The Twilight Saga

Without

What would it have been like if Bella and Edward hadnt met until the night Bella was bitten? What would like be like for them? What if Bella didnt know what she wanted? Would it work out with them?

 

 

WITHOUT

 

Chapter 1: Footsteps  (Bella POV)


   It’s September, it’s warm out tonight. The sun has already set and its now dark, nice night for a walk. I’d done this many times before, so there was nothing off about tonight usually walked at night to relax, let off steam and stress from the day.
   There weren’t many people out due to how late it was. I didn’t mind; it was peaceful.
   After a while, I noticed that there are footsteps behind me, to which I don’t pay any mind. The steps increased in pace, getting closer. Still, this doesn’t seem to be any threat to me.
   Soon the hooded figure walking behind calls out to me, “Hey!” Surely he can’t be talking to me? Who is he? “Excuse me?!” He calls out again, closer this time.
    I looked back and notice he has increased his pace, quickly closing the gap between the two of us.
   I begin to quicken my pace in order to, maybe, find somewhere to go? It’s late; I doubt anything is open right now.
   I look back again, he’s getting closer now.
 
 
 
 
I KNOW IT'S SHORT BUT, PLZ TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK?

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Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on March 31, 2010 at 1:29am


WITHOUT

Chapter 2: Attacker(Bella POV)

The footsteps get faster. He’s even closer, I can feel it. I can hear his breathing. What did he want with me? I didn’t do anything, I was just walking. I don’t even know who he is.
I turn quickly onto a main street, its empty; no cars and no people.
He calls out again, “Hey!” louder and with a hint of anger in his voice. He’s right behind me now.
My mind quickly flooded with memories from a self defense class I once took. How to incapacitate your attacker; Eye gouges, pressure points, and which way to hold your hand when trying to smash the attackers nose into his brain.
I locked my jaw and braced myself as I turned to face my attacker; no one. Only silence. The noise and footsteps have stopped. Where did he go?
That’s when two cold hands grab me. One hand is holding my shoulder down, and the other is holding my head, tilted to the side.
Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on March 31, 2010 at 1:40am


WITHOUT

Chapter 3: Bite(Bella POV)

The next thing I feel is a sharp, piercing pain shooting up my neck and down the right side of my body.
I can hear him growling in my ear and a suckling sound escaping his mouth.
I feel a warm liquid run down my collar bone and shoulder. Blood. That’s when I realize he’s bitten into my neck.
My breaching has begun to slow and I feel like someone has injected my veins with an icy sedative that enables my body to move even an inch.
Soon he lets go and I fall to the cold concrete. I manage to open my eyes and look up at the man who has left me to face my death. My vision is dim and blurry, but I can see him standing over me; he’s just watching, as if debating on whether or not to walk away?
Why would he do this to me and just walk away?
He leans down and a hiss escapes his lips. I tried to move but I was frozen in the spot I fell to. What’s he going to do?
He reached for me as if to grab my throat again but stops.


DONT WORRY GUYS; THE CHAPTERS FROM HERE ON OUT WONT BE NEARLY AS SHORT--THEY DO GET LONGER SO PLZ JUS STICK WITH ME. THANX SO MUCH FOR READING! PLZ LEAVE COMMENTS AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! THANX AGAIN! HOPE TO POST MORE SOON! ---CHERIE
Permalink Reply by Amanda H on March 31, 2010 at 2:37pm
Still good keep me posted
Permalink Reply by twilightcrazy13 on March 31, 2010 at 4:52pm
POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Permalink Reply by Jasmine Anderson on March 31, 2010 at 4:57pm
yay you reposted im so happy. plz continue to post your story i so cant wait XD
Permalink Reply by calipso cullent on December 30, 2011 at 5:00pm
I agree but cant wait to hear the rest its sooooooooo!!!!!!!!! goooooooood!!!!!!!!
Permalink Reply by MuslimEmoChick;) on September 7, 2010 at 9:44am
ok bella looks absolutely gorgeous with red eyes and this is so cool
Permalink Reply by sherry williams on October 6, 2010 at 4:05pm
omg
love it
Permalink Reply by sherry williams on October 6, 2010 at 4:03pm
omg
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Permalink Reply by Mrs. Bella Cullen on March 31, 2010 at 1:33am
Besides the chapters being short love it....ready for more....

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Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on March 31, 2010 at 1:42am
I know, my first three chapters were my shortest cause i wasnt sure whether or not i was gonna continue this. i have the next 7 chapters written up and they're not short at all. thanx for reading! plz come back for the rest!
Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on March 31, 2010 at 1:47am
i hope to have chapter four -savior & fire- posted tomorrow so plz come back and check it out!

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