and..."
"Bellz stop i dont want to know look just ring them atleast im leaving to uni soon and theyll only have you"
"Well they screwed that up didnt they, they can ring me.." i pulled out my cell "On this you know cell phones?"
"Ill tell them then just take care okay"
"yeah yeah Em Bear"
and i heard his friends laugh
"I told you not to call me that round my mates..."
"Bye Bye emmm bear ive got class" i blew him a kiss i walked to english.

Once i got there we had a new student his name was Edward Cullen. He was far more then hot. Damn why did i have to go out with Mike, i decided a bit of flirting wouldnt hurt so i went and sat next to him.

"Hey im Bella" and i held out my hand
"Nice to meet you Im Edward" and he shook my hand it was warm
"So whats ya story Edward"
"Me and my family moved here last week because my dads a doctor and he decided he wanted to work in a small town for once you?"
"Um well lets see yesterday i moved out of my parents house because they got mad with my drinking and sleeping around so i moved into my now boyfriends parents house" i smiled at him
"Thats quite a story"
"Yeah i know but i try to get over it"
"Do you like this school?"
"Its okay i suppose hey you should come to a party this weekend ill introduce you to some people"
"I dont know if thats a very good idea?"
"Sure it is"

I gave him the address for tylers house since thats where it was this weekend, and he said he would come. I was stoked. Edward was great he was charming, hot and very interested in my life. Whatever he asked i told him his green eyes were over whelmingly beautiful.

When the bell rang i got up and i showed edward to our next class. We both had PE which wasnt good. Today we were playing volley ball and i sucked at it. This term alone i had already hit four people in the head and we were only two weeks into the term.

Edward would look at me every couple on minutes and i liked it. I wanted to break up with Mike right now but then i would be homeless well no i wouldnt be but Mike would be upset and that would make things very awquard.

Once we got there i went i got changed i thought it would be a good idea to touch up my make up so i got my mascara and eye liner out. When that was done i walked into the school gym, to find Mike sitting on the side seats. damn he must have free period, i didnt want him to watch me make a fool out of myself and i espicially didnt want edward to.
I walked onto court and got into position, it was my turn to serve so i did and it hit someone in the head.

"Sorry!" i yelled

I hated sports i really did. But never the least i tryed i ran for the ball so i could hit it when i tripped over.

"Bella? Bella?" i could here mike saying
"Yeah?" i replied weakly
"Okay shes okay"
"What happened?"
"You hit your head pretty hard" Mike said
And at the same time i was lifted off the ground in familiar warm arms. Edward must have picked me up.

"Hey you put her down!" I heard Mike yelling
"She has to go see a doctor ill take her my dads one"
"Thats a good idea go ahead edward" My PE teacher said

And then Edward started walking away with me in his arms.

"Are you okay?" He asked worridly
"Im Fine" i stumbled weakly
"Sure you are"

I wanted edward to be mine in that second. It seemed like he loved me, mike did as well but mike was mike.
Once we got his car he put me in the passenger seat and he started driving.

"Can we not go to the hospital?" i asked
"Well where did you want to go?"
"Um we could go have lunch?"
"What about i take you to lunch after you go see my dad?"
"Yeah okay then" i frowned but atleast i would be able to spend more time with him.

When we got to the hospital, he opened the door for me and i realised i was still in my PE gear. Oh well i thought to my self.

"Bella this is my dad Carlisle"
"Hello carlisle"
"Hello Bella Edward said you hit your head pretty hard"
"Yeah but im fine now"
"Well lets take a look"

And he used a flash light to look at my eyes.

"Well i think you are fine bella"
"Told ya so"

And edward laughed. Well you can take her back to school now Carlisle said. But he said it kind of mad like a warning.

"Okay thanks dad"

Then we walked out and leaded me back to his car.

"What was that about?"
"Well i kind of have a...Girlfriend"
"Aw"

I shouldnt have ben so shocked of course he would have.

"Do you think i could just go back to Mikes house im really tired"
"Do you not want to go out for lunch?"
"I dont think your girlfriend would be that pleased"
"Well i dont think she would mind"
"Lets not test it ae i dont need anymore enemys"
"Okay"

So he started driving to Mikes. I wanted him, bad but how could i? Once we got there i decided to take a chance and i kissed him, he kissed back but i knew he was holding back.

"This is wrong" he said when we stopped
"But.."
"No this is wrong i cant do this im not that man"
"Im sorry"
"Dont be i have to go though bye"

so i hopped out of the car. I knew he wanted that as much as i did. And he drove away and i walked into Mikes house when i got a phone call.

