The Twilight Saga

This is my first fan fic so go easy on me, you know how people say this is
an all human story, well this is an all inhuman story! But Bella is not
really a vampire, so what is she? will Edward learn to leave with it
and the burden that she carries? Or will their different worlds set
them apart?







1. Meeting (EPOV)

I could feel the softness of the leaves as I stepped on them running at full speed, the leaves where a healthy green this time of the year and everything looked just like one big green blur to me. Of course, I never hit one tree nor accidentally stomp a creature, running was in my nature it was so easy and the sense of release it gave me had no comparison. It was the feeling of leaving everything behind; going at such a speed that nothing could catch up with me not even my past. To be honest, today I was running from my family. I was trying to give them the privacy they deserve at such intimate moments that I’ve never experienced and probably never would I thought wryly to myself. You have to me mated to know how they felt, that total love and devotion towards each other. I truly felt like an outsider in my family, a third wheel or in this case a seventh wheel, what mattered was that I could be spared. I knew how much they loved me, how much I would hurt them if I ever went away again but, what could I do? I was always ill-tempered and belligerent like the resentful old man that I should be by now. I could hear Carlisle and Esme always blaming themselves, in their heads it was their fault that I was alone and miserable but truly I was alone by choice. It was not a problem of nurturing, they shouldn’t be kicking themselves like that, it was agonizing to hear how they dwelled in pain over their first son. Many vampires had expressed interest in me over the years but I would always politely turn them down, they weren’t what I was looking for. I’ve seen it with Rose and Carlisle, when the one came along I’d know right away. It was just how it worked with us vampires; you fell in love head over heels just once and there is no turning back. That was how I knew the girls I turned down would be okay, because I was not the one for them and they were not the ones for me, neither one of them. I’m too good of a liar if I can convince myself that is the only reason I turned them down, it was true that I wanted neither of those girls but I can’t deny that for me I was a monster. I didn’t deserve to be happy after everything I’ve done, I was a low life creature who could never aspire to be love. Everyday the list was there, I may have come back to Carlisle and his way of life but I could never bring back all those people. Even if my victims were barely humans and resemble more to monsters, it was wrong playing god and I had deluded myself into thinking it was right. Emmet keeps telling me to stop beating myself up but I can’t, during those dark years I lost myself and gave completely in to the monster inside of me.

I was lost in my train of thought when I saw her, the wind was blowing her scent in the opposite direction and that’s why I hadn’t smelled her. I froze there standing completely still, a human girl was standing in the middle of my meadow. She stared at me with her head cocked to the side and her eyed reflected confusion like something about me was off. I was too staring at her, she had very pale skin for a human, her straight brown hair cascade down her back gracefully curling at the ends and her frame was slender. She was quite a sight but I couldn’t take my eyes of hers, those oddly deep brown eyes like pools of melted chocolate pierced through me with their bewilderedness. I was pinned to that place, I just stood there examining her face and I couldn’t make myself leave. I was suddenly anxious to know what she was thinking, did she saw me coming at an inhuman speed to the meadow? Why did she seem so confused? Was she afraid of me? What did she think of me? What was she thinking? That’s when it hit me, I hadn’t been interrupted by any thoughts when running or even now as I was staring at her, the only train of thought in my head was my own. I felt really vulnerable and frustrated for the first time in my vampire life. I never had to try to hear someone so I felt ridiculous as I penetrated her eyes extremely focus giving her an intense gaze of my own. I was pushing with all my mental strength an imaginary barrier over her head but nothing. I couldn’t hear even one word, not even the tenor of her thoughts, this was just exasperating. Who was this girl?

2. Eyes (EPOV)

The frustration was pouring through me, I was still looking but not really seeing the girl lost in my mind. Could vampires get sick? I felt fine, like I always do, so why can’t I hear her? This has never happened to me before. I heard her let out an angry sighed and forced myself to see her again. She too seemed really frustrated and I didn’t understand why, suddenly I found myself imagining what she was thinking. Every guess seemed worst and less likely than the one before. I took one unconscious step in her direction and her eyes narrowed in suspicion. I glanced at her, clearly she knew I was dangerous. One second was all it took to change everything, the wind blew her scent in my direction and I smelled her for the first time. My throat was burning hotter than the flames in hell, my whole body ached to attack her and my mouth was singing with the venom. I’ve never imagine such a scent existed, if I knew I would have search the entire planet for it. No! I was better now, I couldn’t do this to Carlisle, destroy everything he had work so hard on and let him down again, that was not an option! I knew he would understand, his patience was endless but the thought of my eyes turning crimson with her blood and adding another name to the list had me running away from her. I was the fastest in my family and suddenly I felt like I was about to break a personal record or something. I only stopped when I reached the mountains, there was a valley that I liked to go to when it was autumn as the meadow was dry and lifeless.

