The Twilight Saga

This is my first fan fic so go easy on me, you know how people say this is
an all human story, well this is an all inhuman story! But Bella is not
really a vampire, so what is she? will Edward learn to leave with it
and the burden that she carries? Or will their different worlds set
them apart?







1. Meeting (EPOV)

I could feel the softness of the leaves as I stepped on them running at full speed, the leaves where a healthy green this time of the year and everything looked just like one big green blur to me. Of course, I never hit one tree nor accidentally stomp a creature, running was in my nature it was so easy and the sense of release it gave me had no comparison. It was the feeling of leaving everything behind; going at such a speed that nothing could catch up with me not even my past. To be honest, today I was running from my family. I was trying to give them the privacy they deserve at such intimate moments that I’ve never experienced and probably never would I thought wryly to myself. You have to me mated to know how they felt, that total love and devotion towards each other. I truly felt like an outsider in my family, a third wheel or in this case a seventh wheel, what mattered was that I could be spared. I knew how much they loved me, how much I would hurt them if I ever went away again but, what could I do? I was always ill-tempered and belligerent like the resentful old man that I should be by now. I could hear Carlisle and Esme always blaming themselves, in their heads it was their fault that I was alone and miserable but truly I was alone by choice. It was not a problem of nurturing, they shouldn’t be kicking themselves like that, it was agonizing to hear how they dwelled in pain over their first son. Many vampires had expressed interest in me over the years but I would always politely turn them down, they weren’t what I was looking for. I’ve seen it with Rose and Carlisle, when the one came along I’d know right away. It was just how it worked with us vampires; you fell in love head over heels just once and there is no turning back. That was how I knew the girls I turned down would be okay, because I was not the one for them and they were not the ones for me, neither one of them. I’m too good of a liar if I can convince myself that is the only reason I turned them down, it was true that I wanted neither of those girls but I can’t deny that for me I was a monster. I didn’t deserve to be happy after everything I’ve done, I was a low life creature who could never aspire to be love. Everyday the list was there, I may have come back to Carlisle and his way of life but I could never bring back all those people. Even if my victims were barely humans and resemble more to monsters, it was wrong playing god and I had deluded myself into thinking it was right. Emmet keeps telling me to stop beating myself up but I can’t, during those dark years I lost myself and gave completely in to the monster inside of me.

I was lost in my train of thought when I saw her, the wind was blowing her scent in the opposite direction and that’s why I hadn’t smelled her. I froze there standing completely still, a human girl was standing in the middle of my meadow. She stared at me with her head cocked to the side and her eyed reflected confusion like something about me was off. I was too staring at her, she had very pale skin for a human, her straight brown hair cascade down her back gracefully curling at the ends and her frame was slender. She was quite a sight but I couldn’t take my eyes of hers, those oddly deep brown eyes like pools of melted chocolate pierced through me with their bewilderedness. I was pinned to that place, I just stood there examining her face and I couldn’t make myself leave. I was suddenly anxious to know what she was thinking, did she saw me coming at an inhuman speed to the meadow? Why did she seem so confused? Was she afraid of me? What did she think of me? What was she thinking? That’s when it hit me, I hadn’t been interrupted by any thoughts when running or even now as I was staring at her, the only train of thought in my head was my own. I felt really vulnerable and frustrated for the first time in my vampire life. I never had to try to hear someone so I felt ridiculous as I penetrated her eyes extremely focus giving her an intense gaze of my own. I was pushing with all my mental strength an imaginary barrier over her head but nothing. I couldn’t hear even one word, not even the tenor of her thoughts, this was just exasperating. Who was this girl?

2. Eyes (EPOV)

The frustration was pouring through me, I was still looking but not really seeing the girl lost in my mind. Could vampires get sick? I felt fine, like I always do, so why can’t I hear her? This has never happened to me before. I heard her let out an angry sighed and forced myself to see her again. She too seemed really frustrated and I didn’t understand why, suddenly I found myself imagining what she was thinking. Every guess seemed worst and less likely than the one before. I took one unconscious step in her direction and her eyes narrowed in suspicion. I glanced at her, clearly she knew I was dangerous. One second was all it took to change everything, the wind blew her scent in my direction and I smelled her for the first time. My throat was burning hotter than the flames in hell, my whole body ached to attack her and my mouth was singing with the venom. I’ve never imagine such a scent existed, if I knew I would have search the entire planet for it. No! I was better now, I couldn’t do this to Carlisle, destroy everything he had work so hard on and let him down again, that was not an option! I knew he would understand, his patience was endless but the thought of my eyes turning crimson with her blood and adding another name to the list had me running away from her. I was the fastest in my family and suddenly I felt like I was about to break a personal record or something. I only stopped when I reached the mountains, there was a valley that I liked to go to when it was autumn as the meadow was dry and lifeless.

