The Twilight Saga

Hey guys this is my first fanfic  I write and I know it might be bad but Im trying my hardest to make it good !!!! :)

 

Summary- Edward and Bella are friends since the fifth grade when suddenly in the first year of highschool Edward suddenly disapears (ps Edward is 17 now and still best friends with Bella. ) Bella now a senior in highschool spots Edward in the cafeteria with 5 other beatiful godlike people. Bella goes up and talks to him, Edward suprised that Bella remembers him talks to Bella but avoids her as much as possible.  Will Bella and Edward fall in love with Bella? or Stacey? ( sorry i didnt mention it but Stacey is another vampire that the Cullens meet shes a vegetarian to)

 

 

 

 

 

authors note: do ou think I should do this or another one please comment!!

 

                -Alex

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Sounds good keep me updated!!!

I think you should! sounds really good!! update me 

-chey-

yes!!!!!! please want to knw more pwease alex pwease *puppy eyes* pwease keep wrighting luv the summary sooo goood got my attention now start wrighting NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

calipso cullent thanks a lot and guess wat!!! im starting chapter one write now !!!!! hope you enjoy it :)

 

sweet man thanks im going to keep checking in on ya ;)

lol Hopefuly ill be posting every sunday or saturday my days r always busy i have highschool and now SAT test so if i dont post on time please dont attack me ..lol :)

 

Chapter 1 BPOV

hey my name is Bella Swan i live in Forks,Washington unfortunatley. My dad is a cop,and my mother....well she doesnt do much she lives in Pheonix Arizona with her husband, my stepdad. Im not what you call popular I only have a few girlfriends Jess,Ang,and Becca, their my sisters I love them were friends since the first day of highschool. I noticed something was up when I entered the cafeteria because everyone was talking ,louder than usual I only caught a few sentances of their conversations "the new kids are wierd, but very good looking the blond boy is sooo HOT!!" I searched the room for the 6 new kids who came all the way from Alaska. I found them they were absolutley beaiful but one face I knew I reconized. The boy had touseled bronze hair and the most beatiful gold eyes. He stared back at me and I knew who it was HOLY CRAP!! ITS EDWARD !! I smiled at him for I now know who he is, he smild back a little bit and looked down. Becca who obviously saw this whispered "Ooooohhh you like the Cullens !! Especialy Edward Cullen!!! " I laughed but did she say Cullen?? I thought Edwards last name was Masen hmmmm.... I guess i'll find out........

 

 

Authors note: hey guys do you like it I decided to leave it there because i dont know what to post next please comment on what you think I know its horrible but im tring really hard to make it interesting

                                       - aLeX ♥♥

hey sorry i forgot to mention but this is SUPER  short soooooo sorry !!!!!!

 

Alex,

It's a really interesting idea!! And I like it alot.

Don't worry about the length - I think it is good to have a short first chapter it gets the reader into the story without overwhelming them - my big mistake was to make mine page and pages long I think anybody going to it might just say - I haven't got the time for this and go on somewhere else!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Chris

 

 

 

Chris ,
thanks a lot for your comment it means a lot and im thinking on making my chapters a little longer its just my head was completley empty with no ideas usualy im filled with ideas but for this chapter i was completley blank as soon as i get an idea i will start writing

–Alex
hey alex why u doin this to me write MORE!!!!!!! pwease thanks added u as a frend u my friend and bro now YAY!!!!!!!

WOW This is good !!!! Awsome !!!!

PS.Thanx voor reply on my storie

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