I sighed, everything is going to be alright, everything is going to be alright she’s not here; I chanted this over and over again to myself. I sat there and grasp the grass, don’t turn around and look for her, think of your family. This was so hard, I could still remember vividly her smell in my tongue. I didn’t dare to move, my body could betray me and run after her. I closed my eyes but all I could see was the girl staring at me with her bewildered eyes, there was a spark of recognition there hidden; but recognition of what? Wondering what she was thinking was pushing me to the edge, I wanted to run back to talk to her and figure out her mind. What was she thinking? The question was torturing me, my curiosity was inflamed. A nagging puzzle that I would never get the chance to put together. Ug! This was impossible, I could smell her and hear her heart pounding in front of me. I thought it was just my imagination, no human would be able to get here that fast! I opened my eyes and there she was, standing in front of me with here arms secured around her chest and her expression was still frustrated but resigned. I sat there hypnotize by her gaze, she walked with slow but determined movements in my direction. I cut the flow of oxygen to my lungs, I didn’t need it and I knew it would be unbearable for me to smell her and not sink my teeth in her. She kneeled before me, from the first second I saw her she has pierce into my eyes never looking away from them. The girl lifted her hand and stroked my cheek gently with her finger tips, her eyes never leaving mine, it felt like an electric current pulsed between us when she touched me. She exhaled heavily and her warm breath brushed my face almost caressing it while she dropped her hand.

“I give up”. She finally spoke, her voice was so beautiful, not in an inhuman way like a vampire but it was sweet, warm and soft. “Would you please tell me why your eyes are gold?” I was lost in the sound of her voice, it took me about five seconds to process what she was asking and another to realize she was waiting for me to speak.

“I don’t understand your question” I hated to say that aloud, how I wished I could understand what was going on behind those chocolate brown eyes.

“I was sent here for a coven of vampires but something is off. Your skin is pale, hard and cold; you’re breathtaking beautiful and run inhumanly fast. But your eyes… they are supposed to be either black or crimson. So would you explain to me why your eyes are golden?” She seemed even more frustrated to say it aloud. I couldn’t answer her I was in shocked. She knew.



Chapter 3- "Explanations"

Chapter 4- "Another World"

Chapter 5 and 6- "Confusion" and "Reunion" 

Chapter 7 and 8- "Family" and "Interrogation" 

Chapter 9- "Guest"

Chapter 10- "Interruptions"  

 Chapter 11- "Departure"

 Chapter 12- "New"
Chapter 13- "Understanding"
Chapter 14- "Selfishness"
Chapter 15- "Complications"
Chapter 16- "Appearence"
Chapter 17- "Past, present and future"
Chapter 18- "Worth"
Chapter 19- "Friendship"
Chapter 20- "Time's up"
Chapter 21- "Above"
Chapter 22- "Ghost"
Chapter 23- "Decisions"
Chapter 24- "Bleeding Heart"

Chapter 25- "Letters"

Chapter 26- "Wrecked"


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Reply by JESSIE on March 29, 2010 at 9:06pm
cool write more soon
Reply by Josefina Peloso on March 29, 2010 at 9:30pm
Hi Jessie! hahaha, glad you like it! No worries tomorrow Chapter 4 will be up so you'll have more to read in no time! Thank you so much for commenting and supporting me, I know it seems like such a small thing but it means a lot to me.

Love always


Ok so here's chapter 4! I hope this doesn't dissapoint! I'm a bit nervous about this chapter cause it's crucial so please be honest with your opinion! =D

4. Another world (EPOV)

I was revising our entire conversation looking for a place to start, it took me five minutes to decide which question to voice first. I wanted to know everything but at some point she will get tired of answering me so I had to focus on the more important facts to avoid asking something useless. I squeezed my brain trying to figure it out and then it hit me.