I sighed, everything is going to be alright, everything is going to be alright she’s not here; I chanted this over and over again to myself. I sat there and grasp the grass, don’t turn around and look for her, think of your family. This was so hard, I could still remember vividly her smell in my tongue. I didn’t dare to move, my body could betray me and run after her. I closed my eyes but all I could see was the girl staring at me with her bewildered eyes, there was a spark of recognition there hidden; but recognition of what? Wondering what she was thinking was pushing me to the edge, I wanted to run back to talk to her and figure out her mind. What was she thinking? The question was torturing me, my curiosity was inflamed. A nagging puzzle that I would never get the chance to put together. Ug! This was impossible, I could smell her and hear her heart pounding in front of me. I thought it was just my imagination, no human would be able to get here that fast! I opened my eyes and there she was, standing in front of me with here arms secured around her chest and her expression was still frustrated but resigned. I sat there hypnotize by her gaze, she walked with slow but determined movements in my direction. I cut the flow of oxygen to my lungs, I didn’t need it and I knew it would be unbearable for me to smell her and not sink my teeth in her. She kneeled before me, from the first second I saw her she has pierce into my eyes never looking away from them. The girl lifted her hand and stroked my cheek gently with her finger tips, her eyes never leaving mine, it felt like an electric current pulsed between us when she touched me. She exhaled heavily and her warm breath brushed my face almost caressing it while she dropped her hand.

“I give up”. She finally spoke, her voice was so beautiful, not in an inhuman way like a vampire but it was sweet, warm and soft. “Would you please tell me why your eyes are gold?” I was lost in the sound of her voice, it took me about five seconds to process what she was asking and another to realize she was waiting for me to speak.

“I don’t understand your question” I hated to say that aloud, how I wished I could understand what was going on behind those chocolate brown eyes.

“I was sent here for a coven of vampires but something is off. Your skin is pale, hard and cold; you’re breathtaking beautiful and run inhumanly fast. But your eyes… they are supposed to be either black or crimson. So would you explain to me why your eyes are golden?” She seemed even more frustrated to say it aloud. I couldn’t answer her I was in shocked. She knew.



Chapter 3- "Explanations"

Chapter 4- "Another World"

Chapter 5 and 6- "Confusion" and "Reunion" 

Chapter 7 and 8- "Family" and "Interrogation" 

Chapter 9- "Guest"

Chapter 10- "Interruptions"  

 Chapter 11- "Departure"

 Chapter 12- "New"
Chapter 13- "Understanding"
Chapter 14- "Selfishness"
Chapter 15- "Complications"
Chapter 16- "Appearence"
Chapter 17- "Past, present and future"
Chapter 18- "Worth"
Chapter 19- "Friendship"
Chapter 20- "Time's up"
Chapter 21- "Above"
Chapter 22- "Ghost"
Chapter 23- "Decisions"
Chapter 24- "Bleeding Heart"

Chapter 25- "Letters"

Chapter 26- "Wrecked"


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Hello again Lauren! hahaha, I know I hope so too! I'm pretty sure something is bound to come up, maybe a nice less freaky kitten would be a nice change. Something less mystic but who knows, maybe they want to keep it between sea creatures and choose a shark, now that would be fun! hahaha. I know next World Cup we're gonna totally kicked some ass! Funny thing, did you know that in Brasil there's actually a town called Buenos Aires (named after the capital of Argentina) where everyone was from Brasil but cheered for Argentina? That was so funny! hahaha, yeah I guess I kinda give it away too easy with my personality huh? Good to know I'm not alone here *wink* Curious thing, I have straight guy friends who actually truly enjoyed reading Twilight after I bugged them about it. They had to quote see what the hell had interest me so much. Yeah I've watched it, it was totally completely awesome, don't mean to offend any Team Jacob members here and sorry if you're one but the kiss in Eclipse between him and Bella has always bothered me. It's not that I don't like Jake, I totally adore him but I just think that he's not as good as Edward for Bella. Have you seen it? What was your favorite scene? Oh Ally and Jazz were so cute in this movie!

Love always

OMG I hope the wise ones get with the program & let Bella stay with Edward after that scene in the meadow!

Write more NOW!!!!!!!
Hi Rachel! hahaha it was a pretty intense scene, specially towards the end if you know what I mean *blush*. I want them together as much as you do believe me but my characters are very stubborn and won't bend to my will so I'll have to see what they have in store for me. Who knows maybe the wise ones will get on board? I'm writing, I'm writing. hahaha, I'll post more in a few days. Try to be a tad patient with be, XD

Love always

i really hope it doesnt take long for them to be together again
this is sooooooooooooooooo good write more i dnt wanna wait anymoire
Hi Kaylyn! Thank you thank you thank you! That's so good to hear and a real relief let me tell you, with such a drastic twist I didn't know how you were all gonna react and I'm now happy you seem to be taking it rather well. I'm writing more as we speak so I won't keep you waiting much longer.

