A Sisters Love Is Unbreakable <3

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Permalink Reply by Dawn~Power~ <3 on October 16, 2009 at 10:10pm

thanxxxxxxxxx!!!!!!!!! sorry 4 not writing!!! i no i keep saying that but i got in trouble, im sorry!!! :(:(

Permalink Reply by Dawn~Power~ <3 on October 18, 2009 at 7:54pm

heres more!! sorrry it took soooo long :)
ch.4-the lunch room BPOV

At lunch i sat with rose and her new friend jessica who i hated,and my new friend angela.
" i see you guys met the cullens" angela said pointing to them at there table.
"well not really meet, i meet edward he seemed nice but the rest i dont know." i said seeing jessicas glare when i said ' i meet edward'
"ya and if bella never already told you edwwards mine!" she said to rose with annoyace in her voice.
"yes bella did tell me" rose said eating an apple.
"jess babe come here"he said waving her over. i watched as she walked over.
She wraped her legs arpund him as they started making out. He grabbed her ass as they made out.
" thats disgusting" i muttered to rose.
"yes, i cant belive we liked him" rose said nodding
I got it now.Edward was a player. ugh i was so stupid to think he actually liked me.
I looked over at the two who finally finished making out.
" come on bella lets go" angela said and we headed for the door.
" hey blondie wanna come to my house tonight?" he said looking rose up and down.
" edward!" i thought you liked me?!?!" jessica said then slapped him.
"WERE OVER!"she said and stormed out.
Rose slapped him and angela followed them out.
"I cant belive i liked you!,You were nice to me but in the end you were nothing but a player" i said and stared him in the eyes.
"hey babe,theres so many hot girls out there,i cant just pick one" he said then grabbed my ass and then his lips touched mine. I started enjoying this so i kissed back.he moved his lips to my neck.Then as he leaned we fell over.
"Bella!",rose said staring at us.
I looked over at edward." I HATE YOU!" i said and ran over to rose and started crying.I thought i liked him.
" its ok, you can never trust a guy" she said batting my back as we alked to her car.
That night i took a book and blanket and went out on the lawn. it was a beautiful night.
"as i gazed up at the stars as deep as the ocean,as the wind blowed across the land,the limp jelly fish sailed along with the small blow of the ocean." I muttered.
"whoa bella,that was beautiful" rose said as she sat with be on the blanket


ok that was chapter 4!!! hope u liked it :):):)!!!!!! and that little umm poem or rhyme or whatever i made up, i thought about it before i went to bed last night :) hope u liked it :)

Permalink Reply by Dawn~Power~ <3 on October 19, 2009 at 3:12pm

please comment!!!!

Permalink Reply by Hope on October 19, 2009 at 3:39pm

i like it im going to follow this, write at vampire speed, i hope eddy boy comes to his senses

Permalink Reply by Dawn~Power~ <3 on October 19, 2009 at 3:53pm

he might, he might not :P thanx :)

Permalink Reply by AlEx§EiRn§jAkE§lAvI§DaYsIa§LoVi on October 31, 2009 at 12:37pm

i love it so much
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write more
or my puppy will cry

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Permalink Reply by Megan Pattinson on October 20, 2009 at 2:59pm

I love it write more please

Permalink Reply by Dawn~Power~ <3 on October 20, 2009 at 4:21pm

i will :) thanx :)

Permalink Reply by Dawn~Power~ <3 on October 21, 2009 at 5:01pm

SORRY CANT WRITE FOR AWHILE.. IN TROUBLE!!!! really sorry :/

Permalink Reply by Dawn~Power~ <3 on October 22, 2009 at 6:05pm

hehe i can write now!!! i didnt get in toooo much trouble :) but cant write tonight,has little cuzin over :/

Permalink Reply by Kelley Brady on December 3, 2010 at 10:07pm

great story please continue

Permalink Reply by Dawn~Power~ <3 on December 4, 2010 at 7:30am

How In the world did you find this story ?! :o
It's so old ! I completly forgot about it..
But I'll keep writing (Alot better since now I'm better with Grammar and stuff)
If you want me to .
Thanks anyways, Byee :]

-Dawn <3

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