BitterSweet Fate

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Permalink Reply by Kassandra Barry on August 29, 2010 at 3:20am

THIS IS SOOOO AMAZING your def talented as a writer u write so beautifully i was like hooked instantly...its interseting to see what is goin on in her mind when things go down and i like that u putting ur own twist to it to so its not all the same soryline.....LOVE IT

Permalink Reply by tika*thecomplexonee♡ on August 29, 2010 at 5:04am

Whoa ! Thank youu a million times Kassandra Barry for that elaborate comment ; I'm pleased you find Rosalie's perspective interesting. iSure do & yeah, in my beginnin chapters iWas followinq the oriqinal story really close but now that evryone gets my drift Rosalie has decided she wants to come out of her shell a bit... if you want iCan keep you updated on the story. But thanks again for that response.. they make my day go by more smoothly :)

Permalink Reply by Aarati. Edward Cullen Patil on August 29, 2010 at 6:01am

Loved it a lot. Its really a great chapter as well as a great story. Write more soon.

Permalink Reply by tika*thecomplexonee♡ on August 29, 2010 at 5:23pm

thanks youuu Aarati. Edward Cullen Patil

Permalink Reply by Bailey,Taylor Swifts Biggest Fan on August 29, 2010 at 12:52pm

This is such a wonderful story only to be created by a wonderful writer. I can't believe how well wriiten this story is. I can almost see and feel like she does in it. And how you describe it, I feel like I can relate to how she feels. Once again another great chapter. Please keep going

Permalink Reply by tika*thecomplexonee♡ on August 29, 2010 at 5:24pm

"This is such a wonderful story only to be created by a wonderful writer." that was really nice =]
i'm overwhelmed that you can also feel what she feels & see what she sees. that's my motivation when iWrote my chapters, for you huys to become a part of Rosalie ; for you to see the story we all know & love from her side--x to see, she's not all badd

Permalink Reply by Alice Cullen Whitlock!♫♥ʚïɞ✾☆☮♊ on August 29, 2010 at 2:15pm

Okay, I seriously LOVE this story! It's interesting to see something from her point of view for a change. You so rarely get to see what is running through her head. It gets better and better with each chapter you write! You have some serious potential as a writer :D Write more soon
~Alice ♥~

Permalink Reply by tika*thecomplexonee♡ on August 29, 2010 at 5:25pm

Thanks ! it means alot that you think iCoul be a writer--x but i'm glad you lovee my chapters... i'll write more soon

Permalink Reply by Heartbroken & still in love on August 29, 2010 at 5:35pm

your wasting valuable time! and i'm slowly slipping into a coma..don't let me..slip into...a...coma

Permalink Reply by tika*thecomplexonee♡ on August 29, 2010 at 8:47pm

iPosted it already.. hope you didn't die on mee

Permalink Reply by tika*thecomplexonee♡ on August 29, 2010 at 11:20pm

CHAPTER SIX Would I Stay? ….*


The wind in my face felt- needed.

Cold as my actual body temperature was, I felt heated. As though I was on fire- even though I knew that was an irrational thought.

I drove down the highway, no particular destination. I just needed to drive, to stay in motion- my head seemed to be spiraling at the very moment.
I was fortunate to have vampire senses because if it wasn’t for that- I would be somewhere in a ditch by now. I was driving so carelessly- for human standards, not watching the road, changing the settings on my iPod it wasn’t until I saw the sign approaching that I glanced ahead. The sign read : “You are now leaving Forks.”

I nonchalantly shrugged.

I just couldn’t get over Carlisle's words. "I fully support Edward's decisions."
Edward had always been his favorite child, that’s probably why he was defending him. But deep down, he had to know that leaving this human alive was the wrong way to go about it. I knew she would talk- it obvious knowledge. That’s what humans do, when involved in a conversation you need a topic. We, would be the topic. I could imagine it now :

She would be sitting with those others mortals and the snobby one would be saying how lucky the Swan girl was to be alive and she would reply and have them marvel at how my imbecile of a brother rushed over from out of nowhere and pushed her out of the way. That would be it.. That was all we needed for the rumors to spread throughout the school, the town, Washington. But Carlisle would of course, relocate us-once again before things got to that point.

But what I couldn’t fathom is why wait for that to unveil when we could dispose of her now and save ourselves the time.

