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Broken Dreams...Sad story. What if Bella had cancer, would Edward change her?

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Hi everyone! So, I have this idea for a story on top of the other one that I am now writing and I wanted an opinion on whether or not anyone would be interested in it? It may not be a very long story as I have it in my head to possibly go to at least ten or fifteen chapters for it. I do have to strongly imply that this will be a very, very, very sad short story. At times it will be difficult to read. This is for a friend of mine that sadly did not survive her fight with the same thing.


In Memory of,


                                                                Diana Harris






Preface:



“I'm so sorry Isabella...”

“It's...Bella...just Bella.”

“You should probably have your father here with you. I should have waited to tell you this until you brought your father into this...”

“No...I...won't...hurt him...this...way.” I couldn't think at the moment. That one word was constant inside my head, haunting my every thought. Leukemia. Acute Leukemia.

“I'm sorry Bella, but as your doctor I have to call your father in. You are only seventeen and right now, it appears that you're in shock and cannot make the best decisions. In regards to your father Bella, there is no reason he shouldn't know about this.”

“This will...devastate him. I can't...tell him. I wouldn't even know how.” How do you tell your own parent that you will die before them? I couldn't do it and I knew it. I knew the doctor was right about my shock. I couldn't even form the onset of tears. I couldn't move a muscle and they began to ache from the stiffness. I was very sure that I couldn't blink. How long did I have? How much time did I have to say goodbye to everyone that I held dear to me? How was I supposed to tell them all? How was I supposed to tell...Edward?


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Okay so just a small portion, but I thought that might be enough to get an idea if anyone would like to read any further. Please leave a comment and let me know if you would like to otherwise I may go ahead and not go any further. Thanks



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LOL I'm different, I hate reading them, but I LOVEEEEE giving them out. I think it's funny when someone goes to my story and says something like "UPDATE NOW OR YOUR PIGEON GETS IT" *Cough* *Mollyy* *Cough* :)))))))) lol
I like the switch between the two points of view, and Edward's point of view includes Alice's, which is also an important one. All and all it leaves us with one big cliffhanger. Please update soon!!!

Hi Seuqnot,

 

Yeah Alice has a way of making sure her POV is front and center even it is meant for someone else, lol. ooh, sorry for the cliffhanger, but it won't be too long beofre I post the next one, I just hope that everyone can wait until then. I will update very late tonight. Thanks for reading.

 

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Don't apologise for the cliffhanger! I think its a clever device. It adds to the suspense and leaves us wanting more. I am looking forward to the next instalment, though!



Below is a link to my very first story I had ever written and I am sure it is full of mistakes, but I thought you might want to take a look. The story is complete, but I still need to add chapters. There are I believe 45 full chapters to be posted, but I wanted to make sure that enough people will read it before posting anymore. Let me know what you think.

 

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http://thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/dreams-re-...

Please post more of the story. It is enchanting and I want to know what happens further on.

Hi Seuqnet,

 

I actually have the next chapter done, but I am waiting on someone to check it over because I am trying to do something in this one that I have never tried before and I have to make sure that it came out good, so if everything goes well, I should be posting soon...hopefully.

 

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Very true Seuqnot, very true. I love suspense myself, lol.

 

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I LOVE UR STORY IT IS VERY GOOD AND SAD KEEP UPDATING PLZ PLZ

Hi Bella loves Edward,

 

Thank you so much. I will keep you updated. Thanks for reading.

 

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Amazing write mor soon and always updae me

Thanks Emmett,

 

I will update soon. Thanks for reading.

 

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