“Umm, you mention you were sent here.” Her eyes tightened at my start. “I was wondering well, who sent you?” She was looking up to the sky avoiding my gaze, I assumed she was deciding how much to tell me. I hated that, I didn’t want her to purposefully keep things from me and she’ll edit enough to drive me insane. I was used to having the insights thanks to my gift and now I have to settle with what she decides to share with me, always wondering if there was more than what she let on. Will not been able to read her mind cease to unnerve me someday? I doubt it. “Please Bella, I’ve answered everything you asked. I won’t tell anyone if that is what you want, trust me.” That last part was said a bit too passionately, I wanted her to trust me so much. Another silly desire that made no sense to me.

“Oddly enough I do trust you Edward” It was the first time I’ve heard her speak my name, it sounded so good and it made me feel strange. Her eyes were full of sincerity, she did trust me. My heart was soared by this, Bella was like a sweet little lamb walking into the embrace of lion trusting that he wouldn’t hurt her. She was so good, precious and trusting… I was at lost of words. I just stare right at her as she stare back, it felt like an eternity before I found my voice and picked up the conversation where we had left it but I knew that time was playing tricks on me cause only a few seconds had gone by.

“Then, what is it?” My voice was soft and I grabbed her delicate warm hand in mine, the electric jolt returned with her touch. I instantly felt the need to be closer to her and pushed it aside, I was losing it. I’ve just met her, she couldn’t possibly feel the same way about me when I was a vampire for crying out loud and it would be dangerous for her, so why does this feeling keep struggling to come out to the surface? Pull it together Edward, I fixed my eyes on hers waiting for her answer. She didn’t notice my inner debate which I was thankful for.

“I just don’t know how to explain it.” She sighed and shut her eyes in full concentration. “Give me a minute to put a coherent answer together” I could be patient or at least pretend to be patient as she put her thoughts together. I was beginning to become uneasy when she finally spoke. “Well, first of all I need you to understand that you are not the only myth that is a reality; there are a whole lot more. Like another world of fantasies.” I nodded, I had suspected that vampire and werewolves weren’t the only mythical creatures out there but now I was about to have confirmation of it. “Well, the ones who sent me are kind of my bosses in a way. They live above limbo but not in heaven, it’s in the middle of both. They’re called the Celestial Board, their members are old witches and wizards that have gained the title of “wise”. Because of their knowledge, sense of justice and impartiality they control the young ones sending them on missions on earth. You see we fight evil and defend humans from the supernatural world.” Her eyes piercing through mine, conveying her seriousness in the matter and measuring my reaction to this new unbelievable information that she gave me. I was blank.

“Wait, you are trying to tell me you’re a witch?” How many times could she shock me in less than an hour?

“Yes, well a part of me is and is the one I’ve chosen to follow” She lost me, I couldn’t put two plus two right now, what did she mean?

“Elaborate that for me please” She was biting her lip, nervous again. So she did hesitate like any normal creature, she must have known the answers to what she was asking before or maybe she only got nervous when it came to herself.

“I come from a strange family. Swan is a last name that is very known between the magic world, we usually choose to act like witches with very few exceptions. See we have a long history and we are one of the few families that have survive from the first bunch”.

“The first bunch?” I didn’t understand it, the way she said it made it obvious that in her world everyone would have know what she was talking about. I was upset that I knew so little from her world when she seemed to know everything about mine.

“Its how we referred to the first people who had magical powers. I’m a direct descendant from one of them. Up to there I’m a normal witch, but my family has a long history and we’ve been known for falling in love with other mythical creatures other than our own kind. My ancestors have married and procreated with unusual choices and led up to a mixture of strong inheritance” She shrugged like it was not big deal and tried to appear nonchalant but I could tell she was tense.

“Oh” I said lamely, I truly didn’t know how to react to that. But I needed to know more, it was a nerve racking feeling knowing there’s so much more to her. “How much of that inheritance do you actually inherit?”

She smiled and let a giggled escape from her mouth. I was lost staring at her lips, they were full and slightly unbalanced. I stopped, looking at her lips were stirring strange feelings within me. “Everything”


“Yep. We have evolved in a way to avoid losing the good things of the previous generation, we developed a gene that is really receptive.”

I was perplexed but I wanted her to continue speaking. “Is that gene perfect? Does it miss anything?”

“At the beginning it did, slowly the flaws were fixed over the years and in my generation it’s perfect” She fidgeted uneasy like she was scared of what I might think about her, like if she was expecting me to reject her any second. How absurd.

“These unusual creatures you talked about…well…”


“What are they?”

