The Twilight Saga

Without

What would it have been like if Bella and Edward hadnt met until the night Bella was bitten? What would like be like for them? What if Bella didnt know what she wanted? Would it work out with them?

 

 

WITHOUT

 

Chapter 1: Footsteps  (Bella POV)


   It’s September, it’s warm out tonight. The sun has already set and its now dark, nice night for a walk. I’d done this many times before, so there was nothing off about tonight usually walked at night to relax, let off steam and stress from the day.
   There weren’t many people out due to how late it was. I didn’t mind; it was peaceful.
   After a while, I noticed that there are footsteps behind me, to which I don’t pay any mind. The steps increased in pace, getting closer. Still, this doesn’t seem to be any threat to me.
   Soon the hooded figure walking behind calls out to me, “Hey!” Surely he can’t be talking to me? Who is he? “Excuse me?!” He calls out again, closer this time.
    I looked back and notice he has increased his pace, quickly closing the gap between the two of us.
   I begin to quicken my pace in order to, maybe, find somewhere to go? It’s late; I doubt anything is open right now.
   I look back again, he’s getting closer now.
 
 
 
 
I KNOW IT'S SHORT BUT, PLZ TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK?

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Permalink Reply by Jade on December 4, 2010 at 5:09pm
its awsome can you keep me updated
Permalink Reply by MuslimEmoChick;) on December 4, 2010 at 5:40pm
awwwwww omg he found her if only bella wasnt so stubern
Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on December 4, 2010 at 5:56pm
Hang in there Tahirah, it gets better I promise.
Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on December 4, 2010 at 5:57pm
Thank You Jade. I just sent you a friend request, that way I can keep you updated.
Permalink Reply by Karen Karakaya on December 4, 2010 at 6:17pm
I'm really enjoying your take on the B & E story. Can you pls keep me updated?
Permalink Reply by Amanda Sheckler on December 4, 2010 at 6:40pm
I love this story i am always on the edge of my seat while reading can't wait for the next update
Permalink Reply by Ashley Jordan on December 5, 2010 at 12:46pm
awesome!!!
Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on December 5, 2010 at 8:34pm
A/N: SO SORRY EVERYONE BUT THERE IS A MISTAKE I'VE MADE IN THIS CHAPTER. BELLA SAYS THAT SHE HAS KILLED ANOTHER THREE PEOPLE BUT IN FACT IT IS FOUR. SO SORRY FOR THE MESS UP. THANK YOU CHERYLL FOR CATCHING IT...AGAIN LOL. SO SORRY :)
Permalink Reply by Kristahra Collins on December 6, 2010 at 1:32pm
awe...poor bells edward understands....
Permalink Reply by sherry williams on December 6, 2010 at 10:32pm
omg
love love love it
Permalink Reply by sammii potter on December 12, 2010 at 1:29pm

NOOOO!!!!!!! need more !!!!!! ,lol this story is so addictive,can't wait for more,sooo sweet now that they found each other :D,post more soon pls Cherie :).

Permalink Reply by Waiting-For-The-Dream on December 4, 2010 at 6:30pm
OMG!!
more more more :)

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