I pondered a little while longer as I drove down the highway.It wasn't until my phone started vibrating that I realized I was now in Seattle.

I marveled at how fast I Must have been driving, Seattle is about two hours from Forks and I had left the hospital less than an hour ago. Hmmm something to make a mental note of.

I answered my phone, “What Alice?” I spoke with frustration in my tone.
“Schools out, head back to the house- Carlisle‘s going to call a family meeting in thirty-three minutes.” and she hung-up.

I rolled my eyes and threw the phone to the back seat. Thirty minutes? I’ll be there sooner than that.

I arrived to the house within twenty-five minutes. I took notice that everyone’s car was present, except Carlisle Mercedes.- I had beat him here.

I reached for the front door, Let’s get this over with.

I walked in the house and the first person I laid eyes on was him-

Idiot ! Lunatic ! Moron ! J****** ! Selfish, irresponsible fool ! I began thinking, quite loudly as I took a seat on Emmett's lap. He gave me a questioningly look, I knew what he wanted to know. I responded with one phrase : for a drive babe. He gave me a quick peck which meant he understood.

Edward winced as I continued silently insulting him. Phase one of my plan Complete. I thought. Now all I had to do was complete the next two phases and my life would resume. I began coming up with my plan of attack. I needed a back-up option if things didn’t go accordingly.

Alice was struggling. As it turned out, Jasper and I were on the same accord with this. He wanted to end this just as badly as I did.. Interesting. I continued on phase two- trying to keep Edward out of my thoughts. I always found a way to do this- think about mine and Emmett’s honeymoon. It always worked.

Alice kept yelling at Edward and Jasper to quit it because she couldn’t make out anything with the two of them always switching courses.

All actions came to a halt when we heard Carlisle’s car door open.

It was time.

Esme directed all of us to take our usual seats in the dining room. Carlisle greeted all of us casually. Then took his seat at the head of the table with Esme right at his side. I didn’t want to hurt her, she would understand where I’m coming from I thought.

I redirected my eyes to the source of our problems- Edward. After a few seconds, Jasper came to lean on the wall behind me- obviously making his decision know. This getting easier to deal with.

Edward decided to speak up first as if that would make a difference.

“I‘m sorry” he spoke, making a point to directly look each and every one of us in the eyes.
“I didn‘t mean to put any of you at risk. It was thoughtless-” that was an understatement I thought.

He paused, obviously noting my thought but then continued

“and I take full responsibility for it.” He shifted.

He couldn’t think Jasper or I would let it go this easy.

“What do you mean ‘take full responsibility for it‘” I marveled. “Are you going to fix it?” I demanded.
“Not the way you mean.” he replied.

I hissed at his blatant disregard to take me serious. Emmett rubbed my back. I ignored the gesture.

“I am willing to leave now, if that makes things better” he said with false guilt in his tenor.
“No !” Esme called out.

This had to be a joke. Did he really think just by apologizing we would all forgive and forget then go on with our lives? I was just about to object when Emmett cautioned me. He wanted to speak..

“Esme‘s right, leaving would be the opposite of helpful. We have to know what people are thinking now more than ever.” he responded with a sense of clarity.
“Alice will catch anything major.” Edward responded.

I rubbed my temples in disbelief. He really was an idiot I confirmed to myself.

Carlisle shook his head, “I think Emmett is right Edward. The girl will be likely to talk if you leave.”
“Which is why we need to kill her before she gets that opportunity. At this point in time, I could care less if you left Edward, my top concern now is and has always been- the girl. If you leave, she talks and whose to say if you stay she won‘t talk?” I looked everyone sitting at the table in the eye. “Why should we give her that chance?”

Everyone pondered on my speculation. Pride swelled up in my chest, I was really getting through to them. Phase three was going quite fine I thought.

I saw out the corner of my eye Edward was about to object. I couldn’t let him reason with them.

I noticed he took note to my thought. Damn it, I let it slip

“She won‘t say anything” Edward objected.

I was on the verge of exploding when Jasper spoke for our opposing argument.

“You don‘t know her mind Edward.” he stated coolly.

I tried to hide a smile as I realized we were on the brink of winning them over.

“Exactly my issue, we‘re wasting valuable time here.. Who‘s to say she hasn‘t spoken to her father on the car ride home ? Or that she won‘t confide with one of her friends within time. We‘re taking chances and I don‘t like it. Not at all.”

