Best Friends ( Edward and Bella Story)

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Permalink Reply by Ashley Jordan on January 2, 2012 at 9:06pm

Sounds good keep me updated!!!

Permalink Reply by Cheyenne Loves Twilight <3 on January 2, 2012 at 10:13pm

I think you should! sounds really good!! update me 

-chey-

Permalink Reply by calipso cullent on January 3, 2012 at 4:48pm

yes!!!!!! please want to knw more pwease alex pwease *puppy eyes* pwease keep wrighting luv the summary sooo goood got my attention now start wrighting NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Alexandra Styles Cullen on January 4, 2012 at 4:01pm

calipso cullent thanks a lot and guess wat!!! im starting chapter one write now !!!!! hope you enjoy it :)

 

Permalink Reply by calipso cullent on January 4, 2012 at 4:14pm

sweet man thanks im going to keep checking in on ya ;)

Permalink Reply by Alexandra Styles Cullen on January 4, 2012 at 4:22pm

lol Hopefuly ill be posting every sunday or saturday my days r always busy i have highschool and now SAT test so if i dont post on time please dont attack me ..lol :)

 

Permalink Reply by Alexandra Styles Cullen on January 4, 2012 at 5:30pm

Chapter 1 BPOV

hey my name is Bella Swan i live in Forks,Washington unfortunatley. My dad is a cop,and my mother....well she doesnt do much she lives in Pheonix Arizona with her husband, my stepdad. Im not what you call popular I only have a few girlfriends Jess,Ang,and Becca, their my sisters I love them were friends since the first day of highschool. I noticed something was up when I entered the cafeteria because everyone was talking ,louder than usual I only caught a few sentances of their conversations "the new kids are wierd, but very good looking the blond boy is sooo HOT!!" I searched the room for the 6 new kids who came all the way from Alaska. I found them they were absolutley beaiful but one face I knew I reconized. The boy had touseled bronze hair and the most beatiful gold eyes. He stared back at me and I knew who it was HOLY CRAP!! ITS EDWARD !! I smiled at him for I now know who he is, he smild back a little bit and looked down. Becca who obviously saw this whispered "Ooooohhh you like the Cullens !! Especialy Edward Cullen!!! " I laughed but did she say Cullen?? I thought Edwards last name was Masen hmmmm.... I guess i'll find out........

 

 

Authors note: hey guys do you like it I decided to leave it there because i dont know what to post next please comment on what you think I know its horrible but im tring really hard to make it interesting

                                       - aLeX ♥♥

Permalink Reply by Alexandra Styles Cullen on January 4, 2012 at 5:32pm

hey sorry i forgot to mention but this is SUPER  short soooooo sorry !!!!!!

 

Permalink Reply by Chris on January 4, 2012 at 6:16pm

Alex,

It's a really interesting idea!! And I like it alot.

Don't worry about the length - I think it is good to have a short first chapter it gets the reader into the story without overwhelming them - my big mistake was to make mine page and pages long I think anybody going to it might just say - I haven't got the time for this and go on somewhere else!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Chris

 

 

 

Permalink Reply by Alexandra Styles Cullen on January 4, 2012 at 6:58pm

Chris ,
thanks a lot for your comment it means a lot and im thinking on making my chapters a little longer its just my head was completley empty with no ideas usualy im filled with ideas but for this chapter i was completley blank as soon as i get an idea i will start writing

–Alex

Permalink Reply by calipso cullent on January 5, 2012 at 4:58pm

hey alex why u doin this to me write MORE!!!!!!! pwease thanks added u as a frend u my friend and bro now YAY!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Safae Cullen on March 31, 2012 at 10:51am

WOW This is good !!!! Awsome !!!!

PS.Thanx voor reply on my storie

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