Love always

Hi DeeDee! I'm keeping my fingers cross for that one, I'm as eager as you to have them back together. It's killing me to set them apart btu I knew that from what Bella is like that it was bound to happen this way. Only time will tell now... I'll write more soon!

Love always

Jose, I hate you... -.-
I come home from a little vacation around the country and expect to find an update from you... :)
I do, and I'm filled with hope that my thoughts were right... But noooo, you have to go all I-make-you-cry-what-to-do-about-it and I loved it!!! But Jose, I don't like to cry in my summerholiday!!! I didn't even cry when I sprained my ancle!!! :( And then you work your magic and make me weep like a baby!!! x]
Haha, you know I'm jokng about hating you... :P I love this story, and I definitely looooove your chapter!! SO sweet!!! :D
I didn't joke about the crying part though... my head is pounding, actually, because I cried a little (much)... you know the feeling, trying to stiffle the dang tears and they come anyway, and then your head hurts... (it might have to do with the fact that we drove 4 hours in 25 degrees C (I really don't get the F-scale... I just can't see the logic with the 72 degrees is what? warm?? Idk, I'm really confused about it... x]) - in a car, and I haven't had enough to drink today... Oh well... ;))

Sooo anyway, I really love your chapter, and I especially adored the part where he's asking her to marry him... Aww... :D
Well, I gotta find a napkin or something, gotta blow my nose...
Dang you Jose, it's all your fault for writing such a good story...
Me do not like you anymore... -.- ;)
I really can't lie... :(


Lou :D
Great Chapter!!!!..............Josefina I just love this story as you know.....thanks I'm speechless!!! .........I can't wait to see what happens...................maybe the powers that be will see how much they love one another and reconsider...........let Bella & Edward be together...............I can hope can't I.........................until you post again..........SMILE
Hi Robyn! Thank you so much! You don't know how much it means to me that you even like the story let alone love it, it's seriously music to my ears (I know so cliche right? I should have come up with something better). That's the best thing anyone could tell me, I love it when a writer leaves me speechless and I'm just getting used to the idea that I'm writing something that some people actually enjoy reading. I can hardly wait to see what happens myself. We'll have to wait and see what happens to our favorite couple, does love really conquer all? I guess we'll find out. I'll post more soon and it's time for Bella to have a say in all of this, don't you think? Her point of view is coming up next so that should be fun!

Love always

Hi Lou! Why have you changed your name? Don't tell me Taylore left you? Or did you leave him? OMG WHAT HAPPENED? hahaha, I guess this way is far less confusing for people who read my replies to your comments. Ouch! Lou that hurt like hell, I was gone so long and you find that a proper greeting? *shaking head* I'm a little hurt, hahaha. I'm sorry, I tried to talk Bella out of it but she wouldn't listen, that girl gave me a headache every time I tried to swing her in a different direction. Aww, I didn't mean to make you cry but I'm glad you love it, now I can rest soundly. I guess I could wait till your holiday ends until I update, I just leave it in your hands to explain to everyone why I don't update hahaha. You sprained you ankle!!! That really hurst, experienced klutz here talking. Oh gosh, I hope you're joking cause that'd be a shame, you're after all the first person I've become friends with here and one I held close to my heart. Awww, thanks thats so sweet for you to say. Ugh! I know what you mean, that's the worst part of crying afterwards the headache is unberable. Hahaha, I know I don't get it either our system is with C as well. Though I think we should all use K, we're bound to lear that scale anyway since it's the one scientist use and in chemistry you must use it. I have a soft for that part myself. *holding hands up in surrender* Ok, ok I get it, I'll write an awful chapter so you'll get off my back. Jesus! hahaha.

Love always

Haha Jose, I've kinda missed you.. :D
You know I'm joking Jose... Or you don't??! I thought you knew me better than that!!? x]
Haha, I'll always love your chapters no matter how hard they make me cry, and how much my head hurts afterwards..:P
Ugh, I hate chemistry... that's like my worst subject... (how does that explain a 10?? Idk what kind of grade you use, but I think it's like a B?! Idk... :P)
Anyway, I really hate chemistry.... ;)

Uuhh, you must hurry!!! ;D


Lou (=

Oh, an by the way, I guess I woke from a dream... I really good dream... Maybe Taylor just isn't "my Edward"... *GASP*!!! Did I really just say that?! O.O Haha, no, it was just so people wouldn't get confused when I write:


or ends a chapter with:
Hope you like it,

Lou... ;)

Haha... :D Now, you better hurry... :P


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