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Broken Dreams...Sad story. What if Bella had cancer, would Edward change her?

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Hi everyone! So, I have this idea for a story on top of the other one that I am now writing and I wanted an opinion on whether or not anyone would be interested in it? It may not be a very long story as I have it in my head to possibly go to at least ten or fifteen chapters for it. I do have to strongly imply that this will be a very, very, very sad short story. At times it will be difficult to read. This is for a friend of mine that sadly did not survive her fight with the same thing.


In Memory of,


                                                                Diana Harris






Preface:



“I'm so sorry Isabella...”

“It's...Bella...just Bella.”

“You should probably have your father here with you. I should have waited to tell you this until you brought your father into this...”

“No...I...won't...hurt him...this...way.” I couldn't think at the moment. That one word was constant inside my head, haunting my every thought. Leukemia. Acute Leukemia.

“I'm sorry Bella, but as your doctor I have to call your father in. You are only seventeen and right now, it appears that you're in shock and cannot make the best decisions. In regards to your father Bella, there is no reason he shouldn't know about this.”

“This will...devastate him. I can't...tell him. I wouldn't even know how.” How do you tell your own parent that you will die before them? I couldn't do it and I knew it. I knew the doctor was right about my shock. I couldn't even form the onset of tears. I couldn't move a muscle and they began to ache from the stiffness. I was very sure that I couldn't blink. How long did I have? How much time did I have to say goodbye to everyone that I held dear to me? How was I supposed to tell them all? How was I supposed to tell...Edward?


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Okay so just a small portion, but I thought that might be enough to get an idea if anyone would like to read any further. Please leave a comment and let me know if you would like to otherwise I may go ahead and not go any further. Thanks



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new reader**

                     Love it so good and emotional

                            ur amazing keep writing update me please

                                                                                 Emmettswife18 ** <3

Hi Emmett,

 

Thanks for stopping in and reading. Such sweet words you write, lol. Thank you very much for the compliments. Hope to see you back again.

 

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Go Charlie - of course he is a smart man. It must have been so hard for him to hear what Bella had to say and I was so NOT expecting her to reveal what the Cullens are but I guess when you want to survive you will do anything to do so. I hope Charlie will help but I have a feeling that this will complicate things even further.

Great writing as usual.

Cheers

Michelle

Hi Michelle,

 

You have to love Charlie, but any of us with children being put in a position as he is would do the same I'm sure. Anything to save his little girl. You know something, to be honest here; when I began writing this chapter, I hadn't thought about Bella telling Charlie about the Cullen's, but I closed my eyes and pictured myself being in her shoes and wham, there it was. To Bella in this chapter, she didn't see the point of keeping anything away from Charlie. She wanted to go with a clear head. What's the point of the lies if she would be gone soon.

 

Charlie knowing will complicate things, you are right about that. You think Charlie had issues when he left Bella in New Moon, tell Charlie that the only way his daughter can survive this illness is by her vampire boyfriend saving her aand that he chooses not too and see what happens, LOL. Not good.

 

Thank you Michelle,

 

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I just started reading this and it is so freaking good! Unbelievably sad but good I am so sad that Edward said no and I am hoping that Charlie can change his mind about changing Bella and I love that he took the news of the Cullens so well. I cant wait till later when I can catch up on the rest of what you have already written. for now I have to get some stuff done. Since reading your stories I am slacking hahaha SO WORTH IT!!! lol Cant wait for more!

Hi Danei,

 

It is sad. Any news like this is very sad for anyone and I am sure we all would love to have the option that Bella would have. Oh Charlie has a lot to say in this one, lol. To me, I believe Charlie is smart enough to know that something was off with them, so the news really didn't surprise him all that much. LOL do what you need to do. I can wait, but not sure if you can, LOL. Thanks for reading this as well.

 

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You made Charlie cry!  I can feel the genuine emotion in this chapter. Now everything is on the line. Please update as soon as you can.

Yes Seuqnet,

 

Charlie had to cry in this. Thank you so much...I was so worried that the emotions weren't right. Oh yes everything is on the line. Will Charlie want her to be changes? If so will Edward change her just because Charlie wants him to? Or will Charlie say no to Bella? So mmany different ways this can go. I will update soon.

 

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Liar. You said you were struggling getting this chapter right! It was perfect! But so, so sad. I really hope Bella doesn't die...

Please tell me she doesn't die?

Molz :P

Hi Molly,

 

I did not lie, LOL. I really was worried if it came out right. Sorry sweetie, I cannot say a word about this story except for...does she or doesn't she? LOL...

 

 

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Update now!! I must see what Charlie decides and how he deals with things... Man I hope Edward changes her...

Hi Jesse,

 

I will try and update soon, but I am due to write a chapter for Familiar Strangers, lol. I will write another one to this soon. I promise.

 

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