“Neither do I. ” Jasper agreed.

I sat in disbelief as Carlisle motioned that he could see our stand.

We’re almost there. I thought. Edward then interrupted my moment of glory.

“Alice would see it if something was mentioned” he tried to reason with us as he turned to Alice for back-up.

“It‘s hard for me to see the result of any income. We‘re so divided I can‘t get a clear glance.” she responded to him with sympathy in her voice.

Everyone sat solid, deep in thought. After five minutes I was over this.

Enough is enough.They would either agree with us or try to catch both of us. Which I knew was impossible-

I smacked my hand down on the table, then I spoke rapidly.

“Carlisle, I know you want to leave the girl living, but even if we leave how can we be certain she won‘t talk. The odds are against us. You must see that” I pleaded trying to stay confident.

“We‘ve left rumors behind before !” Edward spat.

How dare he bring that up ?Takinf me back tothe night I killed Royce and his accomplices.They deserved to die, just as his human does !

“Yes Edward, we left just rumors and suspicions, not eye witnesses and evidence !” I retorted.
“Evidence?” he scoffed
“She’s right Edward” Jasper put in.
“Rose-” Carlisle interrupted.
“Just let me finish Carlisle. It does not by any means have to be something major. Edward said it himself she should have had a concussion, you saw her, she was hurt. So, what if the head injury turned out to be bigger than it appeared? There have been many stories where that was the case.” I reasoned. “We are expected to clean up after ourselves- technically speaking, that would mean it was Edward‘s job but seeing how he‘s incapable of doing anything right, I would be the next one up who has the capability of pulling this off- leaving no trace of evidence behind. Naturally.”

“Yes Rosalie, we all are aware of how proficient an assassin you are.” he snarled.

I hissed at him menacingly. He was ungrateful ! Was he upset I was going to have the opportunity to do what he wanted but couldn’t? Or that he knew this was the right thing to do but he just couldn’t bare it ?

“Edward please,” Carlisle spoke before I had the chance to give Edward a piece of my mind ! He then turned to me.

“Rosalie, I looked the other way in Rochester because I felt you were owed justice. The men you killed had wronged you monstrously. This is not the same situation- ”

“Why not Carlisle? Yes, I killed those men out of personal reasons- I felt I would gain something by killing them, I didn‘t. Is that what you wanted to hear ? Fine. But this, is not personal, when you told me to leave it be and when the threat came directly to the family we would come to a clear consensus right? ”

He hesitated .“Yes Rosalie, those were my words but-”

I didn’t want to hear it. “There are no exceptions Carlisle. If you want to say she‘s innocent fine- she was innocent. She doesn‘t deserve to die by our hands- ”

“Thank you” Edward interrupted. Convinced I had changed my mind.

He was more foolish than I thought.

I faced him and continued. “But, fate had decided it was her time to die. Not I or Carlisle or anyone of the Cullens. Fate! But you- took it upon yourself and decided she needed to live. As though the world would appear better if she continued to live.”

Edward looked as though he would vomit- if he could. I was making sense to him. Good.

“So, am I the only one who sees where the situation got out of control here? Edward took it into his own hands to give her life back- that’s fine, but now I’m taking it into my hands to make sure our family isn’t put into mortal danger.” I spoke out lividly.

Jasper placed his hand on my shoulder to let me know he stood in support of me. I returned the gesture and placed my hand on top of his.

Carlisle motioned for us both to have a seat. I hadn’t even noticed I was standing up.

He sighed, “I am well aware of the danger this predicament puts the family in and I want everyone to be aware that the occasional lapse in control is a regrettable part of who we are. Vampires. To murder a blameless child in cold blood is risking something far more significant than her speaking suspicions. If we make exceptions to protect ourselves we risk something important- losing who we are. Who you’ve all come to be.” he preached.

I scowled. “I understand you Carlisle, but I won‘t say I agree with you.”

Edward sat motionless glaring from me to Jasper.

“I didn‘t expect you would Rose. But the bigger question is whether or not we should move one.”
The topic I feared. I didn’t want to leave, but more importantly- did I want to stay?

Comment pleaaase
------x ♥ =]

Permalink Reply by Mrs.SarahRoseMellark on August 29, 2010 at 11:40pm

THAT WAS SOOOO AMAZING!!!!
I can see Rosalie's point and I
agree with her even though I know
the outcome!! Go Rose!!!

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