“Well, we’ve have had about everything in my family. Faeries, mermaids, nymphs, angels, dragons, dark angels, demons, werewolves, muses, dwarfs, elfs, vampires”

“VAMPIRES?!” I had to cut her there, how could one of her family been with a vampire?

“Yes, vampires” She cooked her head to the side, baffled as to why I had interrupted her like that.

My mind was struggling to come to this obvious conclusion “So, you are part vampire?”

“Yes, I’m partly vampire. What’s the big deal? I don’t inherit every part of the vampire nature only some things, as I’ve told you I’m not a complete creature but a divided one. I’m partly a lot of things that’s why it’s so hard finding some place to fit in perfectly. With the witches I feel more complete but I’m not totally comfortable with them.” She looked at me and appeared to become really preoccupied, like she was scared I’d disappeared the next second. “I’m sorry this must be a lot for you to handle and I keep putting more and more weight on you. I should have just kept my big mouth shut” She was hurt, her face was writhe with pain. I couldn’t allow her to feel like that, it pained me to see her like that.

I talked in a hurry desperate to keep her from hurting. “No, it’s not too much. I want to know you” She smiled a weak shy smile at my words. She took a deep steady breath to calm herself.

“So do you have another question?”

“Yes, one thousand or so” I laughed and she laughed with me a care free laugh. That bell sound did weird things to my body, my heart swelled and it was like it wanted to beat again.

“Well, you’ve answered eleven questions for me and up to now I’ve answered nine questions for you. That means you only have two questions left” I went through our conversation, she was right. She had said the exact amount of questions. I raised my eyebrows at her with an unspoken question in my eyes. “Well, a flawless memory is one of the things I’ve inherited in the vampire department” She laugh a bit. “You’ve got one question left”

“I didn’t ask you a thing”.

Again she rolled her beautiful eyes at me. “You might as well have and you were about to. One left, think carefully”. I did, I thought about it and deliberated with myself. There was one thing that had been bothering me since the beginning.

“What were you here sent for?” Her face drop, clearly that was a question she didn’t want to answer. She looked at her hands like they belonged to someone else as she twiddled her thumbs. She did that for an amount of time that seemed forever. “Bella?” She met my gaze apologetically, guilt and despair irradiated from her. “You can tell me anything” I don’t know if it was what I said or something she saw in me that encourage her to tell me the truth.

“The wise ones sent me here to kill you. They told me a coven had been in Forks for a large time span and that they didn’t hunt there so they assumed you were responsible for the major attacks that have been taken place in other cities. They must not know that you are vegetarians” Her words stumbled out of her mouth in a quick and nervous gush. She grimaced at this truth that was lying on the table now.

“Are you going to kill us now?” It was odd how I could discuss my own death or whatever we do with this level of calmness, I must be really going crazy. She glowered in my direction like if the answer was obvious even to a child.

“Of course not!” She was angry with me for having thought that she would hurt me. Maybe I knew she wouldn’t in a subconscious level and that was why I spoke about the end of my existence with such serenity.

“I’m sorry my assumption upset you, how can I make it up to you?” I wanted to stay with her, no matter what we did. Stupid senseless desires. She thought about it for a second and whatever she decided had excited her. She was nearly jumping up and down like a child.

“Take me to meet your family”.

Please comment and i would like to know if someone guessed entirely what Bella was! XD
PS: Next chapter will be from Bella's point of view
i luv it but the only thing i can come up with is a hybrid? am i right or even close?
hahaha i guess you can call her that... she's a divided creature torn between the shadows and the light. I'm glad you liked it!
ok that is so cool 2 parts of a whole light and dark cool........ hmm i like it
i'm glad you do because i was afraid people might not like the Bella i've created, so thanks for soothing me!
no problem i think it is really cool that u came up with that cuz i no 4 a fact that even if i were on this earth 4 a 1000 years i would not have been able 2 come up with that idea lol i guess wat im trying to say is that it is unique
hey i found a pic. on the internet that kinda goes with wat ur saying or at least i hope it does so here it is i attached it at the bottom
yeah ...
i cnt read it now
gotta go to colge
but vil read as soon as i cum
nd i've come up vid dat maybe she is a vampire dat has powers to remain human and dat ca nsee ghosts
a middle creature but unlike renesmee as she is cursed by a witch
wonderful. never doubt your skills learn that from the master. lol
i honesty didnt have any idea what she was lol i thought she was like that show buffy the vampire slayer i thought she was that lol but yeah really awesome chapter loved it!!!!! write more soon.


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