Alienated.

The inpiration for this story came from an old collab with my dear friend Dallas Loraine. She is an extremely talented writer and has her own original posted here now. It is titled Do I? and I would LOVE for you to check it out! I'm reforming it and making it new with her permission.

So with out further ado: Alienated.

Prologue:

“Miles please,” Lucy’s voice was strong willed but that didn’t mean anything to me anymore.

“Stop it Luce! I’m not going to lie to her anymore; I’m tired of keeping secrets and tired of acting like I don’t care. I’m tired of your bossing me around and I’m not listening to you moan about Mom and Dad anymore, they’re gone!” I knew my words were harsh, and I could see the pain it caused her in her eyes.

“Miles. . .” Her voice cracked as she pleaded one last time.

I ignored the tug in my heart to obey her and left the house, letting the door slam behind me.

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-Claire Bear.

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Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on November 12, 2011 at 4:44pm

Haha, Charlotte is a very outgoing and noisy girl. :3

I'm glad you like it! I won't always tell things between both their POV, I just wanted to for their first meeting. :3

Permalink Reply by Nikki, My Dear™ on November 21, 2011 at 4:23pm

Nice. Sorry, I've been busy lately, I've been having benchmark tests, end of the 1st semester at school.

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on November 21, 2011 at 4:27pm

Haha, it's okay. :3

I'm glad you liked it!

The end of the semester at my school isnt until right before Christmas break, so when we get back from Thanksgiving break, I'll have three weeks full of testing, reviewing and excesive learning. XD

Permalink Reply by Nikki, My Dear™ on November 21, 2011 at 4:30pm

Ugh, I hate tests. ;)

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on November 21, 2011 at 4:47pm

Haha, me too. They are always extremely awful.

Permalink Reply by ♥vamplvr27♥ on November 21, 2011 at 5:28pm