The Twilight Saga

Without

What would it have been like if Bella and Edward hadnt met until the night Bella was bitten? What would like be like for them? What if Bella didnt know what she wanted? Would it work out with them?

 

 

WITHOUT

 

Chapter 1: Footsteps  (Bella POV)


   It’s September, it’s warm out tonight. The sun has already set and its now dark, nice night for a walk. I’d done this many times before, so there was nothing off about tonight usually walked at night to relax, let off steam and stress from the day.
   There weren’t many people out due to how late it was. I didn’t mind; it was peaceful.
   After a while, I noticed that there are footsteps behind me, to which I don’t pay any mind. The steps increased in pace, getting closer. Still, this doesn’t seem to be any threat to me.
   Soon the hooded figure walking behind calls out to me, “Hey!” Surely he can’t be talking to me? Who is he? “Excuse me?!” He calls out again, closer this time.
    I looked back and notice he has increased his pace, quickly closing the gap between the two of us.
   I begin to quicken my pace in order to, maybe, find somewhere to go? It’s late; I doubt anything is open right now.
   I look back again, he’s getting closer now.
 
 
 
 
I KNOW IT'S SHORT BUT, PLZ TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK?

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Permalink Reply by Gigi Cullen Rodriguez on May 10, 2011 at 11:55pm
Really good and your story is like a drug to me I read it over like once every week I'm completely addicted.
Permalink Reply by isabella nicole demaddis on May 12, 2011 at 7:27pm
i loved it ! it was amazing please updated me when your next chapter is k !
Permalink Reply by sahdia on May 20, 2011 at 10:23am
wow edward!!!!!!! awwwwwwww :'( mde me cry cz it soo sweet ov him..as usual,lol, ur an awsum wryta n i luv dis ff
Permalink Reply by Ashley Camero Black 666 on May 10, 2011 at 8:14pm
LOVE IT! And yay! First to reply! =D
Permalink Reply by Ivelisse on May 10, 2011 at 9:10pm
is nice read this one gives us a chance to see in his head
Permalink Reply by Melissa on May 10, 2011 at 10:38pm
You are awesome.  I loved it and can't wait for more....
Permalink Reply by Taylor Jordan Duffy on May 11, 2011 at 7:36pm
Yay...Love it
Permalink Reply by Takyra on May 12, 2011 at 6:25pm

omg eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppppppppppppppp i found the story.. breathing hard

 

Permalink Reply by Rachel on May 12, 2011 at 11:17pm
Awesome!!! New reader!! Please keep me updated!!!
Permalink Reply by Tikki Tarvin on May 14, 2011 at 8:38pm
love it!!!!!!!!!
Permalink Reply by Robyn Odei-Ntiri on May 14, 2011 at 9:51pm
Thank you for the update!!!......Edward finally got to Tell Bella how he felt and she got to tell him........can't wait for them to get back to the family......until you post again
Permalink Reply by Alyssa Cullen on May 18, 2011 at 6:45pm
when are you gonna update us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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