The Twilight Saga

Breaking Dawn Gone Wrong


What if the Volturi decided to fight? what if Alice didnt make it in time to help? what if Alice,Rosalie, and Kate are the only ones left.
tell me if i should continue

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Permalink Reply by Jenna on August 3, 2010 at 6:34pm
yes yes yes yes yes yes
Permalink Reply by Rosalie Lillian Hale on August 3, 2010 at 6:35pm
Sure it sounds like a good story :)
Permalink Reply by Kasi Jayne on August 3, 2010 at 6:37pm
Yes, yes, yes, yes. Keep going, please :D
Permalink Reply by MRS TWILIGHT on August 3, 2010 at 6:38pm
ok if i get a few more comments ill write the first chapter tonight
Permalink Reply by MRS TWILIGHT on August 3, 2010 at 6:44pm
lol yes thats enough ill start working on it
Permalink Reply by Jenna on August 3, 2010 at 6:45pm
YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY
Permalink Reply by Łuną Nighťfąłł on August 3, 2010 at 7:50pm
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAVAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hehe they look like little mountains ehheeeeheheheheh

but ya you should continue!
Permalink Reply by CullenGirlRosales on August 3, 2010 at 6:55pm
Sounds good! post it plz
Permalink Reply by MRS TWILIGHT on August 3, 2010 at 6:58pm
Chapter1~Apov
"Jasper hurry we have to go!" i screamed we had found Nahuel.
"Alice babe we're almost there." he said we were running faster than we had ever ran before.. but that was until i heard a scream coming from the clearing and i didnt need a vision to know who it was from.
"Esme!" i said then i started running again. we finally got to the clearing and the fight was almost over and i couldnt find any of the Cullens
"Alice stay here." Jasper said before running to fight
"Jasper." i said but he wasn't listening just then i had a vision
~Vision~
Rose was fighting Felix and she was loosing "Emmett!" she screamed but he never came.
"Hes dead Rosie." Felix said before ripping off her head .
~End of vision~
"Rose." i said running to where she was
"Alice help." she said and i jumped on Felix's back and ripped off his head then i lit a match and watched him burn.
"Rose are you ok?" i asked
"No Alice im scared and i want Emmett but hes gone forever." she said
"Where are the others?" i asked
"Gone." she said we sat there in silence until i realized where we were. I got up and a looked around all i saw were pieces of people and none of them belonged to the ones i loved most.
"
Permalink Reply by MRS TWILIGHT on August 3, 2010 at 7:22pm
i know it was short and im sorry the next chappy will be waaay longer
Permalink Reply by Maribel Whitlock Hale Cullen on August 3, 2010 at 8:38pm
LOVE It!
Permalink Reply by Renesmee Carlie Cullen's Girl on August 3, 2010 at 9:09pm
YES! WRITE IT NOW!

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