ok well i wasnt really critisising your story i was just curious.
and i never said it wasnt good
*the pack- 1)ok shes half human but it still shouldnt hurt as much as a real human being.
2)the kids turn into werewolves when they are older not when there just born. there not strong yet.
3)the thing is, is that since bella was 100% human having a half vampire baby WILL of course hurt, but renesmee is HALF vampire and human wich means it should only hurt like half of what bella went thrue because her kids were only HALF vampire and HALF human.
4) they are two children but they arent werewolves yet. just half vempire and half human but renesmee is strong enough to handle that.
what ever. *mercy*
lol your welcome. i thought it made alot of sence :)
Becca ok theres pain. just not as much because she is still part vampire.
but they cant have oversized muscles when there only newborns.
even though they are a quarter they still wouldnt kill her like that.
it really doesnt make sense
*the pack- jeez its nothin to get mad about.
:) thats right !
well u could have said that from the beginning.
it could have saved me o lot of time.
i thought u were bein logical. not imaginative.
*the pack- seriously plz stay out of this