The Twilight Saga

Hey everyone.... this is my first Fan Fic.... i hope you like it..... and forgive me, my english is really bad cause my native language is spanish.... Waiting for your comments.... ;)

Btw, I do not claim any of these characters, they are all Stephenie Meyers creation. The only thing i own it's the story...... Enjoy it and comment back please.

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PREFACE


When I realized where I was and what I was doing…… I was…… breathless……. I couldn’t believe what I was going to do….. in less than 24h……. “Breathe Bella… just……. Breathe”…… I said to myself, trying to calm down…… A guy was staring at me and talking but I couldn’t understand him…… “I need to get out of here….” I said to myself….. I stopped to fill out the car and went straight to the driver’s seat, opened the door, got inside the car, started the engine and put one foot on the accelerator…… driving fast to…… where I was going to?.... Home? With Charlie? Back to the Cullen’s home where my fiancé and his family are waiting for me? Any other place in Forks? With Jake? No, the last part was…… impossible cause, he’s not in La Push…. Isn’t it? This is not ok…. I need to calm down and think…. Think Bella, think……. I need to think….. I need to be alone and think…… I wish I could be in home…… home….. I HAVE TO GO HOME……. MY HOME……. MY REAL HOME…….MOM…….

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Marissaaa!!
im so glad u are starting a fanfic yaay!
love the preface so intense! what could be happening there??? chanchann
Por favor escribe pronto!! Ya quiero leer el primer capitulo jeje! Y tu ingles no es malo! no se que dicess!!!
BEST LUCK OF ALL GIRL!!!
mantenme actualizadaa!
dani:)
Something like it..... pretty close.....lmao ;).... thanks for the comments
Thank u for all of your comments.... but u can write in english, spanish and french......lmao..... Thanks again..... i'll try to update and post Chapter I today..... Thanks again ;)
(this is so cool! keep writing!)
(IM SO SO SORRY EVERYONE FOR LETTING YOU WAITING FOR CHAPTER I...... HERE YOU HAVE IT...... COMMENT BACK PLEASE..... I HOPE YOU LIKE IT.... OR NOT..... BTW, THANKS TO MY EDITOR... WITHOUT YOUR HELP I COULDN'T HAVE DONE THIS.... ;P....... ENJOY IT...)

CHAPTER 1 …….THE RUNAWAY

Alice's POV

“OH NO, THIS CAN’T DEFINITELY BE HAPPENING….. NOT NOW….. EDWARD?” I yelled at him…..my vision was getting clearer but I wished I haven’t seen it….. I cannot bear this pain….. My best friend and soon my sister were going away…..

Edward saw the vision inside my mind as if it was happening in front of his eyes….. “Tell me this is a joke Alice, this is not true…” he said with a sharp of pain in his eyes….. “I’m very sorry Edward; I wouldn’t have seen it unless she decided to do it…. I….” I couldn’t say anything else, I didn’t have the answer, but I was surely going to ask the only person who knew the answer.. “Hello Charlie? It’s me, Alice. Look Charlie, I’ve been waiting for bella for an hour…any idea where she might be? And she’s not picking up her cell phone.. “I said to him, trying to get some information that he might have, more than the one I saw… “Um Alice, do you say an hour ago? She didn’t tell me anything this morning….. I’m going to call her…” he has less information than me…. “No Charlie is ok…. I’ll try to reach her later. Bye” I snapped my cell….

And had another vision…. Bella, driving very sad….. Confused….. Why?......the sign…… JACKSONVILLE….. “Edward?...” I said “Are you coming with me or not?” He answered me from the front door with the keys in his hand….

“I think I should stay here but Jasper can come with you…. Charlie will call me back later….. Good luck and bring her back soon….” I sat down on the top of the stairs…… Jasper came to my side and knelt…… kissed me…… “We’ll be back soon…. Call us if you have any news ok? I love you…” I kissed him back….. “I love you too…. I’m gonna miss you a lot….”

Jasper went downstairs and head outside with Edward…….


Edward's POV

We jumped inside the Volvo and I turned on the engine….. “Jazz, do me a favor please….. Whatever happens to me …… don’t bother to bring me back home, ok?” He looked at me but I couldn’t look back….. He nodded at me….I started to drive…. Heading to Jacksonville….. Where my love was driving to…..

“Alice?” Jasper answered his cell phone…. “Um… ok, thanks love…. Talk to Carlisle and the others, ok? I love you too….” He hung up….. “Alice says that Bella is already with René and Phil and she’s fine…. René called a minute ago and talked to Esme….they’re calling Charlie to tell him….. Edward, are you sure this is a good idea? What if…. She doesn’t want to come back with us? What if…… she’s not ready ….” I cut him….. “Jasper….. Please……” I kept on driving…… accelerating….. I have to reach her soon…… my love…… my Bella

I was trying to figure out what Bella’s thinking ….. how ‘s she feeling and what pushed her to take this decision….. run away from me….. a day before our wedding….. but I couldn’t imagine her….. how she’s feeling nor her thoughts ….. in that moment, more than any other second in the world, I wished she were here with me not only that…but I wish u could read her thoughts….. know how she feels…..and how she felt. And will feel......
LOVE IT ;) and you know it!!!! lo0l

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YYaay! Really good Marissa!! :):)
Escribe prontoo! Necesito saber si la encuentran y que le pasa a ella?? PORQUE SE FUE JUSTO ANTES DE CASARSE??! Argghh please write more sooon! loved it!
Nice job girlXD Continue to update me, please :):)
9 this is cool1 keep writing0
I FOUND IT!!!! :D YAYAYAYAYAY!!
Lee Lee this is so goodd! :D I want to know what happens! What is Bella doing?! lol
soo good! pleas update me!! i love it!
here is ur banner! if u click on it, it will bring people to this fanfic!


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