"Babe are you okay?" Mike rushed
"yeah im fine but im at yours i wuld be even better if you were here"
He laughed "Ill be home in ten"
"Hurry"
he laughed and hanged up. If i couldnt have Edward i needed someone.


Ill write more later but just to clear something up if you forgot Edwards half human half vampire so thats why he could kiss back and why he was warm :)

Permalink Reply by lani johnson on August 17, 2009 at 1:03am

i love it!

Permalink Reply by Moniqua Reid on August 17, 2009 at 5:00am

thank you :) i didnt think it would be that good but i like it lol

Permalink Reply by Moniqua Reid on August 17, 2009 at 5:36am

Chapter 5
Edwards Point Of View

I couldnt believe i had meet this bella. I felt a pull to her she smelled so good but not in a food way, i knew i wanted her to be mine. Then i remembered Alice i couldnt do that to her, we had a good marrige we had been married for 3 years. But i needed to have Bella around me.
After english she was walking me to our next class PE, i was glad we had the same schedule it would give me time to get to know her more.
Today we were playing volly ball but i couldnt keep my eyes off her, i knew she wanted me to because i could read her mind. All of a sudden i heard her fall and i ran over but her boyfriend Mike pushed me out of the way.
"Its okay shes fine"
he had said but i knew better i picked her up while listening to Mike screaming at me through his mouth and mind. I didnt care i kept walking, the whole time listening to bella thinking. She thought she loved me. I laughed but i knew i felt the same way, but for some reason she was the most interesting thing in my life. I didnt think about alice or what my family would think i just thought about me and Bella.
I was crazy i just meet her two hours ago, i couldnt be thinking this. But when she asked me to the party i knew i would go anyways just to see her. Alice could see all this and she would be upset and i felt bad but although i felt love and attraction for alice it was more for bella, like she blinded me by her light. I wanted to help her. I wanted to change her drinking and sleeping around, if i couldnt have her i would atleast be her best friend, and friends helped friends right?
Once we got to my car i put her inside and i drove, the whole way listening to her thinking about kissing me, i knew i wanted her to but i couldnt no i wouldnt cheat on alice.
When we got there i opened her door for her i took her to Carlisle, bella said she wanted to go out for lunch and i was excited i had never really gone out for food since the rest of my family are full vampires. I couldnt wait i could hear her thinking about a little restauraunt just down the road.
Once we were finished and i knew she was fine i walked her back to my car and i opened the door for her once again.
Carlisle wasnt happy that i brought her in he thought i would cheat on alice and she was like a daughter to him, he knew me well. bella had asked what his glare was about and i had to tell i had a girlfriend but i knew that was an understatement we were married and had been for five years.
I knew that would ruin the day because then she said she wanted to go home, i knew she was dissapointed she was going to brake up with mike but then i saw what she was planning to do with mike since apparently i was taken. I took her home but before she got out she kissed me and i could do nothing else but kiss back i wanted this, i felt no urge to kill her i wanted to protect her i wanted to take her to be mine forever when i remembered alice would have seen all this and i pulled away

"I cant do this im not that man"
"But...."
"I cant"
"Im sorry" i didnt want her to be sorry
"No dont i just have to go"
"Bye" she said and got out and i drove off so fast while listening to her conversation with mike on her phone, i wanted to cry. I wanted Bella, but Alice was my wife and i loved her. Three hours ago i wouldnt have believed in love at first sight but i wasnt sure anymore i just wasnt i had to ring Alice i couldnt bear to face her. I pulled over and my phone was ringing, it was Alice, i awnsered

"Alice im so sorry"
"What do you call that!"
"I dont know im sorry i dont knopw what got into me"
"Edward i trusted you, i loved you! Your my husband! No!" and she was crying tearless sobs
"Alice i didnt want to hurt you im sorry im really am and..."
"No Edward i saw this coming a couple of weeks ago i didnt think you would though i thought your love for me was stronger but..."
"Alice i do love you i dont get ... i dont know im sorry"
"No edward dont im leaving im going to denali, if you want me back come get me if not well goodbye"
"Alice im sorry"
"yeah i know but thats not enough is it?"
"Goodbye Alice"
"And she hanged up"
I was to upset to go home so i decided to go to port angeles to go shopping i didnt know what yet, maybe i would go out for lunch, why not? I was a free man. '

I screwed up my life so completely in a matter of hours i just didnt get it anymore.

Permalink Reply by ♥Isabella Kay♥ on August 17, 2009 at 10:58am

OMG~ Nice! More soon!

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