All I Want For Christmas (Esme and Carlisle)

This is my little story inspired by twilight and a little bit of christmas magic.
The chapters will only be short and there may not be that many of them, but I will try to post regularly and get it finished by christmas.
I just don't think there are enough of these for Esme and Carlisle.

Chapter 1
It was an evening in late November. I was lying on the sofa watching television, while Carlisle played with a lock of my hair absent-mindedly. All the children were out – Alice’s doing! Just us, on our own – did it get any more perfect than this?
‘Darling?’ Carlisle said.
Uh oh – he wanted something, something he knew I wouldn’t like.
‘Mmm?’ I responded.
‘It turns out I have to go away for a little bit.’
‘What for?’
‘It doesn’t matter.’
‘When? And how long is “a little bit”?’ I asked, becoming a little suspicious.
‘I’m going this weekend. It shouldn’t be any longer than 2 or 3 weeks.’
‘Well, as long as you promise to be back for Christmas. We’ll all want you there.’
‘I promise’ he murmured, softly kissing the top of my head.
This reassured me, but I still wondered why he hadn’t told me what he would be doing. Still, I trusted him – I loved him. If it was anything important he would have said.
I snuggled into his chest and he put his arms around me. I wanted to enjoy this moment – I wouldn’t be getting any more for a while.

Comments please........It's my first try. Hope you liked it :)

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Permalink Reply by Mrs Fachinelli on December 10, 2009 at 1:27pm

Btw, Esme's POV obv!

Permalink Reply by Maggie Morrison on December 10, 2009 at 3:11pm

I cannot be sure about it yet, it is very very short. But in honesty I don't mind what I read. I also think that Esme and Carlisle are not included enough in FanFics. So keep going and keep me posted and I will continue to comment constructively.You can ask anyone whose stories I do read. I am really good with the comments and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. I hope Carlisle is not a perv or something though. I started to read one where he stalked Bella and wanted her for himself and at soempoint he left Esme and she left Edward. BAD!! I had to stop I didnt want to see him like that. :)

Permalink Reply by Olivia Cullen on December 10, 2009 at 3:14pm

its gd tht its in esme's pov not many fanfics r about esme and carlisle.
but i cant tell whether i would like it yet because it was very very short lol.
anyways i think you should keep posting and keep me updated =D

Permalink Reply by Chelsea Jacob Cullen on December 10, 2009 at 3:21pm

Sounds good so far!! :D

Permalink Reply by Ara Jane Voltori on December 10, 2009 at 3:41pm

i think its fine you should keep going

Permalink Reply by Mrs Fachinelli on December 10, 2009 at 3:46pm

Thanks guys! Next chapter coming soon

Permalink Reply by tnicole on December 10, 2009 at 3:58pm

i think this is a good start. keep going.

i wonder if perhaps there aren't a lot of carlisle and esme stories because they are the "parents" and young people really don't want to hear about romance with their parents. kind of icky, right? lol

Permalink Reply by Olivia Cullen on December 10, 2009 at 4:49pm

yh i suppose tht cud b why there arent many carlisle and esme stories...
gd point lol

Permalink Reply by Sabrina on December 10, 2009 at 4:22pm